tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post8921572408699532989..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: red of life retreats in a cartgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-11031345127509567382011-09-09T07:37:02.475+05:302011-09-09T07:37:02.475+05:30You write fabulous poetry/stories,
Please check o...You write fabulous poetry/stories,<br /><br />Please check out short story slam week 9 today.<br /><br />Hope to see you around.<br /><br />Best!<br />xoxoxBluebell Books Twitter Clubhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02346482636849975765noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-17737142848268865112011-09-03T21:30:37.821+05:302011-09-03T21:30:37.821+05:30faith is important.
blessings.faith is important.<br /><br />blessings.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-37058303278420271762011-09-03T20:30:54.935+05:302011-09-03T20:30:54.935+05:30Sometimes we just need to take a breath or two or ...Sometimes we just need to take a breath or two or even ten, and I think that's fine. And if this is what writer's block paused to produce - fair trade perhaps. Me, I like this poem very much (so I'll take the gift even if you're not impressed). Some poems too, simply want their own way despite what we think we had in mind.<br /><br />neilneil reidhttp://bearlyaudible.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-15592926714089916252011-09-02T22:46:44.005+05:302011-09-02T22:46:44.005+05:30Tami, how much your poetry has grown. Love this st...Tami, how much your poetry has grown. Love this stanza "he walks on in the rain<br />dark clouds thunder over him<br />his profile blurred now"<br />beautiful work with powerful images.<br /><br /><br />MelanieCassiopeia Riseshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02625091389788114012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-45131588783985954542011-09-02T20:25:02.383+05:302011-09-02T20:25:02.383+05:30Oh, that kindness line is awesome!
I've been ...Oh, that kindness line is awesome!<br /><br />I've been word clogged also this summer. Hate it! But, it's happened before and I know enough to just let it unclog itself. So frustrating, though!Linda Jacobshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09156972661541133665noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-19262830025438126632011-09-02T00:07:57.154+05:302011-09-02T00:07:57.154+05:30love the combination of color and emotion rippling...love the combination of color and emotion rippling just beyond the letters crashing into each other.miss piehttp://pieceofpie.wordpress.com/2011/09/01/ephemeral-eternal/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-64462665352367889702011-09-01T22:05:58.120+05:302011-09-01T22:05:58.120+05:30There is a struggle in this character..an uneasine...There is a struggle in this character..an uneasiness of disappearance perhaps..a brilliant piece though..we all need a little scribbling break now and then..JaeJae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-11046180739155011802011-09-01T20:36:50.118+05:302011-09-01T20:36:50.118+05:30Viv, thanks! It was a mistype but I changed the li...Viv, thanks! It was a mistype but I changed the line!gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-86950164010900436812011-09-01T20:33:11.227+05:302011-09-01T20:33:11.227+05:30I would think this prompt was easier for you as yo...I would think this prompt was easier for you as you always end your pieces with those wonderful slant glances in italics. And again, that last line pulls this whole picture together. Glad to know you are out of the Block. But the drive to write usually finds a way to get to the surface.<br /><br />ElizabethElizabethhttp://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-91135732408767294352011-09-01T20:12:56.312+05:302011-09-01T20:12:56.312+05:30Nicely Gautami, love the bracketed bits!Nicely Gautami, love the bracketed bits!Andy Sewinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14765633868539628820noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-73303648627670924382011-09-01T15:15:26.611+05:302011-09-01T15:15:26.611+05:30A hauntingly beautiful poem. Not a sign of writer...A hauntingly beautiful poem. Not a sign of writer's block! <br /><br />BTW in stanza 2, did you mean "heard by no one" or "unheard by anyone"? Because as written, it means heard by everyone!vivinfrancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07388722600118753457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-36474402392029898912011-09-01T11:52:51.870+05:302011-09-01T11:52:51.870+05:30I agree with Audrey "his kindness muddy under...I agree with Audrey "his kindness muddy under his feet" is brilliant. Even I have felt that at times! I wonder too whether letting go of the wheels did not permit him recover and try again? You are certainly back with a vengeance!Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-38015702425741473702011-09-01T09:34:34.485+05:302011-09-01T09:34:34.485+05:30his mumbles unheard by no one
I love the complexi...his mumbles unheard by no one<br /><br />I love the complexity of that line!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-78924600603986870442011-09-01T09:34:01.175+05:302011-09-01T09:34:01.175+05:30Intriguing. More than a soupcon of mystery in this...Intriguing. More than a soupcon of mystery in this and there's nothing like a red bag to make one wonder.Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-33554228114304964252011-09-01T06:14:37.595+05:302011-09-01T06:14:37.595+05:30your poem reads like a metaphor for
the writers...your poem reads like a metaphor for<br />the writers' block you've gone through.Shaunahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15279846999053851468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-32939681395119001352011-09-01T05:44:35.280+05:302011-09-01T05:44:35.280+05:30Glad you wrote again....nicely done.Glad you wrote again....nicely done.ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-48901544757173876142011-09-01T05:09:28.538+05:302011-09-01T05:09:28.538+05:30I know how it feels, when the words are gone, and ...I know how it feels, when the words are gone, and when the words finally come back.<br />Well done.<br />— K<br /><br />Kay, Alberta, Canada<br />An Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous TravelKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-18436170195709651852011-09-01T03:53:33.456+05:302011-09-01T03:53:33.456+05:30The title and the portrait is intriguing.The title and the portrait is intriguing.irenehttp://enerihot.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-73161632098575099532011-09-01T00:21:59.159+05:302011-09-01T00:21:59.159+05:30perfect phrases,
we all shall know how to manage ...perfect phrases,<br /><br />we all shall know how to manage our mindsets.Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05532576755186051550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-60374198571357185192011-09-01T00:18:31.154+05:302011-09-01T00:18:31.154+05:30Sometimes you just have to sit down and write some...Sometimes you just have to sit down and write something--good or bad. This seems quite good to me. I do belive you're back!<br /><br />My entry for this week: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/28/forever-changed-2/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-71365047994775353522011-08-31T23:42:55.962+05:302011-08-31T23:42:55.962+05:30I'm glad you got rid of the writer's block...I'm glad you got rid of the writer's block. this is a wonderful poem such a lovely picture it paints.Sheilagh Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13741333943021570641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-40288008336107318582011-08-31T23:31:55.342+05:302011-08-31T23:31:55.342+05:30(his kindness muddy under his feet) is wonderful i...(his kindness muddy under his feet) is wonderful imagery. I hope the words keep flowing for you.<br /><br /><a href="http://www.aliceaudrey.com/?page_id=4029" rel="nofollow"> - Alice </a>Alice Audreyhttp://www.aliceaudrey.com/?page_id=4029noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-45441446201216795522011-08-31T23:10:48.076+05:302011-08-31T23:10:48.076+05:30Thank you for your unclogged writers block...
I ca...Thank you for your unclogged writers block...<br />I can clearly see what the form of the prompt looks like. I am new this summer to trying any form other than free form or haiku...<br />Enjoyed reading your post...will be back for more !<br /><br />☮ Siggi in Downeast Mainesiggiofmainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12619003987159808104noreply@blogger.com