Poetry for me is a way of living, it comes out of nowhere and I have to write it down. How I write, what I write, I decide. I am not asking you to be judgemental. I am gifted with the ability to see beyond the obvious.
Pages
▼
Wednesday, June 15, 2011
whispering ocean
trapped in it
whispers of air
prefer to stay put
rivulets of thready thought
grip me
I want to escape
into the endless ocean
"isolated, I let strawberry tickle me
while storms breaks in within, maybe I prefer to be within the stones of time"
I find your words soothing.
ReplyDeleteVery calming.
ReplyDeleteLovely use of the prompts.
*I've nominated you for a blogger award*
http://renthewriter.blogspot.com/2011/06/gobsmacked-blogger-award.html
Great result from combining the two prompts!
ReplyDeletehttp://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/06/15/blessed-connection/
I love this it really calls us to the ocean.
ReplyDeleteSad and lovely.
ReplyDeleteMad Kane
interesting take on sound and words. Like the way they played each other. Thank you for sharing it.
ReplyDeleteVery good - one can smell the ozone and the sea-weed.
ReplyDeleteI love the endless ocean. Very lovely.
ReplyDeleteHi there, check out my blog, I have left something for you there.
ReplyDeleteI love the little strawberry addendum. It conjures up strawberry ice cream in my mind.
ReplyDeletewish for the sea seeing,
ReplyDeletewow.
you have captured the desire of a shell stuck on beach perfectly.
:)
wonderfully written :0
ReplyDeleteAh, the powers of the oceans of the world. Beautifully stated.
ReplyDeleteNamaste..........cj
This has a lovely serenity to it.
ReplyDelete=)
wow. that was beautiful
ReplyDeleteBeing a water person, found this intrigingly lovely.
ReplyDeletebeautifully written
ReplyDeleteVery nice ;-) Looking at that shell and reading your poem...sublime...Peace and blessings
ReplyDeleteThat picture was the perfect illustration for these lovely words.
ReplyDeleteThe ebb and flow of your word crafting always pulls me in...
...and then releases me...
...and I am richer for having been priviledged to read your words.
Thank you.
A+
Simply gorgeous prose...Excellent..."rivulets of thready thought" Love that !!!
ReplyDelete