tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post1364046044897930665..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: timely interventionsgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-18231015831505131472010-07-21T18:48:12.165+05:302010-07-21T18:48:12.165+05:30A thoughtful consideration of Time, Gautami. Cleve...A thoughtful consideration of Time, Gautami. Clever imagery.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00861397533660827678noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-82197931559397751802010-07-17T22:13:03.873+05:302010-07-17T22:13:03.873+05:30'it doesn't believe in vulgar displays/ bu...'it doesn't believe in vulgar displays/ but in doing its own thing at its own pace' A wonderful description.Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-50631616992964946692010-07-17T09:00:41.525+05:302010-07-17T09:00:41.525+05:30Great way to express the benefit of patience over ...Great way to express the benefit of patience over haste.Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-39270458347565410332010-07-17T05:56:43.647+05:302010-07-17T05:56:43.647+05:30When a line grabs me, I tend to lose my breath. I ...When a line grabs me, I tend to lose my breath. I lost mine here on line three -- what an amazing image, Gautami. Beautiful, tangible poem about an intangible substance -- time.Linda Goinhttp://lindagoin.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-37294020787547577602010-07-17T03:20:59.001+05:302010-07-17T03:20:59.001+05:30Thank you. As usual, I find inspiration, connectio...Thank you. As usual, I find inspiration, connections, and possibilities when I read your work. Love your take on the hands of time, but immediately started thinking of the arms of those hands and how often and unwittingly we get caught in them. Really good write,<br /><br />ElizabethElizabethhttp://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-18986295876620786702010-07-16T22:59:24.554+05:302010-07-16T22:59:24.554+05:30Nicely done - I can relate to the obsession with t...Nicely done - I can relate to the obsession with time, both currently passing and the past.mareymercyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03407666873261385487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-45750209733854141952010-07-16T09:39:19.067+05:302010-07-16T09:39:19.067+05:30nicely done Gautami.....got my right brain going.....nicely done Gautami.....got my right brain going...which is sooooooooooo good...thanks for thisWayne Pitchkohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-77995159777264904942010-07-16T07:27:44.617+05:302010-07-16T07:27:44.617+05:30'it doesn't believe in vulgar displays
but...'it doesn't believe in vulgar displays<br />but in doing its own thing at its own pace'<br /><br />A powerful message.<br /><br />As expected, another excellent piece from you Gautami. Thanks.Harshad Mehtahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10747054432059631577noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-50166875005943328892010-07-16T00:02:00.870+05:302010-07-16T00:02:00.870+05:30Gah! Love the personification of Time. Fantastic a...Gah! Love the personification of Time. Fantastic and creative use of the three words.Jennahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02429644082709957839noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-53780210431267186362010-07-15T22:44:55.098+05:302010-07-15T22:44:55.098+05:30WOW!!!! just what I wanted to read!
great take on...WOW!!!! just what I wanted to read!<br /><br />great take on the prompt!<br /><br />do visit mine at <br />http://bit.ly/9JWQ0MDivaa Divinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17457305933584528376noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-1991398453257814802010-07-15T18:33:07.327+05:302010-07-15T18:33:07.327+05:30‘Time’ itself is one of my favorite subjects and I...‘Time’ itself is one of my favorite subjects and I loved this. <br /> <br />-TimTimothy P. Remphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04422296532550497806noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-65900326091224077012010-07-15T17:51:52.806+05:302010-07-15T17:51:52.806+05:30Very nicely handled. Loved the simplicity and the ...Very nicely handled. Loved the simplicity and the profoundness of the words.shailhttp://shailsnest.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-90976054825247045312010-07-15T16:22:45.501+05:302010-07-15T16:22:45.501+05:30so intriguing this piece, time, our most perseve c...so intriguing this piece, time, our most perseve creation ;)Lorrainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14667955555940467301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-12278333636426054872010-07-15T16:20:53.274+05:302010-07-15T16:20:53.274+05:30time can never be an object,
yet we dwell on the w...time can never be an object,<br />yet we dwell on the whys after it has long gone<br /><br />Yes we do and from those whys stem beautiful thoughts and expressions.. keep expressing.. you write beautiful poetry..<br /><br />Do visit my page for 3WW prompts..Ramesh Soodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05589155663544312563noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-28668132450678269792010-07-15T10:33:47.504+05:302010-07-15T10:33:47.504+05:30Lovely -- so evocative and thought-provoking.Lovely -- so evocative and thought-provoking.Thomma Lynhttp://www.thommalyngrindstaff.com/storiesnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-2640067509258813352010-07-15T04:40:57.511+05:302010-07-15T04:40:57.511+05:30ohhh very very good.... i still like the idea of a...ohhh very very good.... i still like the idea of a cartoon i saw way back... time [clock] flying out the window...one more believerhttp://pieceofpie.wordpress.com/2010/07/12/stop/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-77684603400089615882010-07-14T23:45:23.568+05:302010-07-14T23:45:23.568+05:30A wonderful description of the object itself, with...A wonderful description of the object itself, with the last stanza especially thought provoking.<br /><br />-NicoleAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-47597243677309398432010-07-14T23:41:49.465+05:302010-07-14T23:41:49.465+05:30you really came around like the hands of a clock, ...you really came around like the hands of a clock, and left us all pondering time as we live it.Thom Gabrukiewiczhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13286670695334830471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-2943206236397065022010-07-14T23:10:24.331+05:302010-07-14T23:10:24.331+05:30Gautami a beautiful and deep poem!
PamelaGautami a beautiful and deep poem!<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-13009887412563304032010-07-14T22:51:56.360+05:302010-07-14T22:51:56.360+05:30Oh I think this may be a new favorite for me! I l...Oh I think this may be a new favorite for me! I love the comparison of the minute and hour hands :)Dee Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05077141911351737390noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-41963106233544230372010-07-14T22:51:19.205+05:302010-07-14T22:51:19.205+05:30Beautifully deep.Beautifully deep.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-10124558853392206432010-07-14T22:37:09.637+05:302010-07-14T22:37:09.637+05:30Good one Gautami, and I agree with Brenda, the las...Good one Gautami, and I agree with Brenda, the last part of it sends you away thinking.Jay R. Thurstonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12369000584179598973noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-12348751189509112532010-07-14T20:48:50.513+05:302010-07-14T20:48:50.513+05:30Guatami...I love this piece! The last stanza packs...Guatami...I love this piece! The last stanza packs insight that gets me thinking. Well done.brenda whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.com