tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post1374957259673943623..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: chained the presentgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger27125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-77093347197256775362011-10-06T13:53:09.939+05:302011-10-06T13:53:09.939+05:30Dear Gautami
Its lovely... I enjoyed your last li...Dear Gautami<br /><br />Its lovely... I enjoyed your last line ... with you walk the future ... you brought out the best of emotions of taking a call... sometimes we do need to ...<br />"I poured it in that iron chest<br />it will mingle with the past<br />make it a knot of sorts"<br />... our experiences and memories whether it becomes a knot of not... just to be free from it all...<br /><br /><br />Thanks for sharing. Look forward to your entry in the coming poetry picnic week 8 theme “Friends, relationship… ”<br /><br />Shashi<br /><br />ॐ नमः शिवाय<br />Om Namah Shivaya<br />http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/10/whispers-love-and-loss-butterfly.htmlShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-51021404258202712782011-10-04T22:02:49.948+05:302011-10-04T22:02:49.948+05:30Hello.
I like the imagery created here, especially...Hello.<br />I like the imagery created here, especially the opening lines.<br /><br />Really enjoyed reading this.<br /><br />Thanks for sharing.<br /><br /><a rel="nofollow">Thief In The Night</a>The Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00667034322952126127noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-16119286123187425962011-10-04T09:04:18.038+05:302011-10-04T09:04:18.038+05:30Wonderfully written :)
Enjoyed reading it.
Thanks...Wonderfully written :)<br />Enjoyed reading it. <br />Thanks for sharing!Umesh Raohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18162963599486418963noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-84096991897919104922011-10-04T07:53:58.641+05:302011-10-04T07:53:58.641+05:30"...that nightmarish after shave
I totally di..."...that nightmarish after shave<br />I totally dislike,<br />I poured it in that iron chest..."<br /><br />I could smell that after shave! This complex piece is filled with concrete images that make it visual and real. And I love the last line!<br /><br />Namaste.........cjcj Schlottmanhttp://cjschlottman-mypoems.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-38958964861211108942011-10-04T03:36:41.491+05:302011-10-04T03:36:41.491+05:30Wow!
Strong, powerful, really moving... just WOW!Wow!<br />Strong, powerful, really moving... just WOW!Aynsley (Life In Verse)https://www.blogger.com/profile/00039735663195649581noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-61916739626840587092011-10-03T00:20:05.065+05:302011-10-03T00:20:05.065+05:30My take is you are ready to move forward but willi...My take is you are ready to move forward but willing for him to catch up. I wonder how long you'll wait.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-47719726897857630982011-10-02T20:04:40.162+05:302011-10-02T20:04:40.162+05:30Very expressive and thoughtful. Absolutely loved t...Very expressive and thoughtful. Absolutely loved the last part!Laura Mariahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17165700659874093849noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-58286170079254524352011-10-02T19:12:57.944+05:302011-10-02T19:12:57.944+05:30Ah ... regifting ;). I always enjoy reading your ...Ah ... regifting ;). I always enjoy reading your work. I remember you from Gather.Liz Rice-Sosnehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14705708193546909432noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-17342443718421460402011-10-02T18:03:56.902+05:302011-10-02T18:03:56.902+05:30What an idea, GT! :-)What an idea, GT! :-)indiwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01869142617068567153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-20459972043156419042011-10-02T17:53:00.156+05:302011-10-02T17:53:00.156+05:30clever play on words with layers ...clever play on words with layers ...Isabel Doylehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17974989548030799086noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-1402349386670309992011-09-29T20:30:55.169+05:302011-09-29T20:30:55.169+05:30Beautifully written. Abs loved it.Beautifully written. Abs loved it.Short Poemshttp://marinelareka.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-60479328275026776962011-09-29T19:33:41.340+05:302011-09-29T19:33:41.340+05:30I will add a card or two,
And present the present ...I will add a card or two,<br />And present the present to you....beautifulJANUhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06983287092498427967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-91381840378358171222011-09-29T18:26:44.745+05:302011-09-29T18:26:44.745+05:30It seems that you can't make up your mind:)It seems that you can't make up your mind:)Rallentandanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-75780611659911429732011-09-29T17:53:36.248+05:302011-09-29T17:53:36.248+05:30loved it. very powerful with an interesting twist....loved it. very powerful with an interesting twist.Celestial Dreamzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11665499902779022498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-57837227912794912752011-09-29T12:07:15.202+05:302011-09-29T12:07:15.202+05:30Reading this poem is a pleasure for me.
And a ple...Reading this poem is a pleasure for me.<br /><br />And a pleasure that does not cease surprising me, how it progresses, how it evaporates, then leaves something new in my hand to see and sense. Yet through it all, the poem speaks like an old friend, or brother or sister, close that way. Thank you.<br /><br />neilneil reidhttp://bearlyaudible.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-56041260134543374552011-09-29T06:44:19.074+05:302011-09-29T06:44:19.074+05:30an interesting twist on dealing with the past whil...an interesting twist on dealing with the past while looking ahead to the future. I liked it :)Sheilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06541409754494611831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-85125076822591579972011-09-29T05:49:32.526+05:302011-09-29T05:49:32.526+05:30I love that mingle line as well. Scents don't...I love that mingle line as well. Scents don't keep to themselves, do they. Nor do our memories. Thank you for participating in this prompt.Yousei Himehttp://tasmith1122.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-15817420406501626412011-09-29T04:42:19.455+05:302011-09-29T04:42:19.455+05:30Memories remain memories despite much dislike.Some...Memories remain memories despite much dislike.Some are good and some are bad memories. Agree with you. Just looking forward and keep the good. Beautiful verse!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-478135271794447952011-09-29T02:54:29.177+05:302011-09-29T02:54:29.177+05:30Gautami, some memories are better left in the past...Gautami, some memories are better left in the past. Nicely done.<br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-6193764452696695972011-09-29T00:35:34.450+05:302011-09-29T00:35:34.450+05:30Ha! Reminds me of a friend who tossed her couches ...Ha! Reminds me of a friend who tossed her couches after a divorce because they smelled like her ex. Love the "present the present" line.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-89545367438127687572011-09-28T23:25:16.309+05:302011-09-28T23:25:16.309+05:30Any thing which leads to holding hands seems good ...Any thing which leads to holding hands seems good to me. :)Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-58328207788487531392011-09-28T23:14:06.270+05:302011-09-28T23:14:06.270+05:30I love the idea of making a knot with the past. Ca...I love the idea of making a knot with the past. Can't ever totally get ride of it, though, can you?Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-20414407130262719742011-09-28T16:46:56.744+05:302011-09-28T16:46:56.744+05:30You evoked a relationship without telling us how y...You evoked a relationship without telling us how you felt, but your images let us know...Marianvhttp://marianv.blog.co.uknoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-31419264592099863032011-09-28T16:18:12.298+05:302011-09-28T16:18:12.298+05:30great homonym poem. Did you not like him?great homonym poem. Did you not like him?vivinfrancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07388722600118753457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-20535330361933589342011-09-28T09:10:09.460+05:302011-09-28T09:10:09.460+05:30the waiting for you in the end made me smile...we ...the waiting for you in the end made me smile...we carry a bit of our past, a bit of our present as we look forward...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com