tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post1529744450324475356..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: prickly pinesgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-12081758583083733862011-05-30T01:46:47.383+05:302011-05-30T01:46:47.383+05:30Powerful. Strong. Multi-faceted. Amazing.
Wo...Powerful. Strong. Multi-faceted. Amazing.<br /><br />Wow. Love your visualization.Jennyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12462124067637610359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-75271628102999788472011-05-18T19:26:23.948+05:302011-05-18T19:26:23.948+05:30Excellent poem !
I love how you brought nature in...Excellent poem ! <br />I love how you brought nature in to represent mood of the piece.<br />Brimming with emotion, tension and a sense of happiness at some future time ! ( I have to hope it will be so...)Nonnahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03227580166409342214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-47918640354613382412011-05-16T03:47:03.909+05:302011-05-16T03:47:03.909+05:30A very visual and moving poem!~AmesA very visual and moving poem!~AmesAmeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15074479473400202674noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-80524851418478926022011-05-15T22:51:56.813+05:302011-05-15T22:51:56.813+05:30opportunity nicely achieved ...opportunity nicely achieved ...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14393200020461156010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-75583068408822966672011-05-15T15:36:51.637+05:302011-05-15T15:36:51.637+05:30Strong sensations, and a carrying away to a magica...Strong sensations, and a carrying away to a magical space.Porkyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00604351052444947490noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-91699602864503784722011-05-15T14:12:25.831+05:302011-05-15T14:12:25.831+05:30It works for me. Good rhythm.It works for me. Good rhythm.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-52267279372587152592011-05-15T11:49:32.642+05:302011-05-15T11:49:32.642+05:30This was my favorite part:
hush little baby, don&...This was my favorite part:<br /><br />hush little baby, don't you cry<br />this isn't goodbye, this isn't goodbye<br /><br />Really nice.<br /><br />=)Susan Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16049586085703324088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-42510882918967332612011-05-15T10:02:51.550+05:302011-05-15T10:02:51.550+05:30This was really rich. I especially like "This...This was really rich. I especially like "This isn't goodbye. This isn't goodbye." Very powerful.<br />xoRobynRawknrobyn.blogspot.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15997241410192066577noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-8198139747707391242011-05-15T05:01:14.851+05:302011-05-15T05:01:14.851+05:30I agree with Andy. I like that repetition within ...I agree with Andy. I like that repetition within such a strong piece.Judiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02778815502961000469noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-25074261337180868592011-05-15T04:55:29.482+05:302011-05-15T04:55:29.482+05:30Wow! very interesting poetry...well done! Peace an...Wow! very interesting poetry...well done! Peace and blessingsjeff campbellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17775235800381700596noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-38758040914312623512011-05-15T04:00:42.400+05:302011-05-15T04:00:42.400+05:30I love the goodbye repetition, and there's an ...I love the goodbye repetition, and there's an 'other world' feeling coming through strongly.<br /><br /><3Andy Sewinahttp://properjoes.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-59164202930024799962011-05-15T03:11:40.209+05:302011-05-15T03:11:40.209+05:30Great poem, strong ending!Great poem, strong ending!Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-54537429184091834152011-05-15T02:40:07.598+05:302011-05-15T02:40:07.598+05:30Yes, great imagery in this.Yes, great imagery in this.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-39031533879208451862011-05-15T02:37:21.802+05:302011-05-15T02:37:21.802+05:30LOvely write.
Anna :o]LOvely write.<br /><br />Anna :o]Anna :o]http://hypercryptical.blogspot.com/2011/05/obsessive-compulsive-disorder.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-54807184744084380642011-05-15T01:19:23.970+05:302011-05-15T01:19:23.970+05:30Gorgeous poem, Gautami.
PamelaGorgeous poem, Gautami.<br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-68515428074293432942011-05-14T22:27:39.380+05:302011-05-14T22:27:39.380+05:30Beautiful imagery!Beautiful imagery!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17792036091186754290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-12094276103576636262011-05-14T22:11:55.617+05:302011-05-14T22:11:55.617+05:30Whoops! I put Addie's name where mine should ...Whoops! I put Addie's name where mine should have been. I have started a blog for her and am managing it. Sorry for the name confusion. I will link using my name until she is ready to take over....................cjcj Schlottmanhttp://addiesattic.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-9988957140823705372011-05-14T22:08:05.061+05:302011-05-14T22:08:05.061+05:30I certainly agree with Amanda. This poem has grea...I certainly agree with Amanda. This poem has great weight and is filled with concrete images. Well done!<br /><br />Namaste..........cjAddie Duckhttp://addiesattic.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-68980429830955321762011-05-14T21:58:45.735+05:302011-05-14T21:58:45.735+05:30Strong poem. Just like the writer.Strong poem. Just like the writer.Amandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03293649194823360181noreply@blogger.com