tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post1565919553798858361..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: discontentgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger30125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-80622311400366796592012-06-02T20:19:33.570+05:302012-06-02T20:19:33.570+05:30Well done.Well done.Richard Wellshttp://web.mac.com/rwellsrwells/iWeb/RW's%20Bundle%20of%20Hiss/Welcome.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-75612294955685017332012-06-01T08:07:21.747+05:302012-06-01T08:07:21.747+05:30I hope you will pick me . Discontent is such a mi...I hope you will pick me . Discontent is such a mild, but apt title for this hugely angry poem of abuse. It houses the anger. I hope you won't house anything next time.Willowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12144768922185244207noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-10656698516015173682012-06-01T01:57:53.207+05:302012-06-01T01:57:53.207+05:30Hauntingly beautiful!! :-)Hauntingly beautiful!! :-)Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-76796817281402944522012-05-30T05:41:25.694+05:302012-05-30T05:41:25.694+05:30Kudos to the multiple prompts with one well wordle...Kudos to the multiple prompts with one well wordled verse! I'm not sure where the photo came from but I can imagine it in any city where one thinks the distance is too great for anyone else to see in, and yet we get that small glimpse and wonder...<br />My offering is here:<br />http://julesgemsandstuff.blogspot.com/2012/05/lasting-last-laughs-sunday-whirl-58.htmlJuleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00571987715911379165noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-66810221654144538762012-05-30T01:38:46.744+05:302012-05-30T01:38:46.744+05:30Quite simply, gob-smacking!Quite simply, gob-smacking!Helenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13447013188405986054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-8012031879753737472012-05-29T22:53:59.942+05:302012-05-29T22:53:59.942+05:30Delicious dark cold textures here...love it!Delicious dark cold textures here...love it!Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-50008621941769265442012-05-29T18:37:51.431+05:302012-05-29T18:37:51.431+05:30Well done! I loved: "my discontent is drenche...Well done! I loved: "my discontent is drenched with your brittle talk" and "hiding in the barnacles."Mariannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17734900426632493796noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-44158104741788586242012-05-29T11:46:05.955+05:302012-05-29T11:46:05.955+05:30Been a while, but am glad to be back. Also glad to...Been a while, but am glad to be back. Also glad to be reading your words again. You have drawn a clear portrait, able to be easily seen in such a place, living alone.<br /><br />Elizabeth<br />http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/Elizabethhttp://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-36362787883081363652012-05-29T04:29:06.236+05:302012-05-29T04:29:06.236+05:30Truly strong writing, Gautami.
PamelaTruly strong writing, Gautami.<br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-30858179836029273262012-05-29T00:26:22.693+05:302012-05-29T00:26:22.693+05:30Melancholic! But beautifully expressed!
Window to...Melancholic! But beautifully expressed!<br /><a href="http://miracleshappen13.blogspot.in/2012/05/window-to-other-side.html" rel="nofollow">Window to the other side</a>Pranitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15561255344238245261noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-54544098822632442582012-05-28T19:11:19.279+05:302012-05-28T19:11:19.279+05:30Strangely hypnotic merging of subject and object ,...Strangely hypnotic merging of subject and object , Gautami , thanksSilent Otto https://www.blogger.com/profile/00475494332523156366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-9519500688213312102012-05-28T18:28:17.789+05:302012-05-28T18:28:17.789+05:30Lovely images, great wordling!Lovely images, great wordling!Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-74117522520613944532012-05-28T17:43:56.975+05:302012-05-28T17:43:56.975+05:30great images in this poem...picking shadows, hidin...great images in this poem...picking shadows, hiding in the barnacles. Very nicely done!Mary B. Mansfieldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03135589216216151585noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-61528933767571831392012-05-28T17:16:09.589+05:302012-05-28T17:16:09.589+05:30why did you choose to live alone? it is a choice a...why did you choose to live alone? it is a choice and the motives are def worth exploring...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-30692649629786626912012-05-28T14:48:01.273+05:302012-05-28T14:48:01.273+05:30shadows will hover in the periphery
I will pick so...shadows will hover in the periphery<br />I will pick some<br /><br />Lovely thought...Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-29703958833191946382012-05-28T14:06:04.961+05:302012-05-28T14:06:04.961+05:30Wow. You have a way with words. Excellent poem. :)...Wow. You have a way with words. Excellent poem. :)Preeti S.https://www.blogger.com/profile/08367363156339655332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-3836241172710787492012-05-28T13:14:18.629+05:302012-05-28T13:14:18.629+05:30Excellent poem, yes, I too suggest discontent.Excellent poem, yes, I too suggest discontent.Leovihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14970831445283294241noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-50307660539126322102012-05-28T13:11:08.117+05:302012-05-28T13:11:08.117+05:30Beautifully atmospheric and poignant.Beautifully atmospheric and poignant.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-50783929040200088002012-05-28T12:05:41.429+05:302012-05-28T12:05:41.429+05:30I actually saw this a hopeful poem... a hiding fro...I actually saw this a hopeful poem... a hiding from the brittleness and a taking away to the trees a sense of beauty safe from the gloom and brittleness.. but perhaps that was just my own projection.<br /><br />Your poetry is always drenched in imagery and an exquisite command of language. A pleasure as always. thank you :)Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)https://www.blogger.com/profile/15506538737806033824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-71778887099137860032012-05-28T11:20:34.580+05:302012-05-28T11:20:34.580+05:30The picture really does suggest a gloomy disconten...The picture really does suggest a gloomy discontented side of life doesn’t it. And brittle talk? Something we should all be aware of I suspect.Little Nellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11862657943846727987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-52143773443528402092012-05-28T11:00:01.042+05:302012-05-28T11:00:01.042+05:30I love your poem... you made such wonderful images...I love your poem... you made such wonderful images from the wordle prompt. Thank you for visiting my blog.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-23553952518788581312012-05-28T09:11:02.822+05:302012-05-28T09:11:02.822+05:30Incredibly fine take on these prompts!Incredibly fine take on these prompts!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-25764589583222681532012-05-28T08:16:26.974+05:302012-05-28T08:16:26.974+05:30I really love the morphing imagery in your poem. H...I really love the morphing imagery in your poem. Hiding in the barnacles and picking shadows to take to the forest were my favorites. Thank you for sharing this expressive poem, Gautami.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03241402645242821612noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-28270802183333698182012-05-28T07:45:35.138+05:302012-05-28T07:45:35.138+05:30This is like lemons to me. Really sour but useful...This is like lemons to me. Really sour but useful nonetheless. Can be taken and changed when you add something more. Love would be salt or sugar here. I prefer salt on lemons to sugar actually and lemon juice and salt are my salad dressing, making love to the greens. When I was a child, I would salt and suck a lemon half. I think your poem, you add love to the discontent and get a livable life.christopherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04201537517464996231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-61145985912350782492012-05-28T06:49:20.970+05:302012-05-28T06:49:20.970+05:30Awesome read. I think many of us saw darkness in t...Awesome read. I think many of us saw darkness in this painting.Gailhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04219479223227928561noreply@blogger.com