tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post2545043130373706744..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: lined up...gautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger35125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-12190883939749832112011-02-23T05:29:54.953+05:302011-02-23T05:29:54.953+05:30"sunshine enhances the depths of darkness&quo..."sunshine enhances the depths of darkness"... very true and a great bit in this eerie piece.Jameshttp://coyotemercury.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-51568739084089318422011-02-15T23:16:36.178+05:302011-02-15T23:16:36.178+05:30I love the "crumbled powder of blankness"...I love the "crumbled powder of blankness" and the surprising twist at the end!Erin Davishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03428693832930474044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-65030248858357218332011-02-15T01:32:28.803+05:302011-02-15T01:32:28.803+05:30This makes me feel very uneasy!This makes me feel very uneasy!Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-88086508012158839822011-02-15T00:20:41.479+05:302011-02-15T00:20:41.479+05:30quite a chilling 55, Gautami.. in all its innocenc...quite a chilling 55, Gautami.. in all its innocence, it sure made me ponder deep!! <br />Sometimes, the most mundane of landscapes present the most creative of imaginations!Kavitahttp://kavisionz.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-44241250697073170522011-02-13T10:54:25.831+05:302011-02-13T10:54:25.831+05:30Enigmatic!Enigmatic!irenehttp://enerihot.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-45272824787531908342011-02-13T09:06:43.034+05:302011-02-13T09:06:43.034+05:30This poem has a beautiful flow to it. I liked hea...This poem has a beautiful flow to it. I liked hearing the inner thoughts of the narrator, and at the end I wonder if the question is about the head hunters or the hunted?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-63422637147175208402011-02-13T06:43:20.242+05:302011-02-13T06:43:20.242+05:30Isn't that what we do when we meet someone, me...Isn't that what we do when we meet someone, mentally rub the walls, trying to get in, and then making our own pictures from spoken words? Love the feelings in this one,<br /><br />ElizabethElizabethhttp://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-25952797579722828412011-02-13T05:58:40.540+05:302011-02-13T05:58:40.540+05:30Those last lines, they could be read some many way...Those last lines, they could be read some many waysCathyhttp://www.thequietone.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-43158441517092343242011-02-13T00:24:18.128+05:302011-02-13T00:24:18.128+05:30Really interesting poem, mysterious and scary one....Really interesting poem, mysterious and scary one. So nicely written!<br />All the best<br />Marinela xShort poemshttp://www.marinelareka.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-16456840869348614912011-02-12T23:36:48.814+05:302011-02-12T23:36:48.814+05:30Oh! I would never have guessed. Nice piece!Oh! I would never have guessed. Nice piece!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-87394277932577302712011-02-12T21:05:44.760+05:302011-02-12T21:05:44.760+05:30This was such a cool read. I did not expect the e...This was such a cool read. I did not expect the ending, but really enjoyed it!RJ Clarkenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03018296461199649445noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-83483880618446035112011-02-12T21:03:37.216+05:302011-02-12T21:03:37.216+05:30Pretty certain it isn't what you intended, but...Pretty certain it isn't what you intended, but I like the idea of the dog saying that last bit. "what ails them?", indeed.barbarahttp://catsdetour.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-38513250303265943362011-02-12T20:42:19.908+05:302011-02-12T20:42:19.908+05:30you've made me wonder more about this mysterio...you've made me wonder more about this mysterious house. nice magging!Everyday Goddesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00486528297252417282noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-9480737613806847812011-02-12T19:33:50.361+05:302011-02-12T19:33:50.361+05:30Loved the feeling of mystery left behind.Loved the feeling of mystery left behind.Philip Thrifthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03021615111948806998noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-40828038871340829502011-02-12T18:36:27.681+05:302011-02-12T18:36:27.681+05:30Nicely done, Gautami. Happy you're still writi...Nicely done, Gautami. Happy you're still writing...Rethabilehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03523368313680103826noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-36873130643251415972011-02-12T12:53:44.858+05:302011-02-12T12:53:44.858+05:30A little spooky, all those secrets within!A little spooky, all those secrets within!Gerry/Strummed wordshttp://strummedwords.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-90476265176599365272011-02-12T12:20:48.689+05:302011-02-12T12:20:48.689+05:30Very evocative and mysterious.Very evocative and mysterious.Madeleine Begun Kanehttp://www.madkane.com/humor_blog/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-42894416697626647542011-02-12T10:22:20.893+05:302011-02-12T10:22:20.893+05:30I like the feel here -- but the last lines are in ...I like the feel here -- but the last lines are in quotations, who is speaking these words? <br /> What ails the headhunters or the heads? <br />"crumbled powder of blankness" is a neat description thought.Strangerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09740116535206060176noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-28494916427846408082011-02-12T10:08:22.897+05:302011-02-12T10:08:22.897+05:30It seemed like a nice little house in the winter s...It seemed like a nice little house in the winter snow - then, all of a sudden you took that mysterious turn!!<br /><br />My 55 is at:<br /><br />http://rnsane.blogspot.com/2011/02/friday-flash-55-happy-valentines-day.htmlRNSANEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02841873957894861725noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-83403192803276355452011-02-12T09:17:31.955+05:302011-02-12T09:17:31.955+05:30Great ending!Great ending!mareymercyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03407666873261385487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-47568846155361537902011-02-12T08:41:35.816+05:302011-02-12T08:41:35.816+05:30goodness what must lurk inside...goodness what must lurk inside...limehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17259558876349307173noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-59658989638024714732011-02-12T01:15:22.794+05:302011-02-12T01:15:22.794+05:30Liked the twist and the bizarre ending...I'm t...Liked the twist and the bizarre ending...I'm thinking portraits of ancestors dripping cobwebs...nice magpie/55 combination.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-42771328890536450832011-02-12T01:00:58.371+05:302011-02-12T01:00:58.371+05:30I love mysterious houses!
Nice 55. :)I love mysterious houses!<br /><br />Nice 55. :)Akelamaluhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11234268568845148285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-45684651926418518702011-02-12T00:40:37.546+05:302011-02-12T00:40:37.546+05:30Quite the mystery.Quite the mystery.Monkey Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06741294113777908130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-38771362309940983602011-02-12T00:37:10.476+05:302011-02-12T00:37:10.476+05:30I can't seem to shake the idea of the kind of ...I can't seem to shake the idea of the kind of headhunters that find you a new job. Twisted, I know.Alice Audreyhttp://www.aliceaudrey.com/?page_id=4029noreply@blogger.com