tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post2721127695715401540..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: Patterned Dreams---terzanellegautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-66536294529039066942009-04-20T22:50:00.000+05:302009-04-20T22:50:00.000+05:30All of your terzanelles were really nice and fun t...All of your terzanelles were really nice and fun to read but, it was the first one I commented on that I liked the best. And, I agree with everyone else your form is impeccable. You can certainly write well within structure as you can with free verse. Well done. Have a nice day.poefusionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15157059633840032305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-10953146519345935212008-02-05T01:20:00.000+05:302008-02-05T01:20:00.000+05:30This is a structure I have yet to try. Thanks for ...This is a structure I have yet to try. Thanks for introducing it to me.<BR/><BR/>I enjoyed the way this was like a walk through someone's subconcious wishes- their hopes and dreams and desires.writerwomanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07645753712657412094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-28091198379310944122007-05-11T16:44:00.000+05:302007-05-11T16:44:00.000+05:30I love how you are constantly trying new structure...I love how you are constantly trying new structures and taking your poetry to new levels, beautifully done, Gautami!Lotus Readshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02081192215823615529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-83182428502933949482007-05-11T08:50:00.000+05:302007-05-11T08:50:00.000+05:30Oh what a terzanelle you weave on the Web!Oh what a terzanelle you weave on the Web!Romeo Morningwoodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10826410608415260786noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-20789668817277743692007-05-11T08:46:00.000+05:302007-05-11T08:46:00.000+05:30Thanks to you all. I feel humbled when you say you...Thanks to you all. I feel humbled when you say you learn new forms from my blog. I am always looking for new things to learn. So I turn to poetry as there is so much to learn in here- forms, structures and nuances. <BR/><BR/>Writing a structure is not as important as relating it with concrete things. I do not prefer to write abstract. I want to write something most can relate. <BR/><BR/>I do not even like to write about the "I". <BR/><BR/>As a very dear friend Stanley Shiel, suggested, one has to think in that form first before attempting anything it it. I am grateful for his advisegautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-25378897294019426492007-05-11T01:51:00.000+05:302007-05-11T01:51:00.000+05:30Oh you are so clever to take on these various form...Oh you are so clever to take on these various forms. You inspire me to learn more about the styles, so I can feel more confident in my own writing. Well done.strausshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10277562911746970978noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-1433807669715888532007-05-11T00:45:00.000+05:302007-05-11T00:45:00.000+05:30Gautami -This is a challenging structure of poetry...Gautami -<BR/><BR/>This is a challenging structure of poetry, but you "threaded" it together quite beautifully.<BR/><BR/>Very lyrical. <BR/><BR/>"...dreams form in beautiful patterns tail of silken thread following..."<BR/><BR/>I absolutely love this passage above. It is exquisite, and pleasure to read.<BR/><BR/>Well done!Rob Kistnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11365982588165098990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-88997098848330116802007-05-10T17:18:00.000+05:302007-05-10T17:18:00.000+05:30This was new to me also. You and Floots are educat...This was new to me also. You and Floots are educating me on structured poetry. Not brave enough to try it, yet.Pat Paulkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03673667238840127360noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-75263102624988364482007-05-10T09:59:00.000+05:302007-05-10T09:59:00.000+05:30wut a colorful verse on dreams n hopes!Keshi.wut a colorful verse on dreams n hopes!<BR/><BR/>Keshi.Keshihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17147250771662427208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-52631934737610747982007-05-10T07:59:00.000+05:302007-05-10T07:59:00.000+05:30Always a pleasure to see you experimenting with fo...Always a pleasure to see you experimenting with form and adapting sometimes exotic forms to familiar themes of daily experience.Billhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10717622168200846486noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-68352712902336262952007-05-10T00:58:00.000+05:302007-05-10T00:58:00.000+05:30I decided I could do this-not as well as you did, ...I decided I could do this-not as well as you did, but that I could at least try and I did. I have posted it.Clockworkchrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09889793842709699969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-56344512639111744382007-05-10T00:31:00.000+05:302007-05-10T00:31:00.000+05:30you are an amazing poetress! like other's commente...you are an amazing poetress! like other's commented... I learn something new each time i visit!Kindnesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03424710039883911915noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-64280329198859546092007-05-10T00:29:00.000+05:302007-05-10T00:29:00.000+05:30impressive!you really excel at structured poetry!impressive!<BR/>you really excel at structured poetry!polonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12631341810150848122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-92117320485565912342007-05-09T19:51:00.000+05:302007-05-09T19:51:00.000+05:30how did you do it, gautami? the structured verses,...how did you do it, gautami? the structured verses, i mean.<BR/>i'm still throwing away half-done villanelles.dsnake1https://www.blogger.com/profile/08724264906690080704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-55010296526553357722007-05-09T16:41:00.000+05:302007-05-09T16:41:00.000+05:30I finally got here. I analyzed it before I read i...I finally got here. I analyzed it before I read it to make sure I could duplicate the structure and wasn't missing anything. I assume there is no rule about syllables, that makes me much more comfortable. I have written many poems that follow the aba, bcb, cdc, format but never had the quatrain ending. This was really good and a fun read. I must admit like everyone else, I don't strive to learn about poetry and your page does present so many new ideas on how to write in different fashions. I always just called everything a poem. I agree with Rose that I have never read more poetry that was purposely structured and ended up as great as yours.Clockworkchrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09889793842709699969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-60044075943080897182007-05-09T15:50:00.000+05:302007-05-09T15:50:00.000+05:30I don't think I've read better structured poetry t...I don't think I've read better structured poetry than yours Gautami. It flows so beautifully.<BR/><BR/>Rose<BR/><BR/>xoAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-55417341255189676632007-05-09T15:28:00.000+05:302007-05-09T15:28:00.000+05:30I agree with Sage, with every poem of yours I lear...I agree with Sage, with every poem of yours I learn something new. I don't think I'd heard of a Terzanelle before, rather like I hadn't heard of a Villanelle. <BR/>I was studying your structure and rhyme sequence. It's pretty impressive what you have crafted here. My only suggestion would have been to try a little more alliteration purely due to the subject matter. Silk and dreams lend themselves to s-s-s-s and w-w-w-w (for example) repeated sounds. <BR/><BR/>'...accouterments desired...'<BR/>Wonderful!<BR/><BR/>You are a poetic siren! In other words you have tempted me into trying one now. :pBeamanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10516397458228874124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-38989758869308594942007-05-09T14:40:00.000+05:302007-05-09T14:40:00.000+05:30you're making me jealousi keep meaning to try a se...you're making me jealous<BR/>i keep meaning to try a sestina<BR/>but then never doing it<BR/>it's the haibun for me at present<BR/>thank youflootshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01530734765701940680noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-71760565756604690832007-05-09T08:23:00.000+05:302007-05-09T08:23:00.000+05:30I really enjoy your poetry! Always something new. ...I really enjoy your poetry! Always something new. :)J. Andrew Lockharthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12567156257114496618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-7507635386671515922007-05-09T06:09:00.000+05:302007-05-09T06:09:00.000+05:30nice--I'm learning more about poetry from your blo...nice--I'm learning more about poetry from your blog than anywhere--but then it was never something I studied. thanks for the insightsagehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17499891950639742366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-7684228772682200582007-05-09T00:18:00.000+05:302007-05-09T00:18:00.000+05:30embroidery of dreams!All sewn up!embroidery of dreams!<BR/><BR/>All sewn up!Stevehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16715829842292110540noreply@blogger.com