tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post3586422444486426606..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: weeks trample on each other like magazinesgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger46125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-20617804885037530472009-09-03T20:11:07.326+05:302009-09-03T20:11:07.326+05:30the end lines are so intriguingthe end lines are so intriguingDeLihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15795530327579458125noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-54123216673116912562009-09-01T20:53:45.370+05:302009-09-01T20:53:45.370+05:30Hi~ I loved the line "days trample on each o...Hi~ I loved the line "days trample on each other like magazines" Your poem was haunting and mysterious. Have a wonderful school year!Pattihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04993186190720192589noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-39136320063975332162009-09-01T06:23:36.156+05:302009-09-01T06:23:36.156+05:30Nice images - particularly fond of magazines tramp...Nice images - particularly fond of magazines trampling on each other and the giving back ... -Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-68169125907647371892009-08-31T21:15:30.644+05:302009-08-31T21:15:30.644+05:30Indeed - cake walk! Your poetry collection is just...Indeed - cake walk! Your poetry collection is just awesome!!!Anya Padyamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05292308457359940182noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-41836833137695929762009-08-31T21:03:25.409+05:302009-08-31T21:03:25.409+05:30Gautami, this is beautiful. I especially like this...Gautami, this is beautiful. I especially like this line, "filled with deep buzzing where words merge into images".Rigelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11343372542010548507noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-47766036054853036382009-08-31T11:22:15.096+05:302009-08-31T11:22:15.096+05:30Beautiful! Intriguing, yet, comes with a rather &q...Beautiful! Intriguing, yet, comes with a rather "knowing" feeling.. You have such a splendid way with words..The Dark Lordhttp://darklordreturns.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-38967505461823508852009-08-31T09:55:39.037+05:302009-08-31T09:55:39.037+05:30weeks and day, hours and minutes, pile one on top ...weeks and day, hours and minutes, pile one on top of the next. Great piece! <a href="http://miztlee.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow"><br />Spirithelpers</a>Tammie Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09018402134070834516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-59364227011990313232009-08-31T07:51:14.213+05:302009-08-31T07:51:14.213+05:30The line "I have not learned to notice your p...The line "I have not learned to notice your presence" really struck me..<br />I will be conscious of this in all my relationships:)<br />Thanks for the reminder.Divinedesignhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07242436562984837153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-58353962961699945172009-08-31T04:52:48.591+05:302009-08-31T04:52:48.591+05:30coming late to the poetry party, I'm left like...coming late to the poetry party, I'm left like everyone else, with questions. That for me is a beautiful thing here - everyone has their own questions and walks away thinking. Whether poetry or any other use of words, that is a gift in and of itself.Dee Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05077141911351737390noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-90196084891097429762009-08-31T04:48:09.226+05:302009-08-31T04:48:09.226+05:30are you describing rest? a soul? a memory? great s...are you describing rest? a soul? a memory? great stuff!Jennifer Hickshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18351458993630972607noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-90618749589253245172009-08-31T04:35:40.207+05:302009-08-31T04:35:40.207+05:30Proof of your creativity and gift: that it was a &...Proof of your creativity and gift: that it was a "cake walk" for you.Patois42https://www.blogger.com/profile/07764936858778730692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-14834785269453983072009-08-31T01:34:19.423+05:302009-08-31T01:34:19.423+05:30i like how you brought the title into the piece......i like how you brought the title into the piece...quin brownehttp://www.quinbrowne-words.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-70573239415059735092009-08-30T23:35:52.992+05:302009-08-30T23:35:52.992+05:30as always your depictions are so vivid !as always your depictions are so vivid !ifhttp://www.wordiminuta.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-11047265255747691882009-08-30T23:13:32.989+05:302009-08-30T23:13:32.989+05:30poet emeritus ?
shouldn't that be poet laurea...poet emeritus ?<br /><br />shouldn't that be poet laureate ! ..zoya gautamnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-20377085723051899092009-08-30T23:03:14.341+05:302009-08-30T23:03:14.341+05:30.. reminded of sahir ludhanvi's couplet( poet ..... reminded of sahir ludhanvi's couplet( poet emeritus urdu, --coarsely translated as under ) _<br /><br />" what realizations and disasters the world gives to me<br /><br />it is that which i return back in my poetry "<br /><br />ur sensitive writing is good to read .. thanks for sharing it..zoya gautamhttp://horizonnext.blogspot.com/2009/08/blue-osi.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-9436383904340425282009-08-30T21:05:20.407+05:302009-08-30T21:05:20.407+05:30For some reason this poem made me think of a time ...For some reason this poem made me think of a time when it was so hard for me to wait to get photos developed.<br /><br />I enjoyed the visuals you displayed in this poem.Maggiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02023472067047797430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-81592749613358757572009-08-30T19:53:13.060+05:302009-08-30T19:53:13.060+05:30Beautiful poem - I love the last lines.
Have a gr...Beautiful poem - I love the last lines.<br /><br />Have a great week!<br />AnnaVita Stunderhttp://vitastunder.blogspot.com/2009/08/blue.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-15891930257329579972009-08-30T18:41:12.509+05:302009-08-30T18:41:12.509+05:30A very beautiful poem. It's very powerful, esp...A very beautiful poem. It's very powerful, especially the last lines.Jane Doehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11087464056692451751noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-16765024600378704362009-08-30T18:19:28.974+05:302009-08-30T18:19:28.974+05:30I love the second line - I got an immediate image ...I love the second line - I got an immediate image and it drove the poem forward.Pamhttp://coosacreek.org/amputated/2009/08/30/vigil-in-the-waste-land/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-57203549953494270242009-08-30T17:32:00.366+05:302009-08-30T17:32:00.366+05:30I too enjoyed this and the very strong ending. The...I too enjoyed this and the very strong ending. The temporary yet deep emotions tug on my heart.SandyCarlsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752798823532580733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-81460440881427605122009-08-30T11:28:44.046+05:302009-08-30T11:28:44.046+05:30Beautiful feeling! Waiting for an invisible memory...Beautiful feeling! Waiting for an invisible memory! A little like waiting for the legendary blue moon! Fascinating!Gemma Wisemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-28441261011395083102009-08-30T11:21:17.133+05:302009-08-30T11:21:17.133+05:30The last three lines summed this up beautifully, a...The last three lines summed this up beautifully, and pulled at my heart string.Amias (ljm and liquidplastic)https://www.blogger.com/profile/14722413697537828830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-41441382660791425112009-08-30T11:02:48.992+05:302009-08-30T11:02:48.992+05:30Such ache in the last three lines!Such ache in the last three lines!spacedlawhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12462723005560128474noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-8339280866605418912009-08-30T10:48:49.089+05:302009-08-30T10:48:49.089+05:30Hey G.T, been there, done that. Mrs. Jim came int...Hey G.T, been there, done that. Mrs. Jim came into the room the other day and I missed her entrance entirely. <br />Those magazines stack up fast, don't they. Newspapers too! <br />..Jimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-69034369983081569502009-08-30T10:13:16.974+05:302009-08-30T10:13:16.974+05:30I really like this!!I really like this!!J. Andrew Lockharthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12567156257114496618noreply@blogger.com