tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post4533981617572579707..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: blowing over that mug of coffeegautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger41125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-88982815430796754872009-08-31T17:54:57.969+05:302009-08-31T17:54:57.969+05:30Good one gautami.
My fav lines being:
"abando...Good one gautami.<br />My fav lines being:<br />"abandon her, he just couldn't"<br />Something so must, but so impossible.<br /><br /><a href="http://maglomaniacs-chaos.blogspot.com/2009/08/be-my-enemy.html" rel="nofollow">Be my enemy</a><br /><br /><a href="http://maglomaniacs-chaos.blogspot.com/2009/08/rams-reality-is-it-this-what-we-really.html" rel="nofollow">Ram's Reality:Is this what we need to answer</a><br /><br />~Harshamaglomaniachttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11960445338745677162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-24611924046957508412009-08-30T02:12:52.372+05:302009-08-30T02:12:52.372+05:30Great imagery full of strong emotions. Excellent w...Great imagery full of strong emotions. Excellent writing with a superb ending Guatami.Janice Thomsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02506920585319893814noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-26405628221852911822009-08-29T20:04:06.520+05:302009-08-29T20:04:06.520+05:30Well done. I really like the final couplet.Well done. I really like the final couplet.Nathanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11552467037640904091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-7777460498345827122009-08-29T06:31:17.486+05:302009-08-29T06:31:17.486+05:30Lol, you could make it a laundry poem to match the...Lol, you could make it a laundry poem to match the prompt if he's folding her laundry while he thinks this..Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-33836225220252436592009-08-29T02:19:36.379+05:302009-08-29T02:19:36.379+05:30The last two lines draw everything together powerf...The last two lines draw everything together powerfully. They weren't what I expected but after reading them I couldn't imagine the poem ending any other way.EKSwitajhttp://www.elizabethkateswitaj.net/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-4864446053164777622009-08-29T01:29:11.232+05:302009-08-29T01:29:11.232+05:30A simple scene, a short piece that reveals so much...A simple scene, a short piece that reveals so much. I also like the image disappearing in the coffee. Well done.Raven's Wing Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08576438868694047958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-68037244148152565822009-08-28T20:29:07.219+05:302009-08-28T20:29:07.219+05:30u paint quite a picture with ur images! :)u paint quite a picture with ur images! :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-73426845598960016392009-08-28T10:39:19.347+05:302009-08-28T10:39:19.347+05:30Wonderful imagery.Wonderful imagery.Stan Skihttp://says-sir-ten.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-31201815588362400022009-08-28T07:08:47.264+05:302009-08-28T07:08:47.264+05:30This poem is so real. It's how my brain works ...This poem is so real. It's how my brain works when I am surmising a situation.... I like the way you expressed the concern and the worry. I also like the way you talked about whether it was worth the aggrevation. A concise, accurate reflection of life. Thanks for sharing and visiting me.=DAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03241402645242821612noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-28275510525451055102009-08-28T04:40:49.537+05:302009-08-28T04:40:49.537+05:30No happy end at the truck stop. But a piece of wri...No happy end at the truck stop. But a piece of writing which could be the beginning of a novel.<br /><br />Best wishes<br />RalfRalf Brökerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08602494065251750620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-71446974294325526902009-08-28T04:02:30.803+05:302009-08-28T04:02:30.803+05:30Loved this! I almost felt like I was in that shop...Loved this! I almost felt like I was in that shop, drinking that coffee! Well done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-38050589816204936522009-08-28T03:30:26.516+05:302009-08-28T03:30:26.516+05:30A beautiful snapshot of a small moment which stret...A beautiful snapshot of a small moment which stretches out in both directions. Well done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-24412809258151301542009-08-28T01:07:18.395+05:302009-08-28T01:07:18.395+05:30I like how the poem's tone and size fit its su...I like how the poem's tone and size fit its subject, fleeting and meditative.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-68398366089285848132009-08-28T00:45:14.925+05:302009-08-28T00:45:14.925+05:30Emotionally captivating!Emotionally captivating!Tammy Brierlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14673290512175050093noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-87311264816856129182009-08-27T23:41:26.727+05:302009-08-27T23:41:26.727+05:30I like the way you capture a very simple scene tha...I like the way you capture a very simple scene that's filled with such emotion. Great images.Francis Scudellarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01008685302028451297noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-55918970974824103192009-08-27T22:44:54.308+05:302009-08-27T22:44:54.308+05:30sounds mysterious, like a fantasy or a fleeting th...sounds mysterious, like a fantasy or a fleeting thoughtlissahttp://www.justwritingwords.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-41550225019842953022009-08-27T22:24:45.819+05:302009-08-27T22:24:45.819+05:30oh the things that go through our minds during tha...oh the things that go through our minds during that first cup!Tamrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08016702051457729026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-8418675069592050912009-08-27T22:07:25.669+05:302009-08-27T22:07:25.669+05:30Hi Gautami,
"he watched her image vanish wit...Hi Gautami,<br /><br />"he watched her image vanish within the coffee<br />even though her reality was palpable beside him"<br /><br />Great words those!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00861397533660827678noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-75318841908619179232009-08-27T21:33:07.614+05:302009-08-27T21:33:07.614+05:30Everything you do is just so good it amazes me! I...Everything you do is just so good it amazes me! I especially liked the line "her stillness troubled him to no end". I can sense another poem just through that one line...Cynthia Shorthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12386358503730817278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-71153260129512263562009-08-27T20:24:10.994+05:302009-08-27T20:24:10.994+05:30I'm new to your work, and I look forward to re...I'm new to your work, and I look forward to reading more. This ex-trucker is a recurring character, then? Very absorbing poem.Sandra Leighhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12052047359365369942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-64955049846093517052009-08-27T19:36:38.278+05:302009-08-27T19:36:38.278+05:30Nice image of ambivalence in a cup of coffee!Nice image of ambivalence in a cup of coffee!Paul Oakleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17426789386840488470noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-44147887002980962552009-08-27T16:51:12.391+05:302009-08-27T16:51:12.391+05:30We think about a lot of things over a cup of coffe...We think about a lot of things over a cup of coffee or tea.<br /><br />Well done.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18119718461267453386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-60787387564167786632009-08-27T09:02:51.821+05:302009-08-27T09:02:51.821+05:30Nice. I've had many a ponder over coffee, mys...Nice. I've had many a ponder over coffee, myself.Ann (bunnygirl)http://www.maelstromrock.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-43674664295239535972009-08-27T08:03:19.884+05:302009-08-27T08:03:19.884+05:30I love the idea of blowing over a cup of coffee. C...I love the idea of blowing over a cup of coffee. Can I steal it?Susan Helene Gottfriedhttp://westofmars.com/blognoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-24607802631378748262009-08-27T07:18:15.818+05:302009-08-27T07:18:15.818+05:30I like how this is told from the truck driver'...I like how this is told from the truck driver's point of view! And the image in the coffee cup is great!Linda Jacobshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14459940700516084069noreply@blogger.com