tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post4626194419328902537..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: focussed on death--3WWgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger28125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-84186653351708700412008-05-24T01:48:00.000+05:302008-05-24T01:48:00.000+05:30ha, death can wait while the belly fills up! :)ha, death can wait while the belly fills up! :)polonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12631341810150848122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-89157910439897093442008-05-23T22:11:00.000+05:302008-05-23T22:11:00.000+05:30i forgot how cool your writing style is! Ive miss...i forgot how cool your writing style is! Ive missed reading it!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-85810720648519696302008-05-23T11:41:00.000+05:302008-05-23T11:41:00.000+05:30hmmm .. One could make a movie out of this .. hehe...hmmm .. One could make a movie out of this .. heheAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15733841127647085346noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-22887274325607293332008-05-23T07:13:00.000+05:302008-05-23T07:13:00.000+05:30It is really good; just flowed so well; even thoug...It is really good; just flowed so well; even though it talks abt death - I'd like to hope that he changed his mind and his will to live came back:) and all's well,Anya Padyamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05292308457359940182noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-72587926408271442912008-05-23T05:52:00.000+05:302008-05-23T05:52:00.000+05:30WOW! I really like this one. The story of the ulti...WOW! I really like this one. The story of the ultimate loser, can't even succeed at killing himself. I find it comical in a bizzare sort of way. I think I would leave off the last line, since it is obvious. Or maybe that could be worked into the title. Attention: The Train that Was Suppose to Run You Over Has Been Cancelled.HAPPY THURSDAY!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-80549399884554237252008-05-23T01:44:00.000+05:302008-05-23T01:44:00.000+05:30...excellent portrayal of frustration and that som......excellent portrayal of frustration and that sometimes we just don't have much power over our lives... i almost wanted to laugh in that it's always something...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-47418755639337224662008-05-22T22:27:00.000+05:302008-05-22T22:27:00.000+05:30sometimes what we want is not really what we want....sometimes what we want is not really what we want.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-71013059831754728722008-05-22T21:40:00.000+05:302008-05-22T21:40:00.000+05:30heh.unlucky lucky guy huh? :)heh.<BR/>unlucky lucky guy huh? :)Sanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13459272427622582627noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-52942737528642132072008-05-22T21:39:00.000+05:302008-05-22T21:39:00.000+05:30Something is sending him a clear message that he e...Something is sending him a clear message that he eventually got. I like how you had him kick the tracks. ;)Tammy Brierlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14673290512175050093noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-10278735411208472362008-05-22T18:56:00.000+05:302008-05-22T18:56:00.000+05:30funny... agree with TC...suicide is not for him......funny... agree with TC...<BR/>suicide is not for him... ;PAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-17495948879345800812008-05-22T14:37:00.000+05:302008-05-22T14:37:00.000+05:30gautami,Persistant failure; I think there is a mes...gautami,<BR/>Persistant failure; I think there is a message there.<BR/>Well done.<BR/>relrelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09030572981830789370noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-33682414057262963982008-05-22T13:14:00.000+05:302008-05-22T13:14:00.000+05:30It's obviously NOT his time to die.... :DIt's obviously NOT his time to die.... :DPirate Princesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12164956276371481421noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-52150526189788615462008-05-22T09:47:00.000+05:302008-05-22T09:47:00.000+05:30I love this!!! Very creative. Some people can't...I love this!!! Very creative. Some people can't even do suicide right. ;-)WriterKathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01966875820095185649noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-21093269816996209362008-05-22T09:02:00.000+05:302008-05-22T09:02:00.000+05:30I found that the going to fill his belly (an act o...I found that the going to fill his belly (an act of sustenance) after failing miserably at dying was quite ironic and satirical! great job!!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-1652574459355115092008-05-22T08:31:00.000+05:302008-05-22T08:31:00.000+05:30a nice little twist.:)a nice little twist.:)Lhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05188365355748586948noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-25023775112474307992008-05-22T08:26:00.000+05:302008-05-22T08:26:00.000+05:30oh, so sad, but humorous in a way. always failing,...oh, so sad, but humorous in a way. always failing, I understand that.<BR/><BR/>Good work.<BR/>Maybe he'll eat his death :PAngelica Chuahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07561622934124649565noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-67594855424265063492008-05-22T07:50:00.000+05:302008-05-22T07:50:00.000+05:30He is indestructible! Like Michael on L O S T gr...He is indestructible! Like Michael on L O S T <BR/>great job with the 3 words! :))Lucyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11442070518518821892noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-55259114603751793082008-05-22T07:17:00.000+05:302008-05-22T07:17:00.000+05:30A concise poem, honest, descriptive, and in the en...A concise poem, honest, descriptive, and in the end, very human. He goes home to eat since he couldn't kill himself. Very ironic! GReat stuff, gautami.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-68939412665917610362008-05-22T04:47:00.000+05:302008-05-22T04:47:00.000+05:30Karma is imposing itself into his life - he needs ...Karma is imposing itself into his life - he needs to listen. Great piece.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-71995156772962395972008-05-22T00:43:00.000+05:302008-05-22T00:43:00.000+05:30I understand how he feels. :PI understand how he feels. :PUnknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04603792157174161967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-65765484048007607082008-05-21T23:42:00.000+05:302008-05-21T23:42:00.000+05:30Amazing piece; even with all the suicide attempts ...Amazing piece; even with all the suicide attempts there, this made me laugh! :-DAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-80886558704911805732008-05-21T22:59:00.000+05:302008-05-21T22:59:00.000+05:30Ah! A lovely poem on the frustration of being aliv...Ah! A lovely poem on the frustration of being alive... :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-3297518340750029732008-05-21T22:58:00.000+05:302008-05-21T22:58:00.000+05:30I am actually having a day where I feel exactly li...I am actually having a day where I feel exactly like this. Not that I want to die, but everything I do is *wrong*.Susan Helene Gottfriedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12778191943289129869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-56316373437073120452008-05-21T21:01:00.000+05:302008-05-21T21:01:00.000+05:30Good thing the rope couldn't take his weight an he...Good thing the rope couldn't take his weight an he went home to eat some more :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-82938735799003571542008-05-21T20:59:00.000+05:302008-05-21T20:59:00.000+05:30This is not only hilarious but spectacularly well ...This is not only hilarious but spectacularly well written in an understated way.PJDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05028687955957107957noreply@blogger.com