tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post4716862403778403134..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: musical whirlwindgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger48125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-37260356267789808992011-01-09T06:25:14.059+05:302011-01-09T06:25:14.059+05:30I'd already posted in response to your poem, G...I'd already posted in response to your poem, Gautami; and I thank you for responding to mine which had sentences from Bel Canto. You said you had really liked that book. Me too. It would be in my top 5 of all times. So rivetting (sp) to read. Couldn't put it down. I was so sad about the ending though.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-75207191692230791602011-01-08T16:54:02.931+05:302011-01-08T16:54:02.931+05:30Thank you. And apologies for the misspelling, Gaut...Thank you. And apologies for the misspelling, Gautami. Won't happen again :)<br /><br />Kind regards<br /><br />LukeAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-4431642630081224702011-01-08T09:37:35.053+05:302011-01-08T09:37:35.053+05:30Luke: what I can't take is misspelling my name...Luke: what I can't take is misspelling my name!<br /><br />*grin*gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-25118814161385661892011-01-08T09:36:33.796+05:302011-01-08T09:36:33.796+05:30Luke, feel free to critique any of my works. I don...Luke, feel free to critique any of my works. I don't believe in the Rome/Roman thing!<br /><br />No offence taken. And we will get along just fine. Life is too short for anything else...gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-28453407191331303572011-01-08T06:47:40.211+05:302011-01-08T06:47:40.211+05:30Oh dear. Luke and Gautami, bygones! Luke, she wrot...Oh dear. Luke and Gautami, bygones! Luke, she wrote it in response to a prompt from We Write Poems to construct a cento poem, which is to put together lines from another's work. It's in her footnotes.irenehttp://enerihot.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-43995956497932815962011-01-08T04:17:00.125+05:302011-01-08T04:17:00.125+05:30Intense, heated, wow-worthy.Intense, heated, wow-worthy.Steve Isaakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07162341357622058518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-2807185463375039122011-01-08T00:38:31.697+05:302011-01-08T00:38:31.697+05:30Guatami -
I will let you read/write, I apologise...Guatami - <br /><br />I will let you read/write, I apologise for bringing it up, and for any annoyance/offence caused. I forget that on the blogs, the vast majority only want positive feedback etc. I critique a lot of poetry daily, and run a group for constructive criticism/honest feedback, because I for one will not grow as a writer just hearing how good my poems are all the time. When in Rome... yeah, I will do as the Romans do. I can see from your other posts that you are a decent poet.<br /><br />I hope we can get along OK, please feel free to delete my comments of course<br /><br />Kind regards<br /><br />LukeAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-71550671710778748702011-01-08T00:18:11.072+05:302011-01-08T00:18:11.072+05:30Luke, it isn't people are afraid to talk. It i...Luke, it isn't people are afraid to talk. It is more like they don't want to waste time doing that. I, for one, would rather write or read in that time! But you said people in a general way. I take it, that you didn't intend that for me. <br /><br />Original. If you come to the finer print nothing is original. No emotion. No feeling. No individual. We all come from matter. And end up as matter. And that remains constant. How is that for a discussion?gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-76596656420360651252011-01-08T00:09:21.189+05:302011-01-08T00:09:21.189+05:30I like this very much. I love what you made from t...I like this very much. I love what you made from these found sentences. Good choices. And thank you for visiting my blog!Peggy Goetzhttp://ponderingspeggy.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-22238388197986884282011-01-07T21:13:26.835+05:302011-01-07T21:13:26.835+05:30This may have been a found poem, but you made real...This may have been a found poem, but you made real beauty and created that 'something' which one cannot put a finger on...so creative!RJ Clarkenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03018296461199649445noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-47664695033265054322011-01-07T21:05:52.758+05:302011-01-07T21:05:52.758+05:30The dictionary? That's called using language.....The dictionary? That's called using language... we arrange words in certain order from the dictionary, to give a particular meaning, cadence, musicality, inference/subtext, texture, etc etc. This has nothing whatsoever to do with simply taking an author's work and rearranging the sentences. If it was a prompt for a particular poetry event, fine (but a little strange, I wouldn't even blog something like this, it's nothing more than a creative writing class exercise). But I was under the impression that OSW only took original submissions. This is not original. Interesting discussion, no offence meant. These things matter to me and I find it intriguing. Why are people so afraid to talk about, for God's sake?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-29416437259577927542011-01-07T20:43:30.811+05:302011-01-07T20:43:30.811+05:30Beautiful. I loved the descriptive lines. Prose wa...Beautiful. I loved the descriptive lines. Prose was a lot harder than I imagined it would be. Thank you for sharing yours.Corbiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08168756186612658336noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-75807778110211250972011-01-07T05:20:52.092+05:302011-01-07T05:20:52.092+05:30I love the poem you made out of Stewart's sent...I love the poem you made out of Stewart's sentences. Happy New Year!KBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02621937316200868307noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-51899362725845491712011-01-07T00:44:58.793+05:302011-01-07T00:44:58.793+05:30passionate...passionate...Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-56080943051823659722011-01-06T21:18:43.117+05:302011-01-06T21:18:43.117+05:30Luke, I have mentioned it is a found poem. You you...Luke, I have mentioned it is a found poem. You yourself said that here. And you can see that from the comments thread too, that most are aware of it. Yes, it is an experiment , a prompt set by <a href="http://wewritepoems.wordpress.com/2010/12/30/not-poetry/" rel="nofollow">We Write Poems</a>and one that I am not going to repeat.Many have taken part in this experiment themselves and produced beautiful work. <br /><br />A found poetry is not easy to write. I should know as this is only one I have written, taking all the lines from somewhere else, and putting those in an order, which works and makes sense. .<br /><br />I do know I am MORE than a DECENT poet! And also someone who explores every avenue for poetry.<br /><br />We all take words from the dictionary. Is that plagiarising? Having said that, I am not going to continue with this discussion any further.gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-57095904703740184342011-01-06T20:54:17.638+05:302011-01-06T20:54:17.638+05:30it pumped his lungs
and burst forth into his eyes,...it pumped his lungs<br />and burst forth into his eyes,<br />it set his head aflame with light<br />and seethed into the outer air. >great stuff <br /><br />but you're saying you didn't write this? Just took someone else's sentences and rearranged them? Er, then why would you submit it to OSW? All the credit I gave for that sentence above doesn't even belong to you. By the look of the other comments, they missed the footnote explaining that you didn't write it. So I am to credit R. J. Stewart? I find it bizarre that you'd even want to put this experiment (worthy as an experiment, sure) up for OSW or even blog it, actually. You look to be a decent poet in your own right.. why semi-plagiarise? Because you are letting them all believe that it's your original work, even though you wrote the footnote. You should be replying to their comments telling/reminding them that you merely put different sentences of Stewart's work together.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-1111510153471627822011-01-06T20:30:03.372+05:302011-01-06T20:30:03.372+05:30Fabulous...I love this. I really like this "h...Fabulous...I love this. I really like this "has raised the fire" as pertaining to music.SuziCatehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04025931724313344438noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-23943428167360418702011-01-06T19:41:11.141+05:302011-01-06T19:41:11.141+05:30You have got talent my friendYou have got talent my friendKodjo Deynoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01299996598769756878noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-18530120692769554982011-01-06T19:32:16.955+05:302011-01-06T19:32:16.955+05:30it is an intriguing concept and you spliced them t...it is an intriguing concept and you spliced them together well to weave an interesting tale...the musician part set my mind to moving...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-42915171213145697072011-01-06T18:47:43.932+05:302011-01-06T18:47:43.932+05:30Being new to poetry, I don't understand the fo...Being new to poetry, I don't understand the form, but it is amazing how it turned out. Gigi Annhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08092019687497845746noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-37296057857825979232011-01-06T18:24:19.801+05:302011-01-06T18:24:19.801+05:30I really love this one!I really love this one!annell4https://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-57691328158381441642011-01-06T14:10:37.835+05:302011-01-06T14:10:37.835+05:30...She started something and got what she wanted, ......She started something and got what she wanted, it seems. Very interesting, although I had to read it a few times. I might have to give this form a try someday... Thank you.Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-89275580425749112052011-01-06T10:59:59.326+05:302011-01-06T10:59:59.326+05:30WOW! an interesting concept, who would have thoug...WOW! an interesting concept, who would have thought it would come out so magical. R. L. Steward would be impressed with what you did with his verse/storytelling lines.<br /><br />joannyjoannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03338150531816845279noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-27038040125411502462011-01-06T10:13:36.824+05:302011-01-06T10:13:36.824+05:30I'll chime in as well; that's quite an acc...I'll chime in as well; that's quite an accomplishment.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-4522072499909540062011-01-06T09:14:09.282+05:302011-01-06T09:14:09.282+05:30You and G-Man are masters of re-worked poems today...You and G-Man are masters of re-worked poems today! I am sure that took a lot of work, but you created (re-created?) a powerful piece.Katherine Krigehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00737873330498032718noreply@blogger.com