tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post4796561551978155207..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: Thigh story (25 words, 160 characters)gautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger26125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-4433141630257131422011-01-23T01:43:31.235+05:302011-01-23T01:43:31.235+05:30Amazing how grossed out you made so many of us in ...Amazing how grossed out you made so many of us in only 25 words.<br /><br />That is some well-done micro-fiction.<br /><br />Thanks for linking.Jennyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12462124067637610359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-68073675340774603652011-01-20T18:51:43.800+05:302011-01-20T18:51:43.800+05:30A certain Haiku quality to this...nice...Peace and...A certain Haiku quality to this...nice...Peace and blessingsjeff campbellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17775235800381700596noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-70569670792493849392011-01-17T04:58:16.430+05:302011-01-17T04:58:16.430+05:30Eow.. (cringing and wincing)
A very tight write th...Eow.. (cringing and wincing)<br />A very tight write though!<br /><br />(I am kinda glad I am not a fan of pretzels) :)Kavitahttp://kavisionz.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-79628994874513990132011-01-17T00:52:40.827+05:302011-01-17T00:52:40.827+05:30Powerful. Guess I'll be chewing on this one a...Powerful. Guess I'll be chewing on this one all week...Nancy Janehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14759395209131739135noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-18604224371491921142011-01-17T00:17:07.419+05:302011-01-17T00:17:07.419+05:30wow...
watch out...
striking words..well played.wow...<br /><br />watch out...<br />striking words..well played.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-1224770776385210252011-01-16T23:12:05.241+05:302011-01-16T23:12:05.241+05:30Ack! Most definitely wouldn't eat pretzels or ...Ack! Most definitely wouldn't eat pretzels or anything else off that surface. Thanks for playing along with the Sunday 160.Monkey Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06741294113777908130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-36705678298217983742011-01-16T20:17:14.367+05:302011-01-16T20:17:14.367+05:30I will have to think on this one lol.I will have to think on this one lol.Vikihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14421161703991840468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-74370082908913806022011-01-16T18:49:20.434+05:302011-01-16T18:49:20.434+05:30agh...agh...Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-92016556702120655032011-01-16T18:12:08.670+05:302011-01-16T18:12:08.670+05:30dont dip your chip in it...eww...lol. it does make...dont dip your chip in it...eww...lol. it does make my kidney hurt...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-8674633314539596252011-01-16T14:14:52.396+05:302011-01-16T14:14:52.396+05:30You take us on such an interesting journey in so f...You take us on such an interesting journey in so few words. I appreciate it.<br />xoRobynRawknrobyn.blogspot.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15997241410192066577noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-860322375522321312011-01-16T12:55:31.584+05:302011-01-16T12:55:31.584+05:30the imagery is something else ... what an interest...the imagery is something else ... what an interesting take!Johttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03270665398498790951noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-44819455487372802612011-01-16T07:01:20.851+05:302011-01-16T07:01:20.851+05:30Nice work with the concrete, if unpleasant, images...Nice work with the concrete, if unpleasant, images. It makes me feel a great sense of loss, and I marvel at your ability to say so much in so few words.<br /><br />Great post..........cjcj Schlottmanhttp://theredsweater.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-13381153651588207362011-01-16T06:37:41.178+05:302011-01-16T06:37:41.178+05:30Wow, that brought quite the image to mind!
PamelaWow, that brought quite the image to mind!<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-27266691057850587952011-01-16T01:54:22.907+05:302011-01-16T01:54:22.907+05:30Quite the picture you painted there...yikes!Quite the picture you painted there...yikes!Tinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08925730745204736744noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-66242519660949424132011-01-16T01:02:25.385+05:302011-01-16T01:02:25.385+05:30I can always count on you for an original, thought...I can always count on you for an original, thought provoking Centus. The image of the kidney splitting, hissing - really nicely done. KatKathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12396548112800738809noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-7665534200108832502011-01-16T00:54:06.887+05:302011-01-16T00:54:06.887+05:30Sounds great! But I don't understand it! Origi...Sounds great! But I don't understand it! Original thinking! A little gory perhaps. I'm not sure that I want to know what this poem means. Some things are best left as they are!<br /><br />Best wishes,<br />Anna<br /><a href="http://annasadornments.blogspot.com/2011/01/mrs-jenny-matlocks-saturday-centus-week_15.html" rel="nofollow">Anna's SC#37-The lottery ticket</a>Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17926688000745346961noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-82968749576906777382011-01-15T23:26:35.448+05:302011-01-15T23:26:35.448+05:30Now that's an original take!!Now that's an original take!!Deborahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06231195313149947101noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-68515800786038040902011-01-15T21:57:04.676+05:302011-01-15T21:57:04.676+05:30yikes
that was kinda visceral
And i liked it.
=...yikes<br /><br />that was kinda visceral<br /><br />And i liked it.<br /><br />=)Susan Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16049586085703324088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-74200175143931162842011-01-15T21:50:27.879+05:302011-01-15T21:50:27.879+05:30I cringe with a sense of lost hope.~AmesI cringe with a sense of lost hope.~AmesAmeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15074479473400202674noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-34171472949195394332011-01-15T21:21:19.820+05:302011-01-15T21:21:19.820+05:30very interesting take on this.very interesting take on this.aspiritofsimplicityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14870339828098281415noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-8995569446408384122011-01-15T18:58:39.163+05:302011-01-15T18:58:39.163+05:30Very clever and I did like the way you say things ...Very clever and I did like the way you say things in a few words but with deep insights. Well done and good day.<br /><br />Your words conveys deep meaning.<br /><br />You can find my words in the poetry world at http://www.cesargealogo.comcesar gealogohttp://www.cesargealogo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-76890147508776580582011-01-15T18:42:09.732+05:302011-01-15T18:42:09.732+05:30That single kidney splitting - he has lost the lot...That single kidney splitting - he has lost the lottery. Riveting! Here's my <a href="http://strummedwords.blogspot.com/2011/01/saturday-centus-lottery-ticket.html" rel="nofollow">lottery ticket.</a>Strummed Wordshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14345074413602549369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-54455704665482385112011-01-15T18:41:53.934+05:302011-01-15T18:41:53.934+05:30Poor guy!
(Not even thinking of pretzels at the mo...Poor guy!<br />(Not even thinking of pretzels at the moment) <br />:)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-8008057423924644262011-01-15T18:40:58.535+05:302011-01-15T18:40:58.535+05:30This comment has been removed by the author.Strummed Wordshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14345074413602549369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-75548047749504788182011-01-15T18:32:31.336+05:302011-01-15T18:32:31.336+05:30yes, I cringed a little. UGH. Nice take on this!...yes, I cringed a little. UGH. Nice take on this!Terrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12112479764398508654noreply@blogger.com