tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post5087645944345373046..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: Civilization------Poetry Thursdaygautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger40125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-36580914929399280622007-08-21T06:04:00.000+05:302007-08-21T06:04:00.000+05:30This is wonderful and it flows so nicely.This is wonderful and it flows so nicely.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-26361306862016093292007-08-02T20:46:00.000+05:302007-08-02T20:46:00.000+05:30Mass adulation, brought about by mass media! Can w...Mass adulation, brought about by mass media! Can we blame the girls, shouldn't we stop pandering to the media, the promoters! I say we educate people to be better parents ... now that would be a phenomenon!Cheriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04139558255321645746noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-88032390507100077282007-07-29T00:28:00.000+05:302007-07-29T00:28:00.000+05:30I cannot write poetry and I am continually amazed ...I cannot write poetry and I am continually amazed when someone for whom English is a second language (I presume) can write it so well!<BR/><BR/>Michele sent me.kenjuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07342414519714356343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-52848434140293033482007-07-28T20:37:00.000+05:302007-07-28T20:37:00.000+05:30Gorgeous, as usual! I love it. Most especially the...Gorgeous, as usual! I love it. Most especially the last.<BR/><BR/>Here from Michele'sShannon akaMontyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00379928121511251819noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-9760002552816863422007-07-28T12:53:00.000+05:302007-07-28T12:53:00.000+05:30brilliant poignant & thought provoking...love"unde...brilliant poignant & thought provoking...<BR/><BR/>love<BR/>"understandings the<BR/>purpose of its life,<BR/>shoot blossoms to tree<BR/>perpetuating the world"<BR/><BR/>and ofcourse<BR/>"we, the civilized ones<BR/>axe it down to ground"Alokhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02888672505035649846noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-73322553972299318672007-07-28T01:24:00.000+05:302007-07-28T01:24:00.000+05:30The final lines were so indicative of where we are...The final lines were so indicative of where we are - great job - lovely images and pure words.Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-65509979576401002842007-07-27T21:23:00.000+05:302007-07-27T21:23:00.000+05:30I always admire your work!There are not enough adj...I always admire your work!<BR/>There are not enough adjectives to describe how good you are!Stevehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16715829842292110540noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-65642432281227412032007-07-27T21:16:00.000+05:302007-07-27T21:16:00.000+05:30You were certainly inspired by this moment because...You were certainly inspired by this moment because it's full of promise and hope. Excellent!Tammy Brierlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14673290512175050093noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-13062239152168505682007-07-27T20:51:00.000+05:302007-07-27T20:51:00.000+05:30It's called progress my dear. We can't have all t...It's called progress my dear. We can't have all these "plants" around thinking this is THEIR world or anything...<BR/>Great stuff.<BR/>Anyhow, remember how a short time back you tagged me? Well I am here to tag you back. Its kinda the same thing but a little differant.<BR/>Take a gander...ozymandiazhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07891897071966903895noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-63698280485994952912007-07-27T19:47:00.000+05:302007-07-27T19:47:00.000+05:30This poem reminds me of one of my greatest faults ...This poem reminds me of one of my greatest faults -- destroying things before I realize the good they were doing. Thank you for sharing.Dani In NChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15032707452740200776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-21973770964378656012007-07-27T19:23:00.000+05:302007-07-27T19:23:00.000+05:30I like the movement in this poem--we kill what we ...I like the movement in this poem--we kill what we love and in turn kill ourselves.sagehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17499891950639742366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-56711386560940231672007-07-27T19:00:00.000+05:302007-07-27T19:00:00.000+05:30Great one, Gautami. Well-done!Great one, Gautami. Well-done!Don Iannone, D.Div., Ph.D.https://www.blogger.com/profile/01922412641433868679noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-89115998573527432612007-07-27T16:54:00.000+05:302007-07-27T16:54:00.000+05:30good morning guatami... this was excellent,, and s...good morning guatami... this was excellent,, and sadly so true... we humans seem to have no respect for anything,,, and yet continue to demand if for ourselves... what a vicious cirlepaisleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-70593499353584657362007-07-27T14:07:00.000+05:302007-07-27T14:07:00.000+05:30superb !!!!!superb !!!!!magiceyehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17848851692951192508noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-46983057101685088682007-07-27T13:46:00.000+05:302007-07-27T13:46:00.000+05:30love this tiny poem ... life, nature.Excellent.You...love this tiny poem ... life, nature.<BR/>Excellent.<BR/>Your words are constantly so delicious ... you have a great knowledge of words.<BR/>thank you for sharing.<BR/>Have a wonderful weekend!<BR/>:o)trinitystarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18134309193793933391noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-62207989972318797122007-07-27T12:24:00.000+05:302007-07-27T12:24:00.000+05:30I like your image of the nervous leaf.I like your image of the nervous leaf.Crafty Green Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-5997102761740026482007-07-27T09:56:00.000+05:302007-07-27T09:56:00.000+05:30This deserves reading again and again...beautifull...This deserves reading again and again...beautifully done, and the message is so urgently needed today!<BR/>Trees are so much more useful than people, if you think about it...if they chopped us down, the world would breathe a sigh of relief!Yeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08924005848870170400noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-76357670593920489342007-07-27T09:40:00.000+05:302007-07-27T09:40:00.000+05:30Lovely images and voice. I like the tenuousness in...Lovely images and voice. I like the tenuousness in "nervous of the terrain" and the irony in "we, the civilized ones".Debhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14744896385434246402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-41923574104122639112007-07-27T09:38:00.000+05:302007-07-27T09:38:00.000+05:30Very creative way to send a strong message. I cou...Very creative way to send a strong message. I could hear your poem in my head as I was reading it, and found it very lyrical... until the ending!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-20127562855872056822007-07-27T08:16:00.000+05:302007-07-27T08:16:00.000+05:30Many fine lines in this poem! Thank you.Many fine lines in this poem! Thank you.Joyce Ellen Davishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13494251587598676788noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-59079074625388534012007-07-27T07:31:00.000+05:302007-07-27T07:31:00.000+05:30Excellent weave of words! We definitely need to he...Excellent weave of words! We definitely need to heed the process of development with more appreciation! Man has a tendency to destroy well established things quickly and without conscience! So sad!Giggleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11713143985984314202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-83350602365751223652007-07-27T05:33:00.000+05:302007-07-27T05:33:00.000+05:30too true. sometimes we don't really appreciate wha...too true. sometimes we don't really appreciate what nature gives us. although I do believe that we're learningAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-21057562117108578402007-07-27T04:20:00.000+05:302007-07-27T04:20:00.000+05:30This is a great poem, Gautami. No, make that amaz...This is a great poem, Gautami. No, make that amazing.Marcia (MeeAugraphie)https://www.blogger.com/profile/00656288704821106002noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-55364346452342383962007-07-27T03:59:00.000+05:302007-07-27T03:59:00.000+05:30I love this piece. Very very nice. And the intervi...I love this piece. Very very nice. And the interview I'm doing is about poet bloggers, just some general questions. Let me know if you want to partake.abby - the geek girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13006295066914327666noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-74556384400227346572007-07-27T03:41:00.000+05:302007-07-27T03:41:00.000+05:30I love poems with a sting in the tail at the end.I love poems with a sting in the tail at the end.carolehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08020421002889991849noreply@blogger.com