tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post5568942833824998863..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: solidifiedgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger32125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-2976791203545802172009-10-13T19:04:17.210+05:302009-10-13T19:04:17.210+05:30talisman of silence... WOW.. powerful..talisman of silence... WOW.. powerful..Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-20561526146555283472009-10-13T05:39:56.994+05:302009-10-13T05:39:56.994+05:30the woman within
splits into numerous splinters
T...the woman within<br />splits into numerous splinters<br /><br />The above lines really spoke to me. How many splinters can we split into as women?<br /><br />You amaze me with your insights!Linda Jacobshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14459940700516084069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-88742817928470202892009-10-12T09:51:49.775+05:302009-10-12T09:51:49.775+05:30Very interesting poem. I don't quite know what...Very interesting poem. I don't quite know what to think of it but I like it. I need to mull it over a bit.Kathies Poet Treehttp://kathiespoettree.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-55095537628120650632009-10-12T06:59:21.259+05:302009-10-12T06:59:21.259+05:30"sorting through the tiny pieces", visce..."sorting through the tiny pieces", visceral.Dee Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05077141911351737390noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-12314078234398494362009-10-12T06:43:34.434+05:302009-10-12T06:43:34.434+05:30Wow! Very vivid images. And the intensity of your ...Wow! Very vivid images. And the intensity of your words is quite awe-inspiring.Felicityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11648175631096848730noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-84167342915784938412009-10-12T06:09:23.278+05:302009-10-12T06:09:23.278+05:30Intense. Awesome processing!Intense. Awesome processing!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-51128121488032466712009-10-12T04:08:09.935+05:302009-10-12T04:08:09.935+05:30Dark, intense, visual in its imagery. Writing is ...Dark, intense, visual in its imagery. Writing is a great way to cast an image upon the mind. Nice.Loch Robhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10912194134878544461noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-28806433947185964442009-10-12T03:39:38.198+05:302009-10-12T03:39:38.198+05:30Wow!
Impressive and powerful!
I love this poem.Wow!<br /><br />Impressive and powerful!<br />I love this poem.Vita Stunderhttp://vitastunder.blogspot.com/2009/10/talisman-of-because.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-21215743833190732472009-10-12T02:38:41.229+05:302009-10-12T02:38:41.229+05:30you had me with the first few lines. Awesome to be...you had me with the first few lines. Awesome to be so in touch with deep feelings that words like this can rise to the surface.Tammie Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09018402134070834516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-47800283118626863972009-10-12T01:02:44.232+05:302009-10-12T01:02:44.232+05:30What a deep and powerful piece. I'm running ou...What a deep and powerful piece. I'm running out of adjectives to use when commenting upon your work!keiths ramblingshttp://keithsramblings.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-191093297492189952009-10-11T23:58:58.409+05:302009-10-11T23:58:58.409+05:30Dark and intense...I could feel the passionate emo...Dark and intense...I could feel the passionate emotion in your words!Sherri B.https://www.blogger.com/profile/00834386300886224116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-40769824235542901392009-10-11T23:14:19.774+05:302009-10-11T23:14:19.774+05:30we do indeed sometimes have to swallow/eat the spl...we do indeed sometimes have to swallow/eat the splintered remains of our lives. Very powerful images. Potent!sgreerpitthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07764262558160301061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-85879838405436513152009-10-11T21:34:36.773+05:302009-10-11T21:34:36.773+05:30A little gruesome perfection.
I like the intensity...A little gruesome perfection.<br />I like the intensity of the poem.spacedlawhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12462723005560128474noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-64379276970371896962009-10-11T20:37:02.573+05:302009-10-11T20:37:02.573+05:30Fabulously powerful. Truly.Fabulously powerful. Truly.Patois42https://www.blogger.com/profile/07764936858778730692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-75671702206221268582009-10-11T19:11:11.518+05:302009-10-11T19:11:11.518+05:30I love the radiance of this darkness:
So many wo...I love the <i>radiance</i> of this darkness: <br /><br />So many wonderful pieces here: "my heart flames over it," "the darkness oozes," the entire fourth stanza, and the stunning loveliness of "eating my own blood..."murat11https://www.blogger.com/profile/00663364407992075130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-22872275543064920142009-10-11T18:46:25.144+05:302009-10-11T18:46:25.144+05:30gosh! that was brilliant... intense. thanks for sh...gosh! that was brilliant... intense. thanks for sharing.ladygarfieldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12121342651646756315noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-31887138104866744032009-10-11T18:01:32.877+05:302009-10-11T18:01:32.877+05:30WOW, this is really powerful poetry.. intense, str...WOW, this is really powerful poetry.. intense, strong, dark.. An exquisite read..The Dark Lordhttp://darklordreturns.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-32136033369023107192009-10-11T11:42:25.166+05:302009-10-11T11:42:25.166+05:30This is a very thought provoking poem.This is a very thought provoking poem.Maggiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02023472067047797430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-88735777241998948052009-10-11T09:33:12.476+05:302009-10-11T09:33:12.476+05:30I agree, very powerful words. I especially enjoyed...I agree, very powerful words. I especially enjoyed the second stanza. Good interpretation of the prompt, unique.Geraldine https://www.blogger.com/profile/07410019941984295767noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-74579833502632795482009-10-11T08:10:52.345+05:302009-10-11T08:10:52.345+05:30Whitesnake is not trying to find himself. He left ...Whitesnake is not trying to find himself. He left his wife for KB have they have moved in togetherAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-7971790581830824242009-10-11T08:09:34.485+05:302009-10-11T08:09:34.485+05:30WOW, I felt like I was there, watching this all ta...WOW, I felt like I was there, watching this all take place. Your words are vivid and full of emotion! Very nice.Heliotropismhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17329255406657406995noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-86515548301397854872009-10-11T06:57:30.156+05:302009-10-11T06:57:30.156+05:30Very powerful poem. You never cease to amaze me.Very powerful poem. You never cease to amaze me.Ofira Sephirothhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12424097781130935369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-60661597647098272852009-10-11T06:48:15.808+05:302009-10-11T06:48:15.808+05:30Splintered life, splintered self....The power, the...Splintered life, splintered self....The power, the magic. This is a wonderful poem, friend.SandyCarlsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752798823532580733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-81496268577990792312009-10-11T06:38:22.067+05:302009-10-11T06:38:22.067+05:30Yours is a true keeper for the Halloween holiday s...Yours is a true keeper for the Halloween holiday season. You envisioned and then described this object, I will call a critter, so well. Spooky and scary it is!<br />..<br />BTW, eating my own blood sometimes is my first aid technique. It helps stop bleeding when nothing else is handy. I really wouldn't want to eat many scabs.<br />..Jimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-73319937130025169582009-10-11T02:04:54.864+05:302009-10-11T02:04:54.864+05:30The whole poem builds beautifully and darkly to th...The whole poem builds beautifully and darkly to that last line, reconnectd to the poet in the reader. Yes, intense and somehow beautiful.Beth Camphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12682622561621269515noreply@blogger.com