tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post5622583517505570990..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: clouds roll overgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-45958049488580441532010-04-28T18:20:51.610+05:302010-04-28T18:20:51.610+05:30Good one , this! Iliked the words ..rhapsody of se...Good one , this! Iliked the words ..rhapsody of senses.. you continue to create rainbows of words.. beautiful..Ramesh Soodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05589155663544312563noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-39832756592995787612010-04-27T13:13:15.157+05:302010-04-27T13:13:15.157+05:30Hi! haven't been by for a while. just making m...Hi! haven't been by for a while. just making my rounds during national poetry month here (have no idea if it is in India - wouldn't imagine it would be for any reason).<br /><br />was this a particular assignment or form? i noticed the repetition of words.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-44634077196153737832010-04-27T06:43:46.907+05:302010-04-27T06:43:46.907+05:30'and may the bigger picture
enclosed within y...'and may the bigger picture <br />enclosed within you<br />give way to rhapsody of senses'<br /><br />I'm happy to say I can relate to this - but it's never occured to me in such beautiful lines before.Julia Phillips Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15392455413201190775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-43681787299073299762010-04-27T01:00:18.273+05:302010-04-27T01:00:18.273+05:30I always think of rain as cleansing, too. What a n...I always think of rain as cleansing, too. What a nice series of poems.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-78076178932268463952010-04-26T21:45:56.731+05:302010-04-26T21:45:56.731+05:30first time here.
wonderful...great work.first time here.<br />wonderful...great work.Sorcererhttp://www.evilsfury.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-29008456345211265612010-04-26T19:14:14.747+05:302010-04-26T19:14:14.747+05:30it reminds me of rainy nights in Georgia, i loved ...it reminds me of rainy nights in Georgia, i loved it then, I love it now ;)Lorrainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14667955555940467301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-3974948205048607952010-04-26T18:41:39.143+05:302010-04-26T18:41:39.143+05:30Such lovely imagery.
Especially where you compare ...Such lovely imagery.<br />Especially where you compare the sky to churned butter.Felicityhttp://www.mandatoryhappiness.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-40565481091119740362010-04-26T16:25:51.951+05:302010-04-26T16:25:51.951+05:30I like the pivot point in this where you stop talk...I like the pivot point in this where you stop talking about the windows and use "you" to make us think!Linda Jacobshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14459940700516084069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-89137394120605693802010-04-26T13:46:32.320+05:302010-04-26T13:46:32.320+05:30From beautiful descriptive simile to dramatic meta...From beautiful descriptive simile to dramatic metaphor! The "rhapsody" of it all! A fascinating piece of poetry!Gemma Wisemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-85150133150404229872010-04-26T09:02:18.363+05:302010-04-26T09:02:18.363+05:30Ooh I love the "rhapsody of senses" love...Ooh I love the "rhapsody of senses" lovely.jonehttp://deowriter.wordpress.com/2010/04/26/2010-napowrimo-day-25/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-53758158310603773652010-04-26T04:31:42.582+05:302010-04-26T04:31:42.582+05:30"sky churns like butter"
I can see that..."sky churns like butter"<br /><br />I can see that roiling sky! Thank you!<br /><br /><br /><a href="http://magicalmysticalteacher.wordpress.com/2010/04/25/haiku-bones-rainless-night/" rel="nofollow">Rainless night</a>Magical Mystical Teacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01853272111925075994noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-65845525744823700862010-04-26T04:13:09.296+05:302010-04-26T04:13:09.296+05:30mmm, yes plez.... conduit connectmmm, yes plez.... <a href="http://pieceofpie.wordpress.com/2010/04/25/conduit-connect/" rel="nofollow">conduit connect</a>one more believerhttp://pieceofpie.wordpress.com/2010/04/25/conduit-connect/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-74287085775992631592010-04-26T02:58:13.583+05:302010-04-26T02:58:13.583+05:30Ah, the cleansing of water!! Today has that feel h...Ah, the cleansing of water!! Today has that feel here in Alabama after a day and night of storms.Pamhttp://coosacreek.org/amputated/2010/04/25/night-rain/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-26002239342683357012010-04-25T22:14:14.524+05:302010-04-25T22:14:14.524+05:30I thought your use of repetition was clever and in...I thought your use of repetition was clever and interesting.spiritsoflenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09663418154339084941noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-85809873852629456802010-04-25T21:09:38.127+05:302010-04-25T21:09:38.127+05:30I like the elegance of this, that clarity is attai...I like the elegance of this, that clarity is attainable like the washing away by rain. It's a good fit with the recent days here in Oregon, USA. Thank you for sharing.J. D. Mackenziehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10188487574377344543noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-65134039590825596202010-04-25T20:50:17.774+05:302010-04-25T20:50:17.774+05:30Gautami,
Laudable wish with such simple simile.
...Gautami,<br /><br />Laudable wish with such simple simile.<br /><br />Take careJackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15896075408610203350noreply@blogger.com