tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post5724454703503219089..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: changling-----Totally Optional Prompt/Patchwork Poetrygautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-29749894624303850522008-05-11T05:17:00.000+05:302008-05-11T05:17:00.000+05:30Omigosh!! How this Works.Omigosh!! How this Works.Annie Jeffrieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15415548089882625246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-21121101980405766382008-05-10T06:13:00.000+05:302008-05-10T06:13:00.000+05:30I love the image 'a tiny bird flew out of my head'...I love the image 'a tiny bird flew out of my head'Andy Sewinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10023449074796269533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-65743677796099549092008-05-10T02:35:00.000+05:302008-05-10T02:35:00.000+05:30I like it though it sounds eerie to meI like it though it sounds eerie to melissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00706027242022517570noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-2860496493804375892008-05-09T06:53:00.000+05:302008-05-09T06:53:00.000+05:30Funny at first and then creeps into...demented. Ee...Funny at first and then creeps into...demented. Eery.xhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17866348942612559536noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-8946994003740286972008-05-09T05:29:00.000+05:302008-05-09T05:29:00.000+05:30I like the surreal quality of the bird coming out ...I like the surreal quality of the bird coming out of the narrator's head after touching the yolk. The description of the yolk is also very vivid. Wonderful symbolism.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-88744261812393572612008-05-09T05:28:00.000+05:302008-05-09T05:28:00.000+05:30Very interesting imagery in this one.Very interesting imagery in this one.writerwomanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07645753712657412094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-27505048823835269802008-05-09T00:53:00.000+05:302008-05-09T00:53:00.000+05:30this says much about change and reluctance to it.....this says much about change and reluctance to it...polonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12631341810150848122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-15728342758709969022008-05-09T00:34:00.000+05:302008-05-09T00:34:00.000+05:30this was very good.this was very good.Lhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05188365355748586948noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-76832636793510736732008-05-08T23:34:00.000+05:302008-05-08T23:34:00.000+05:30Interesting technique, I love the changing texture...Interesting technique, I love the changing texture of the words here.Josephine-https://www.blogger.com/profile/12328106972076348785noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-53894948088393179892008-05-08T23:23:00.000+05:302008-05-08T23:23:00.000+05:30Gee, Tami, I hope after all that you cooked it. :...Gee, Tami, I hope after all that you cooked it. :-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-7236298387427997572008-05-08T20:04:00.000+05:302008-05-08T20:04:00.000+05:30I think Paisley got it about right. We hate our mi...I think Paisley got it about right. We hate our mirror image.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-75259023180954148192008-05-08T18:38:00.000+05:302008-05-08T18:38:00.000+05:30Love the yellowing flowerLove the yellowing flowerAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-9880919206600123702008-05-08T16:09:00.000+05:302008-05-08T16:09:00.000+05:30more often than not,, what we despise in other peo...more often than not,, what we despise in other people,, is what we secretly find ever so distasteful in ourselves..paisleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-88922520966140087732008-05-08T14:13:00.000+05:302008-05-08T14:13:00.000+05:30What a fascinating overlay of changing ideas.Gemma...What a fascinating overlay of changing ideas.<BR/><BR/>GemmaGemma Wisemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-37221758377818241482008-05-08T13:50:00.000+05:302008-05-08T13:50:00.000+05:30I guess we all change, and not always into somethi...I guess we all change, and not always into something we likeStan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-26677213849170139602008-05-08T08:22:00.000+05:302008-05-08T08:22:00.000+05:30taking lines from somewhere else and putting them ...taking lines from somewhere else and putting them in a poem? interesting thought and you did a wonderful job!J. Andrew Lockharthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12567156257114496618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-58129686783982979342008-05-08T05:47:00.000+05:302008-05-08T05:47:00.000+05:30I really like this!I really like this!Noah the Greathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11777681562599472033noreply@blogger.com