tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post5747094388976005879..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: digging into fruit punchgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger30125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-75842646478284764892008-02-23T11:52:00.000+05:302008-02-23T11:52:00.000+05:30Wow, I had no idea where this one was going, eithe...Wow, I had no idea where this one was going, either. I was thinking of a kid digging and playing in the dirt at first.<BR/><BR/><I>marking it with imaginary trees</I><BR/><BR/>Really liked that line. And interesting question at the end.Bonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10096591352278195759noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-47328560704832250072008-02-23T01:21:00.000+05:302008-02-23T01:21:00.000+05:30cold. very cold. well written. I didn't expect ...cold. very cold. well written. I didn't expect the outcome from the first stanza.PJDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05028687955957107957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-20897512066652235952008-02-22T22:51:00.000+05:302008-02-22T22:51:00.000+05:30Looks like we both explored the dark side this wee...Looks like we both explored the dark side this week. Very nicely done.Thom Gabrukiewiczhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13286670695334830471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-1414838894015850422008-02-22T22:44:00.000+05:302008-02-22T22:44:00.000+05:30I was picturing my husband in the garden, he loves...I was picturing my husband in the garden, he loves it so, but I stopped that comparison quickly!! <BR/><BR/>I know you like to read the dark; you write it beautifully... This is just perfect. It is real.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-17240142049084825122008-02-22T22:31:00.000+05:302008-02-22T22:31:00.000+05:30Oh, I really, really like that one! Very creative ...Oh, I really, really like that one! Very creative and well-written!Jane Doehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11087464056692451751noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-11243635233598849602008-02-22T09:56:00.000+05:302008-02-22T09:56:00.000+05:30You captured the insanity of this man's action's s...You captured the insanity of this man's action's so well. Good to see his crime didn't go unpunished. Have a nice night.poefusionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15157059633840032305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-15539182437757826432008-02-22T04:56:00.000+05:302008-02-22T04:56:00.000+05:30excellent post full of passion... love ain't free....excellent post full of passion... love ain't free... and killin ain't cheap... some days life just isn't worth livin...little wing writerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16010376737431344381noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-79138926168502319092008-02-21T20:30:00.000+05:302008-02-21T20:30:00.000+05:30Wow.I really did not expect the turn this took. I ...Wow.<BR/><BR/>I really did not expect the turn this took. I had no idea you were going to have kill his wife... let alone himself at the end!<BR/><BR/>I really liked what you did with punch.TChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02487739742081226423noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-41823723166039947402008-02-21T20:08:00.000+05:302008-02-21T20:08:00.000+05:30kind of scary. I wonder what he's thinking as well...kind of scary. I wonder what he's thinking as well.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-32545294152564078502008-02-21T10:43:00.000+05:302008-02-21T10:43:00.000+05:30That's great. Cold with a perfect ending.That's great. Cold with a perfect ending.WriterKathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01966875820095185649noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-10941191858106776352008-02-21T07:55:00.000+05:302008-02-21T07:55:00.000+05:30e had not killed her to get back to her.That's ama...e had not killed her to get back to her.<BR/>That's amazingAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-60518551500210986032008-02-21T07:27:00.000+05:302008-02-21T07:27:00.000+05:30can you please write something crappy just one tim...can you please write something crappy just one time? when is the next chapter to this post up?? fantastic!!!!!!a mouthy irish woman? ridiculous!https://www.blogger.com/profile/10559289518691894880noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-86285891829058292182008-02-21T07:22:00.000+05:302008-02-21T07:22:00.000+05:30Eerie and definitely reaching into the dark side. ...Eerie and definitely reaching into the dark side. Lots of the stuff hitting the news lately, and so very sad.<BR/><BR/>--GayAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-3384114867820037662008-02-21T06:33:00.000+05:302008-02-21T06:33:00.000+05:30That was catching.And the end so unexpected.Great!...That was catching.<BR/>And the end so unexpected.<BR/>Great!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09206799121622681828noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-22900198579890281962008-02-21T05:02:00.000+05:302008-02-21T05:02:00.000+05:30another visit to your dark side. why am I comfort...another visit to your dark side. why am I comforted that there is no longer a land bridge between us?myrtle beached whalehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18338457419555984753noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-61634762211806645652008-02-21T03:05:00.000+05:302008-02-21T03:05:00.000+05:30I have to say this is one of your best! The scene...I have to say this is one of your best! The scene is so well drawn and the pace is perfect!Linda Jacobshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14459940700516084069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-32734814356530201632008-02-21T02:10:00.000+05:302008-02-21T02:10:00.000+05:30What a surprise--I was expecting a gritty gardener...What a surprise--I was expecting a gritty gardener planting a tree and it was a body! Riveting. And so brief. Yet you do get the whole story and we're left to imagine the relationship that went so bad.Normahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11502895616873273470noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-14470502919620783212008-02-21T02:07:00.000+05:302008-02-21T02:07:00.000+05:30Whew! What a wild short tale! What in the world wa...Whew! What a wild short tale! What in the world was in the punch? Nice job!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-33857967847390388312008-02-21T01:52:00.000+05:302008-02-21T01:52:00.000+05:30I really enjoyed this, what a wonderful job! I thi...I really enjoyed this, what a wonderful job! I think creating believable yet, disagreeable characters with grit and grime between their fingernails is very difficult. I will be back to reaad more. Thanks!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-15157779946115774602008-02-20T23:26:00.000+05:302008-02-20T23:26:00.000+05:30gautami,What, pray tell, was in the fruit punch?We...gautami,<BR/>What, pray tell, was in the fruit punch?<BR/>Well done girl, excellent in fact!<BR/>relrelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09030572981830789370noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-68768264780194652802008-02-20T21:20:00.000+05:302008-02-20T21:20:00.000+05:30A horrific end for both man and woman. It's scary ...A horrific end for both man and woman. It's scary to get into the mind of a homicidal person.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-31000926920415344852008-02-20T20:41:00.000+05:302008-02-20T20:41:00.000+05:30no way he would come back for his dead wifehe had ...no way he would come back for his dead wife<BR/>he had not killed her to get back to her.<BR/><BR/>i loved this play on words... <BR/><BR/>nice to see you on the dark side guatami......paisleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-11868716129831448322008-02-20T19:47:00.000+05:302008-02-20T19:47:00.000+05:30Justin, I was going to leave it at the burying. So...Justin, I was going to leave it at the burying. Somehow the last stanza came into my out of nowhere.<BR/><BR/>Thanks Corina, watermaid, Rose, Brian, Judy and Steve.<BR/><BR/>Isn't life dark?<BR/><BR/>:DAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-68078892555254842282008-02-20T19:29:00.000+05:302008-02-20T19:29:00.000+05:30Pass the punch!Pass the punch!Stevehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04756795311967375779noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-76345531719451181812008-02-20T18:44:00.000+05:302008-02-20T18:44:00.000+05:30Wow... what a great use of the words. Well done.Wow... what a great use of the words. Well done.Judyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15335026948607722749noreply@blogger.com