tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post5991698719166528766..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: strings cross with wiresgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger35125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-59636720293586155232009-06-12T01:43:13.951+05:302009-06-12T01:43:13.951+05:30as alway a delightful read... passing to and fro a...as alway a delightful read... passing to and fro along the way... bubbles to the surface struck me strongly... tanks...one more believerhttp://pieceofpie.wordpress.com/2009/06/11/connection/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-75652334141144750782009-06-11T19:26:34.273+05:302009-06-11T19:26:34.273+05:30I like how you created this one~ interesting image...I like how you created this one~ interesting imageryPattihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04993186190720192589noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-28511206291329863872009-06-11T10:02:15.617+05:302009-06-11T10:02:15.617+05:30delirium, grief, a birthday, a longing to be free ...delirium, grief, a birthday, a longing to be free of mortal limits...<br /><br />a poem that is a Rorschach<br />inspired imagery as always!gabriellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14488809730387509552noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-29075268225770768052009-06-09T21:38:54.267+05:302009-06-09T21:38:54.267+05:30Tami, you write as if in a dream. I think it is wo...Tami, you write as if in a dream. I think it is wonderful. I love how the words sound.<br />I have lost my BD site to malware.<br />My new site is :<br />http://belovedhaikudreams.blogspot.com<br />I have miss so much and all of you. I was ill.<br /><br />love,Melanie-bdCassiopeia Riseshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02625091389788114012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-63362516620315221942009-06-09T04:36:17.890+05:302009-06-09T04:36:17.890+05:30walk out of the desert intact - we all want that d...walk out of the desert intact - we all want that don't we? Lovely and haunting.Dee Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05077141911351737390noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-90350312046954453542009-06-09T04:07:37.589+05:302009-06-09T04:07:37.589+05:30.."surreal" and could be psychological ......"surreal" and could be psychological .. thanks for an interesting post ..zoya gautamhttp://horizonnext.blogspot.com/2009/06/osiintersections.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-41802046041789684852009-06-09T01:13:42.188+05:302009-06-09T01:13:42.188+05:30Hrm. I had to read this again, and even then, it e...Hrm. I had to read this again, and even then, it escaped me a bit - but I like the imagery.Raven's Wing Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08576438868694047958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-82851548829959708172009-06-09T00:43:37.157+05:302009-06-09T00:43:37.157+05:30This has a lovely rhythym to it -- "strings c...This has a lovely rhythym to it -- "strings cross wires" indeed!sgreerpitthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07764262558160301061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-11383398558622686802009-06-08T11:48:41.533+05:302009-06-08T11:48:41.533+05:30like a pathway,an intriguing pathwaylike a pathway,an intriguing pathwayDeLihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15795530327579458125noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-32380647436620091352009-06-08T09:43:53.873+05:302009-06-08T09:43:53.873+05:30I agree with Janice. Reminds me of a dream. (I dre...I agree with Janice. Reminds me of a dream. (I dream in colour. :). Like the imagery and that this is different, but uniquely yours.Lynnehttp://colouryourworld.typepad.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-33848273890576700372009-06-08T05:06:52.550+05:302009-06-08T05:06:52.550+05:30i enjoyed the visuals that this poem had. i think ...i enjoyed the visuals that this poem had. i think this is what occurs with vibration of sound.floretahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18220834824793299258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-66551775173611810202009-06-08T02:59:45.001+05:302009-06-08T02:59:45.001+05:30I kind of enjoyed the broken and choppiness of thi...I kind of enjoyed the broken and choppiness of this poem. You did well with your inspiration.Pamhttp://coosacreek.org/amputated/2009/06/07/a-brief-breath/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-52268630785532209712009-06-08T01:11:19.963+05:302009-06-08T01:11:19.963+05:30The intersection of emotion and words ... line by ...The intersection of emotion and words ... line by line. Peace, JP/deb<br /><br /><a href="http://janepoet.blogspot.com/2009/06/photo-intersection-of-flavor-taken-by.html" rel="nofollow">Soulmate Intersection</a>JP/debhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16588554280207421724noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-54465844577379645872009-06-07T20:18:35.342+05:302009-06-07T20:18:35.342+05:30Very interesting poem...I enjoyed it.Very interesting poem...I enjoyed it.Maggiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02023472067047797430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-56872991367543837072009-06-07T20:03:11.890+05:302009-06-07T20:03:11.890+05:30I was wondering what tale you were telling. Still ...I was wondering what tale you were telling. Still in the reading I liked the feel of it. Fun freedom you gave yourself. I gave myself a tiny bit of the same freedom with my OSI, then kicked back and tried to interpret it as though it were a meaningful dream.Tammie Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09018402134070834516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-79581962270178240502009-06-07T19:58:21.627+05:302009-06-07T19:58:21.627+05:30Well...it does make sense as a dream-sequence. And...Well...it does make sense as a dream-sequence. And your last line 'I desire to walk out of the desert intact' helps me imagine that this is part of a larger dream, as our lives are always part of a larger dream.<br /><br />Thanks, Gautami.Beth P.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02621990661878989356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-52308813320002806502009-06-07T17:44:50.761+05:302009-06-07T17:44:50.761+05:30This is a nice round and rounded little poem. Fir...This is a nice round and rounded little poem. First the strings do the crossing and finally the wires come back to do the crossing to end it.<br />I was ready for a blackout but then it worked 'your way' instead.<br />..<br />Thanks for your kind comment and suggestion as well. <br />I can't do that ("his vocabulary <b>is</b> small") although I was and still am struggling with the third verse.<br />My syllabic form is 7,7,7, so I can't change your way. I have tried others but so far it is like it is. <br />Thank you again,<br />..Jimhttp://jimmiehov6.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-14940036685267019852009-06-07T15:52:15.092+05:302009-06-07T15:52:15.092+05:30The dream, the light, the draw, the direction....w...The dream, the light, the draw, the direction....well done, friend.SandyCarlsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752798823532580733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-35802657724507732832009-06-07T11:34:24.616+05:302009-06-07T11:34:24.616+05:30Weaving dreams?Weaving dreams?spacedlawhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12462723005560128474noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-37641630314255724502009-06-06T21:23:00.502+05:302009-06-06T21:23:00.502+05:30I like the images here. You're right about jus...I like the images here. You're right about just following the flow of the words and your thoughts. The results are often interesting, usually surprising. I like the combination of the tangible (magnet, wires) and intangible (yellow, space) here.Jameshttp://coyotemercury.com/blog1noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-23748262875137479242009-06-06T06:45:02.504+05:302009-06-06T06:45:02.504+05:30I really like this; there is beauty in science.I really like this; there is beauty in science.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-31989964269588006932009-06-06T00:43:43.438+05:302009-06-06T00:43:43.438+05:30I definitely support experimentation! It's fas...I definitely support experimentation! It's fascinating the way each line advances.Nathanhttp://disorder1313.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-86761894406779249972009-06-05T08:31:10.258+05:302009-06-05T08:31:10.258+05:30absolutely true. that's all I do. it made sens...absolutely true. that's all I do. it made sense to me. :)J. Andrew Lockharthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12567156257114496618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-27089109451722262782009-06-05T07:48:39.264+05:302009-06-05T07:48:39.264+05:30The mind is a powerful toolThe mind is a powerful toolWhitesnakehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07681488364720396274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-37160345283698203242009-06-05T05:34:15.169+05:302009-06-05T05:34:15.169+05:30It is like a surrealist picture, somebody shall ma...It is like a surrealist picture, somebody shall make a painting after it...Anahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06611955404994410354noreply@blogger.com