tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post6154762653922318435..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: zen momentsgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-63926048006165537422009-01-30T20:42:00.000+05:302009-01-30T20:42:00.000+05:30The first one is excellent! (Not to say the others...The first one is excellent! (Not to say the others aren't too!)Crafty Green Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-22828556260463256682009-01-29T11:24:00.000+05:302009-01-29T11:24:00.000+05:30so interesting, gautami! this is a poetry train. :...so interesting, gautami! <BR/><BR/>this is a poetry train. :)<BR/><BR/>it reminds me of something similar we did at an old poetry forum. some member will start a new verse using the last line of the preceding poem that was posted. the results can be hilarious but it was all fun. :)dsnake1https://www.blogger.com/profile/08724264906690080704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-88684269256373540512009-01-29T11:23:00.000+05:302009-01-29T11:23:00.000+05:30so interesting, gautami! this is a poetry train. :...so interesting, gautami! <BR/><BR/>this is a poetry train. :)<BR/><BR/>it reminds me of something similar we did at an old poetry forum. some member will start a new verse using the last line of the preceding poem that was posted. the results can be hilarious but it was all fun. :)dsnake1https://www.blogger.com/profile/08724264906690080704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-61375962238886085762009-01-29T05:23:00.000+05:302009-01-29T05:23:00.000+05:30I enjoy when my haiku inspire you to leave your ow...I enjoy when my haiku inspire you to leave your own poems in return. It helps build a spot - for gatherings. <BR/><BR/>I agree, however, that if you post those poems back to your own blog, it is important to acknowledge the inspiration through a link. <BR/><BR/>Keep 'em coming.Ken Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08435742064532588528noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-47407528779060449342009-01-28T19:09:00.000+05:302009-01-28T19:09:00.000+05:30Lorraine, your photographs inspire me as much as y...Lorraine, your photographs inspire me as much as your words. However, no more instant haiku from me on YOUR blog space. <BR/><BR/>:)gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-72455772294117710362009-01-28T18:16:00.000+05:302009-01-28T18:16:00.000+05:30I'm going to say something here that I've been thi...I'm going to say something here that I've been thinking about for a long time now, and just go and say it,'cause I think you can take it! And I wouldn't say anything, but by commenting on my blog, you've opened the door, and of course it's my experience, no one else's...that I know of.<BR/><BR/>I love your words, they are at times pure sun, but you're distracting me by leaving poetic comments on other blogs...that you're inspired in writing them is fantastic, but shouldn't you post them on your blog and say: Inspired by and give the link. Because by doing what you do, which in principle is lovely, you take away from the poet's blog that I'm visiting at that moment...<BR/>Of course I'd mind my own business but you've done it on mine, so I feel the right to say so. You are a great poet. Must you respond in poetry to people's poem...LIke I say maybe others love it, but I don't, it distracts me fromt the poet I'm visiting at that moment.<BR/><BR/>Having said that, I like your style ;)Lorrainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14667955555940467301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-83930067649059037642009-01-28T13:03:00.000+05:302009-01-28T13:03:00.000+05:30what an interesting way of doing it! I'm looking f...what an interesting way of doing it! I'm looking forward to the rest. :)J. Andrew Lockharthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12567156257114496618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-85443355533623480712009-01-27T19:21:00.000+05:302009-01-27T19:21:00.000+05:30Beautiful words!Beautiful words!venuss66https://www.blogger.com/profile/17804023747114879683noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-34952346580961213722009-01-27T14:16:00.000+05:302009-01-27T14:16:00.000+05:30they are all so ... zen beautiful!they are all so ... zen beautiful!magiceyehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17848851692951192508noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-47156552333150843932009-01-27T09:21:00.000+05:302009-01-27T09:21:00.000+05:30very good.very good.Whitesnakehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07681488364720396274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-69944168778085355612009-01-27T08:08:00.000+05:302009-01-27T08:08:00.000+05:30I like the daisy-chained haiku form you are buildi...I like the daisy-chained haiku form you are building. Wonderful creativity.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-68494318860569252912009-01-27T04:11:00.000+05:302009-01-27T04:11:00.000+05:30Essential and pure!Essential and pure!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-76897416909318276552009-01-27T01:40:00.000+05:302009-01-27T01:40:00.000+05:30Gotta love this free feeling - great job - I'll wa...Gotta love this free feeling - great job - I'll watch for the next...<BR/><BR/>btw, Wagner twittered this and I twittered Poetry Train Revisited.Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-11582615200203414212009-01-26T22:59:00.000+05:302009-01-26T22:59:00.000+05:30i like this style alot :)i like this style alot :)gPhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07439371766182405053noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-63620029499504946352009-01-26T22:50:00.000+05:302009-01-26T22:50:00.000+05:30This flows very nicely.This flows very nicely.Billhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10717622168200846486noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-86385496661787664372009-01-26T22:36:00.000+05:302009-01-26T22:36:00.000+05:30This is awesome...I love how you let the last word...This is awesome...I love how you let the last word carry you forward to the next thought. So cleverly written and filled with meaning!Sherri B.https://www.blogger.com/profile/00834386300886224116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-15679625459749424612009-01-26T20:56:00.000+05:302009-01-26T20:56:00.000+05:30great talent...great talent...sribblerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07149904778193565770noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-89850115689933659352009-01-26T19:55:00.000+05:302009-01-26T19:55:00.000+05:30I have read some of your posts. There were Zen Mom...I have read some of your posts. There were Zen Moments in my life when I used to visit OSHO in seventies and eighties. I would like to revisit your writing.<BR/><BR/>If you like short stories and paintings, then a visit to my blogs would be an interesting one for you.<BR/><BR/>Naval Langa <BR/><A HREF="http://cleanfiction.blogspot.com/" REL="nofollow">SHORT STORIES by NAVAL LANGA</A> <BR/><A HREF="http://paintingsgalleries.blogspot.com/" REL="nofollow">PAINTINGS GALLERIES</A>NAVAL LANGAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12954455340860119085noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-513364224634439782009-01-26T16:39:00.000+05:302009-01-26T16:39:00.000+05:30You've made every word count there.You've made every word count there.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-56244955935387375372009-01-26T11:16:00.000+05:302009-01-26T11:16:00.000+05:30This says much without taking up a lot of words.This says much without taking up a lot of words.Noah the Greathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11777681562599472033noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-4231084007500134442009-01-26T09:50:00.000+05:302009-01-26T09:50:00.000+05:30I like how this flows from that last word to the f...I like how this flows from that last word to the first of each succeeding haiku. Looking forward to the TBC.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-72534000986701011552009-01-26T09:21:00.000+05:302009-01-26T09:21:00.000+05:30You have hit your haikuing stride! The series read...You have hit your haikuing stride! <BR/><BR/>The series reads like a "swirling storm" "open outwards" til - the "merge", or maybe even more.<BR/><BR/>Keep going -Ken Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08435742064532588528noreply@blogger.com