tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post6230164209191202148..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: cornersgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger30125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-64010692667608895752010-11-04T03:18:51.481+05:302010-11-04T03:18:51.481+05:30its like a wave .....well written Gautami.its like a wave .....well written Gautami.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-54534744426151927112010-11-01T08:12:35.110+05:302010-11-01T08:12:35.110+05:30I like the circling back, how every act seems like...I like the circling back, how every act seems like an incantation.Debhttp://stoneymoss.org/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-45388780123227586332010-11-01T00:25:33.621+05:302010-11-01T00:25:33.621+05:30Heyy
So very creative and intelligent.
When you s...Heyy <br />So very creative and intelligent.<br />When you said 'I bend the rules' I wondered how and hopped over.<br />And IM glad I was curious.<br />The concpet of Naisaiku poetry utilised in such an exquisite way. <br />This is brilliant poetry!Vibhuti Bhandarkarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00145588190836915806noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-31774907819625722912010-10-30T21:57:27.167+05:302010-10-30T21:57:27.167+05:30I like the ideas here of what we watch and what wa...I like the ideas here of what we watch and what watches us, among the tremors.nanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03445777687088584603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-50346899402117249632010-10-30T19:32:23.855+05:302010-10-30T19:32:23.855+05:30Lovely writing once again! I like how you began a...Lovely writing once again! I like how you began and ended with the covered corners.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-63913207940136741622010-10-30T10:00:51.654+05:302010-10-30T10:00:51.654+05:30Ah, the directions you've chosen worked wonder...Ah, the directions you've chosen worked wonderfully well! A fine read, as usual...Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-43649576296001452872010-10-30T09:11:05.656+05:302010-10-30T09:11:05.656+05:30Really enjoyed this--how you had a sort of descend...Really enjoyed this--how you had a sort of descending/ascending cadence to it. Beautifully written.<br /><br />http://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/2010/10/30/big-tent-poetry-timekeepers/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-86916348260825013122010-10-30T08:57:41.432+05:302010-10-30T08:57:41.432+05:30Love the in and out movement and use of corners. T...Love the in and out movement and use of corners. The last line is great,<br /><br />ElizabethElizabethhttp://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2010/10/29/visitors-from-a-sequence-dream/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-58666747438615650702010-10-30T06:24:47.646+05:302010-10-30T06:24:47.646+05:30i love the different ways this poem can be interpr...i love the different ways this poem can be interpreted. beautiful.<br /><br /><i>JP/deborah</i>JanePoet Version 3.0http://www.janepoet.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-17087666085755637812010-10-30T02:53:07.998+05:302010-10-30T02:53:07.998+05:30another stunning post ! love it :)another stunning post ! love it :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-12366589292120885362010-10-29T23:45:17.731+05:302010-10-29T23:45:17.731+05:30I could feel the earthquake shaking the shelf. Be...I could feel the earthquake shaking the shelf. Be well.<br /><br />Thank you for the comment on my short blog. My writing has moved to the concrete for a while at least. Stop by. http://www.retireinstyleblog.com<br /><br />bb+ (Retire In Style Blog)https://www.blogger.com/profile/05114209481329773753noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-69932040381936241972010-10-29T21:59:57.115+05:302010-10-29T21:59:57.115+05:30I love the scene, the story, and I'm still pon...I love the scene, the story, and I'm still pondering why you need to have your corners covered. Thought provoking.Business IQhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03383555340302028043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-9257137964879367622010-10-29T15:02:54.318+05:302010-10-29T15:02:54.318+05:30A great idea, a different twist on the prompt. Th...A great idea, a different twist on the prompt. The word Tremor invoked a fear of earthquakes in this context, so I hope you are from that danger.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-63403575547243324652010-10-29T14:18:59.302+05:302010-10-29T14:18:59.302+05:30I really like the way the first stanza sets the sc...I really like the way the first stanza sets the scene; a living tableau.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00861397533660827678noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-52697985545405096342010-10-29T06:40:31.584+05:302010-10-29T06:40:31.584+05:30lovely!!lovely!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-1324874841247089242010-10-29T04:53:00.612+05:302010-10-29T04:53:00.612+05:30Gautami, so lovely to read your piece. I goofed a...Gautami, so lovely to read your piece. I goofed and used "rampart" instead of "rampant"! <br /><br />Double use of words, you smarty, you are so good with prompts. This flows beautifully. Thanks, G.<br /><br />Amy BLAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-3948424498638957682010-10-28T14:29:51.978+05:302010-10-28T14:29:51.978+05:30I really enjoyed this and loved the last line, it ...I really enjoyed this and loved the last line, it bought it all together and finished it so well. <br /><br /><a href="http://panopticulated.blogspot.com/2010/10/peace-inspired-by-three-word-wednesday.html" rel="nofollow">My 3WW</a>Susannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-73631416412954467652010-10-28T03:58:07.087+05:302010-10-28T03:58:07.087+05:30you have that miracle touch in your words.Loved yo...you have that miracle touch in your words.Loved your poem!Uma Anandanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11529447615364043190noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-82911041505450172932010-10-28T01:27:46.941+05:302010-10-28T01:27:46.941+05:30You too chose the topic of latent energy. Well don...You too chose the topic of latent energy. Well done!Rinkly Rimeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07890344869337115307noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-53649285158740547502010-10-28T00:29:22.018+05:302010-10-28T00:29:22.018+05:30as usual it's both beautiful and uniqueas usual it's both beautiful and uniquepiahttp://courtingdestiny.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-33620229803131008262010-10-28T00:12:03.663+05:302010-10-28T00:12:03.663+05:30Hi Gautami, beautiful touch as ever!
<3 AndyHi Gautami, beautiful touch as ever!<br /><br /><3 AndyAndy Sewinahttp://naisaiku.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-2689844043315737172010-10-27T22:45:55.301+05:302010-10-27T22:45:55.301+05:30I'm not a huge poetry buff but I really enjoye...I'm not a huge poetry buff but I really enjoyed the ebb and flow of this. Nice one.Gary Bakerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02283560376212654045noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-4464494983301481032010-10-27T22:15:58.121+05:302010-10-27T22:15:58.121+05:30Beautifully written and I love the last too, wonde...Beautifully written and I love the last too, wonderful.Deborahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06231195313149947101noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-13826049148552689582010-10-27T21:28:43.492+05:302010-10-27T21:28:43.492+05:30Great use of the prompt. I love the last line. Lov...Great use of the prompt. I love the last line. Love and Light, SenderAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-47338064161690322632010-10-27T21:16:41.575+05:302010-10-27T21:16:41.575+05:30As always, a beautiful use of the words. It's ...As always, a beautiful use of the words. It's a joy to come to your site.Judyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15335026948607722749noreply@blogger.com