tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post6347769402462483730..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: falling apartgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-35248849855358556972011-11-14T08:59:03.255+05:302011-11-14T08:59:03.255+05:30Well described and fun to read.Well described and fun to read.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-73499397664399224142011-11-14T02:07:04.922+05:302011-11-14T02:07:04.922+05:30Hello.
We will trip, stumble & fall, but our i...Hello.<br />We will trip, stumble & fall, but our inner voice always compels us to pick ourselves up & keep on moving.<br /><br />You expressed this very well.<br />Thanks for sharing, Gautami.<br /><br /><a href="http://mypoetcharm.blogspot.com/2011/11/imaginary-dreams.html" rel="nofollow">Imaginary Dreams</a>The Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00667034322952126127noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-42569899049477104092011-11-13T21:17:59.848+05:302011-11-13T21:17:59.848+05:30Life has a way of tripping you up when you least e...Life has a way of tripping you up when you least expect it.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-36113839785699958572011-11-11T12:22:08.274+05:302011-11-11T12:22:08.274+05:30So much emotion evoked through a very common circu...So much emotion evoked through a very common circumstance. Its not often we can embrace life situations in its entirety and learn lessons from them. You've captured something quite profound here, not something many can do in such simple words. Pleasure visiting your blog.AfterTimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01314458213637288705noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-11404842347925243792011-11-10T20:47:13.870+05:302011-11-10T20:47:13.870+05:30how amazing,
love the wording.how amazing,<br />love the wording.The Noiseless Cuckooclockhttp://www.thenoiselesscuckooclock.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-28419035702715700502011-11-10T18:12:22.560+05:302011-11-10T18:12:22.560+05:30I sure hope this wasn't a true story! If so, ...I sure hope this wasn't a true story! If so, I hope you're OK :)Bonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10096591352278195759noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-83753146716881537062011-11-10T18:01:08.239+05:302011-11-10T18:01:08.239+05:30When you've gotta go (down) you gotta go!When you've gotta go (down) you gotta go!Altonianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02841390371168941022noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-49892139207580535862011-11-10T04:06:42.124+05:302011-11-10T04:06:42.124+05:30(serves me right) stayed with me and I went back t...(serves me right) stayed with me and I went back to re-read. It makes me wonder when I fall, where have I gone wrong. Is hubris at the core of most falls? Thought-provoking.nanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03445777687088584603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-69252037853367457652011-11-10T02:58:10.526+05:302011-11-10T02:58:10.526+05:30I loved the pace and pathos in this piece. Great w...I loved the pace and pathos in this piece. Great workOld Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-15528153831645958092011-11-10T01:33:38.813+05:302011-11-10T01:33:38.813+05:30Perhaps a little too much wine?Perhaps a little too much wine?Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-8391998786440024962011-11-09T23:40:17.119+05:302011-11-09T23:40:17.119+05:30Good metaphor, nicely executedGood metaphor, nicely executedAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-2074393891625897412011-11-09T23:10:51.881+05:302011-11-09T23:10:51.881+05:30Interesting use of the three words; thanks.Interesting use of the three words; thanks.Berownehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09524661173663604641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-30413297112754007012011-11-09T22:45:26.632+05:302011-11-09T22:45:26.632+05:30nicely done. those darn heels always trying to pul...nicely done. those darn heels always trying to pull you down.Sheilagh Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13741333943021570641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-44217339696858514212011-11-09T22:37:55.882+05:302011-11-09T22:37:55.882+05:30from the soul....nicely done and thanks for sharin...from the soul....nicely done and thanks for sharingWayne Pitchkohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-50527314879845841412011-11-09T21:43:50.278+05:302011-11-09T21:43:50.278+05:30You have done this well!!
I see the determination...You have done this well!! <br />I see the determination to get back on those feet ~<br />"taking me down<br />(serves me right)<br />I will not hitch a ride<br />I will muster my strength" <br />The last lines are sad when timely help is not coming forth!!Nankahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05428694673909046094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-7835574835643635522011-11-09T21:18:47.654+05:302011-11-09T21:18:47.654+05:30I guess everything is connected to the shoe umm so...I guess everything is connected to the shoe umm sole, great verse.Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-30945527701129252502011-11-09T20:38:12.552+05:302011-11-09T20:38:12.552+05:30The bottom of our shoes tell many stories..you hav...The bottom of our shoes tell many stories..you have told this one beautifully as ever..JaeJae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-7052784398454520872011-11-09T19:05:11.496+05:302011-11-09T19:05:11.496+05:30Waiting to be seen and heard, beautiful!Waiting to be seen and heard, beautiful!ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-52849302904325673302011-11-09T18:47:01.439+05:302011-11-09T18:47:01.439+05:30That's rough. As the years pass, fear of help...That's rough. As the years pass, fear of helplessness increases for me. This captures just such a fear.Yousei Himehttp://tasmith1122.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-88376348569418569102011-11-09T15:39:47.812+05:302011-11-09T15:39:47.812+05:30Its beautiful... I liked it a lot... Thanks for sh...Its beautiful... I liked it a lot... Thanks for sharing..<br /><br />Shashi<br />ॐ नमः शिवाय <br />Om Namah Shivaya<br />http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/11/whispers-tears-in-rain.htmlShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-45808999979312945962011-11-09T11:06:55.161+05:302011-11-09T11:06:55.161+05:30(P.S. I don't mean I enjoy the crumple! but ho...(P.S. I don't mean I enjoy the crumple! but how you depict it!)Kathy B.https://www.blogger.com/profile/09475101089455608729noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-65656132825234657752011-11-09T11:06:14.248+05:302011-11-09T11:06:14.248+05:30I like the specificness of the poem's question...I like the specificness of the poem's question, not "why" but "why NOW?", and the depiction of the stages in the downward crumple.Kathy Bischopinghttp://drinkthenewwine.blogspot.com/2011/07/pocahontas.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-87421844086402281002011-11-09T09:16:23.964+05:302011-11-09T09:16:23.964+05:30oo very evocative..not just the fall but the desir...oo very evocative..not just the fall but the desire to cry out in hopes maybe that someone hears...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-81065433475497617942011-11-09T03:08:45.346+05:302011-11-09T03:08:45.346+05:30Very well done. I can remember something like this...Very well done. I can remember something like this happening when I used to wear heels and one came off. You've also reminded me I need to go shoe-shopping this week. I'm of an age now when falling is quite likely, so I only wear high-quality flat shoes with orthotic insoles and I'm down to just one pair, which is almost worn out.<br />Your writing is excellent.<br /><br />Kay, Alberta, Canada<br />An Unfittie’s Guide to Adventurous TravelKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-54215812571959404322011-11-09T02:53:03.656+05:302011-11-09T02:53:03.656+05:30A philosophical outlook.♥A philosophical outlook.♥Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.com