tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post6623384613952450259..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: Capitulation---Poetry Thursdaygautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger33125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-39254625866635020542007-06-28T21:17:00.000+05:302007-06-28T21:17:00.000+05:30The last line made me smile, "Pollinating each oth...The last line made me smile, "Pollinating each other..."<BR/>Almost cheeky after the otherwise touching deep sentiment expressed throughout.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-31128204236272605652007-06-10T05:43:00.000+05:302007-06-10T05:43:00.000+05:30Gauatami, you have done what I have so far been in...Gauatami, you have done what I have so far been incapable of, you have written a beautiful love poem, that speaks the words in my heart but not the words that come out when I try to put them on paper. Thank you. I have to read this to my husband.Marcia (MeeAugraphie)https://www.blogger.com/profile/00656288704821106002noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-90897102668557736722007-06-10T05:32:00.000+05:302007-06-10T05:32:00.000+05:30i'm so happy to have discovered your blogs through...i'm so happy to have discovered your blogs through poetry thursday.BeLoved....https://www.blogger.com/profile/01771614142603767239noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-12028302756364107792007-06-10T00:27:00.000+05:302007-06-10T00:27:00.000+05:30what warms more the human heart if not love and be...what warms more the human heart if not love and being complete.gPhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07439371766182405053noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-86322260609161298952007-06-09T23:11:00.000+05:302007-06-09T23:11:00.000+05:30Thanks for your comments. Love has to be like this...Thanks for your comments. Love has to be like this. Either this or nothing.<BR/><BR/>I don't write love poetry very often. Not unless I feel strongly about it.gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-33649505758778263882007-06-09T12:13:00.000+05:302007-06-09T12:13:00.000+05:30A shudder runs through me. You've touched my soul....A shudder runs through me. You've touched my soul.Boruthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13990298332042076231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-31434365879467697682007-06-08T20:26:00.000+05:302007-06-08T20:26:00.000+05:30I love how you capture the vulnerability and trust...I love how you capture the vulnerability and trust that true love requires. And reading it is like falling in love all over again (sigh!)chicklegirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03000215636803243874noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-83034848233270172712007-06-08T18:40:00.000+05:302007-06-08T18:40:00.000+05:30Not that long ago a sentence such as "pollinating ...Not that long ago a sentence such as "pollinating each other<BR/>for an intense divine union" could have you placed in irons M'lady.<BR/><BR/>I adore what you have to say about voluntarily putting your neck, heart, and soul, on the chopping block for someone else. Isn't that the very definition of crazy?<BR/><BR/>You start this sensual journey with some ocular intercourse and never let go. Very intimate.<BR/><BR/>"hitherto unknown".<BR/>Nothing on Earth is as exciting as that first time feeling. You really 'got' me with this one.<BR/>love it.Romeo Morningwoodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10826410608415260786noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-32285850467679798792007-06-08T13:59:00.000+05:302007-06-08T13:59:00.000+05:30Hi Gautami! I really love this and the feeling it...Hi Gautami! I really love this and the feeling it has to me of gentleness, merging and deep trust. It's very beautiful and moves me deeply too. I really like the words you used -- surrender, embrace, gaze, melting, home, completeness, whole, depths, and divine union. You created a really lovely experience and poem. I'm off to the British Museum now! <BR/>:)Clarehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11746014771712020963noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-3776564088042011482007-06-08T10:50:00.000+05:302007-06-08T10:50:00.000+05:30The first line really grabbed me. Your expression ...The first line really grabbed me. Your expression of vulnerability is very touching to read.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-2358758542958277992007-06-08T05:57:00.000+05:302007-06-08T05:57:00.000+05:30This was really something new from you that I did ...This was really something new from you that I did not expect. Free-verse. It has been quite a while. You are so talented with the form poetry that I was not expecting this. What a wonderful love story expressed in this poem.Clockworkchrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09889793842709699969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-15277723700285210522007-06-08T05:24:00.000+05:302007-06-08T05:24:00.000+05:30SO BEAUTIFUL.. I am drunk with your words and want...SO BEAUTIFUL.. I am drunk with your words and wanting your verse to never end.<BR/><BR/>Thank you for taking me on this journey!Tracie Lyn Huskamphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04310134565653685553noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-64391824847561594312007-06-08T04:41:00.000+05:302007-06-08T04:41:00.000+05:30beautifulbeautifulKaihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03525571908541394623noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-22850389729914984822007-06-08T01:19:00.000+05:302007-06-08T01:19:00.000+05:30Thanks for visiting Mimi Writes.Peace to you and y...Thanks for visiting Mimi Writes.<BR/><BR/>Peace to you and yours,<BR/><BR/>MimiMimi Lenoxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01616635898420835541noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-74245889152123923282007-06-08T00:52:00.000+05:302007-06-08T00:52:00.000+05:30What an intense poem! You picked the perfect title...What an intense poem! You picked the perfect title. <BR/><BR/>How wonderful it is to have someone look at us like that--it's the best feeling in the world.Januaryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13036651950996873368noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-22629798073861055532007-06-08T00:36:00.000+05:302007-06-08T00:36:00.000+05:30So many wonderful lines in here that create a very...So many wonderful lines in here that create a very romantic image and emotions of real love. Bravo!Tammy Brierlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14673290512175050093noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-41653531485162927952007-06-08T00:24:00.000+05:302007-06-08T00:24:00.000+05:30Yes, very romantic! A beautiful read!Yes, very romantic! A beautiful read!Reginahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14287107184977896696noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-3105475287049578802007-06-08T00:06:00.000+05:302007-06-08T00:06:00.000+05:30beautifully romantic!beautifully romantic!polonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12631341810150848122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-86233878925310955332007-06-07T23:30:00.000+05:302007-06-07T23:30:00.000+05:30Hi Guatami,I love this piece for its sensuous tend...Hi Guatami,<BR/><BR/>I love this piece for its sensuous tenderness and the vulnerability displayed. <BR/><BR/>ClayClay Lowehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06376366547846941628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-31855850933439045322007-06-07T21:50:00.000+05:302007-06-07T21:50:00.000+05:30Wow. What an absolutely beautiful way to describe ...Wow. What an absolutely beautiful way to describe the Sacred Union. I just loved this.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-8819759459017413702007-06-07T20:47:00.000+05:302007-06-07T20:47:00.000+05:30I love the way you use words.I love the way you use words.Whitesnakehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07681488364720396274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-83088799705923246542007-06-07T20:05:00.000+05:302007-06-07T20:05:00.000+05:30Ah, what a lovely love poem. You have truly opened...Ah, what a lovely love poem. You have truly opened yourself to us and to love.From what was once broken, the poet has found a safe home and a new love. Would that it could always be so. Beautiful.<BR/><BR/>love-bdCassiopeia Riseshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02625091389788114012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-59687268906628431382007-06-07T19:11:00.000+05:302007-06-07T19:11:00.000+05:30Gentle, this "journey beyond experience".Gentle, this "journey beyond experience".Debhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14744896385434246402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-26357744185423254232007-06-07T18:02:00.000+05:302007-06-07T18:02:00.000+05:30So romantic!So romantic!tinamtlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07680312912081802924noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-33733491214623687032007-06-07T17:12:00.000+05:302007-06-07T17:12:00.000+05:30Yet another beauty, Gautami!Yet another beauty, Gautami!Don Iannone, D.Div., Ph.D.https://www.blogger.com/profile/01922412641433868679noreply@blogger.com