tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post6719283633338469723..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: moon eats sugar puffsgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-1273929996999654702009-04-25T18:20:00.000+05:302009-04-25T18:20:00.000+05:30This was fun! I didn't realize what you were doin...This was fun! I didn't realize what you were doing until I got to the end so I went back and read it in a couple different ways. Love it! <br /><br />The family idea is so fresh and unique!Linda Jacobshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14459940700516084069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-19463421389676428642009-04-25T09:58:00.000+05:302009-04-25T09:58:00.000+05:30Yes, of course. I like this.Yes, of course. I like this.Jeeveshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02059095696768768954noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-61434841415511317852009-04-25T08:40:00.000+05:302009-04-25T08:40:00.000+05:30Yes, yes and yes! :)
Well done.Yes, yes and yes! :)<br />Well done.Janice Thomsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02506920585319893814noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-90181647701060188592009-04-25T07:50:00.000+05:302009-04-25T07:50:00.000+05:30really works well....nicely donereally works well....nicely doneWayne Pitchkohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-28348058037700791512009-04-25T07:22:00.000+05:302009-04-25T07:22:00.000+05:30you always have some of the most interesting forms...you always have some of the most interesting forms!J. Andrew Lockharthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12567156257114496618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-10932237093319096552009-04-25T06:15:00.000+05:302009-04-25T06:15:00.000+05:30Yes!Yes!Whitesnakehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07681488364720396274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-52696572684151831312009-04-25T06:11:00.000+05:302009-04-25T06:11:00.000+05:30very well done ..you fit the format perfectly..:)very well done ..you fit the format perfectly..:)Unknownwriter49https://www.blogger.com/profile/08591304033835586907noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-62098604008244870272009-04-25T00:13:00.000+05:302009-04-25T00:13:00.000+05:30That works really well, both poems separate and to...That works really well, both poems separate and together. I like the idea of a hungry moon. <br /><br />It's cool to see other poets playing with the twinning concept. I might have to find some more pattern poetry challenges for Sat. Scribes in the future.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-22112862471057968812009-04-25T00:04:00.000+05:302009-04-25T00:04:00.000+05:30It's surreal including the Maths stuff about corne...It's surreal including the Maths stuff about corners.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-81040766214254249002009-04-24T23:17:00.000+05:302009-04-24T23:17:00.000+05:30Complicated, but I think you pulled it off well!Complicated, but I think you pulled it off well!Clairehttp://www.thisbrokensky.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-27612945410041133402009-04-24T22:15:00.000+05:302009-04-24T22:15:00.000+05:30As usual, your imagery is stunning. And the idea o...As usual, your imagery is stunning. And the idea of a twin poem (I hadn't thought of that word for it) appeals to me. I'm into pattern poetry and the visual placment of words and lines on the page, so this is right up my alley. One thing that I find just a little visually distracting are the "indents" in some of the lines on the poems. This might be a Blogger issue, it does that to the first lines of the poems I post, too. But I think a straight margin for the right-hand poem would make reading across the two easier. Anyway, that's not really a criticism, and I love the ideas you've laid out so eloquently.Deborah Godinhttp://notesfromthecloudmessenger.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-27255145031063221962009-04-24T21:38:00.000+05:302009-04-24T21:38:00.000+05:30What an intersting way to craft a poem, good job!What an intersting way to craft a poem, good job!sagehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17499891950639742366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-82574355107923754892009-04-24T19:28:00.000+05:302009-04-24T19:28:00.000+05:30I am grateful that the moon is there to block a lo...I am grateful that the moon is there to block a lot of the spacecrap that is constantly hurtling towards us because of the Earth's gravitational field.<br /><br />Your celestial family has issues..like every family I suppose..but I'm concerned about their ability to communicate openly.<br />Perhaps they should arrange fro some couselling.Romeo Morningwoodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10826410608415260786noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-57833913421114280332009-04-24T18:50:00.000+05:302009-04-24T18:50:00.000+05:30yes it does work well as a poem / series of poems....yes it does work well as a poem / series of poems.Crafty Green Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-69688663742616727022009-04-24T15:12:00.000+05:302009-04-24T15:12:00.000+05:30Yeah, this is brilliant!! It reads top to bottom, ...Yeah, this is brilliant!! It reads top to bottom, left to right, and bottom to top and quite likely a few more positions that I haven't figured out yet. I also like the bottom line that links the two stand alone's physically. Phew!SweetTalkingGuy..http://sewina.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-64093451937150573782009-04-24T15:07:00.000+05:302009-04-24T15:07:00.000+05:30yes, I think you have succeeded :-) I actually lik...yes, I think you have succeeded :-) I actually like it best the way it appears in this combox.sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03818420999930644450noreply@blogger.com