tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post673352157181363213..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: gyrating on its own steam of oathgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger35125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-813007353686432202009-04-23T19:08:00.000+05:302009-04-23T19:08:00.000+05:30I'm impressed - five random phrases and three rand...I'm impressed - five random phrases and three random words. I would've probably made a muddle of it.Ann (bunnygirl)http://www.maelstromrock.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-87655739239540393052009-04-23T16:23:00.000+05:302009-04-23T16:23:00.000+05:30Nicely done. Love this concept of using lines out ...Nicely done. Love this concept of using lines out of poems and making your own.Angelhttp://www.angelsharums-storyboard.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-4199412479464574782009-04-23T12:10:00.000+05:302009-04-23T12:10:00.000+05:30Actually I was quite apprehensive of this idea of ...Actually I was quite apprehensive of this idea of writing random lines from other poets works.<br />Felt it as a sort of plagiarism.<br />But once I read it I could feel the piece's strngth.<br /><br />~Harshamaglomaniachttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11960445338745677162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-20001681129886184512009-04-23T11:21:00.000+05:302009-04-23T11:21:00.000+05:30You are brave.
Why is it that you neglected to uti...You are brave.<br />Why is it that you neglected to utilise a verse from the poem concerning a young man from Nantucket?Romeo Morningwoodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10826410608415260786noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-25738387426817838942009-04-23T09:36:00.000+05:302009-04-23T09:36:00.000+05:30Very nicely created..
Good and smart..Very nicely created..<br />Good and smart..sudharm baxihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05267161615281216261noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-86890622665533699892009-04-23T08:48:00.000+05:302009-04-23T08:48:00.000+05:30Leave it to me to not read the small print. Here ...Leave it to me to not read the small print. Here I am noticing the underlined snippets and thinking, why are they underlined? And then, there's something strangely familiar in these words.<br /><br />Duh! Well I've never conceived of this sort of exercise. But it certainly is interesting. I have a sense of a ghost, perhaps a close relative haunting you throughout. Very cool. : )when the musics overhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16266298848244629919noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-4755455345924274052009-04-23T08:11:00.000+05:302009-04-23T08:11:00.000+05:30great patchwork poem, quite a visual feast, though...great patchwork poem, quite a visual feast, though I'm not good at interpreting poems, I do think this one has a certain dreamlike quality, somewhat like a person inside a dream he can't escape from even though he wanted tolissahttp://www.justwritingwords.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-23988842988915336402009-04-23T07:52:00.000+05:302009-04-23T07:52:00.000+05:30I really like where the lines led you. Nicely don...I really like where the lines led you. Nicely done.Pamhttp://coosacreek.org/amputated/2009/04/22/the-landscape-of-her-body/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-69291943169139929272009-04-23T07:39:00.000+05:302009-04-23T07:39:00.000+05:30Hello! This sounds great! However it entails havin...Hello! This sounds great! However it entails having more than one poem book. I, you see, have none! Boo for me. I better work on that....<br /><br />Thanks for stopping by!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-84100861716096292002009-04-23T06:55:00.000+05:302009-04-23T06:55:00.000+05:30now that was perfectly done..I enjoyed it..:)now that was perfectly done..I enjoyed it..:)Unknownwriter49https://www.blogger.com/profile/08591304033835586907noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-16631440337860528992009-04-23T06:09:00.000+05:302009-04-23T06:09:00.000+05:30Bill, whatever gave you the idea that what I write...Bill, whatever gave you the idea that what I write is not my own voice? Maybe you have not been reading ALL my works. <br /><br />Doing such random work once in a while, does not mean I have lost my creativity. And I see this as creativity too but in another direction. And we have to give it it a shot everywhere.gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-61378420591138160732009-04-23T05:15:00.000+05:302009-04-23T05:15:00.000+05:30You did this flawlessly!! I can't believe that it ...You did this flawlessly!! I can't believe that it read so very fluidly, I was lost in feeling tethered in the opening than I saw all the different poets - what creativity!Amarettogirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12964177199530466412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-83536218090184172222009-04-23T04:42:00.000+05:302009-04-23T04:42:00.000+05:30You weave this together so seamlessly and with a w...You weave this together so seamlessly and with a wonderful rhythm. Thanks.Liz at Yips and Howlshttp://www.blog.elizabethenslin.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-74391786164354061812009-04-23T04:21:00.000+05:302009-04-23T04:21:00.000+05:30excellent as usuall..keep it upexcellent as usuall..keep it upWayne Pitchkohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-47863161109846744002009-04-23T04:06:00.000+05:302009-04-23T04:06:00.000+05:30"and she walks with her hands in her dress
maybe s..."and she walks with her hands in her dress<br />maybe she is feeling her own femaleness"<br /> Absolutely love those lines. Very powerful imagery.Witchmojohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12505648583406267340noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-40973632063772675622009-04-23T01:54:00.000+05:302009-04-23T01:54:00.000+05:30I appreciate what you are doing, gautami, but I'd ...I appreciate what you are doing, gautami, but I'd also like to see you develop this theme without the other voices. It's time we heard gautami's voice without distractions.Billhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10717622168200846486noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-54221973074255226112009-04-23T00:52:00.000+05:302009-04-23T00:52:00.000+05:30Excellent job of word weaving. And certainly not a...Excellent job of word weaving. And certainly not a poem to scan through quickly. It deserves to be absorbed.Amyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11965309801522574763noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-77877252143647294742009-04-22T23:42:00.000+05:302009-04-22T23:42:00.000+05:30great idea using different poets lines!
great job!...great idea using different poets lines!<br />great job!Lucyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11442070518518821892noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-41482909627024413802009-04-22T22:35:00.000+05:302009-04-22T22:35:00.000+05:30Great poetic creativity here, melding the borrowed...Great poetic creativity here, melding the borrowed lines into a poem of your own.<br /><BR>Philip Thrifthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03021615111948806998noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-57659760039006594742009-04-22T21:57:00.000+05:302009-04-22T21:57:00.000+05:30Wonderfully done!Wonderfully done!Kimberlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08629699907387811744noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-84626117325712904512009-04-22T21:50:00.000+05:302009-04-22T21:50:00.000+05:30i like how you inter-weave others' work.i like how you inter-weave others' work.Life without Clotshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00626387562608801835noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-34609543503262000362009-04-22T21:44:00.000+05:302009-04-22T21:44:00.000+05:30strong imagery, but then, i wouldn't expect anyhin...strong imagery, but then, i wouldn't expect anyhing less from you.polonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12631341810150848122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-4732949126393086812009-04-22T20:59:00.000+05:302009-04-22T20:59:00.000+05:30The borrowed lines feel as they belong. Very good ...The borrowed lines feel as they belong. Very good jobAnahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06611955404994410354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-43470793690762025742009-04-22T20:41:00.000+05:302009-04-22T20:41:00.000+05:30young heiress of a naked dream is an incredible li...young heiress of a naked dream is an incredible linepiahttp://courtingdestiny.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-27890257301515037172009-04-22T20:33:00.000+05:302009-04-22T20:33:00.000+05:30Yeah nicely, not only did you manage to include th...Yeah nicely, not only did you manage to include the three words but you created a new piece from a a few apparently random lines of other peoples work.<br /><br />Well done!SweetTalkingGuy..http://sewina.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.com