tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post6758316061400702154..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: walk the worldgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-14041587024496452442011-03-12T01:42:25.387+05:302011-03-12T01:42:25.387+05:30beautiful...there is something very calming or may...beautiful...there is something very calming or maybe freeing about the feel of your words.rmpWritingshttp://dontopendontthrowaway.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-15723306690596765382011-03-11T17:44:38.457+05:302011-03-11T17:44:38.457+05:30Beautiful. This is a favorite: "in the valley...Beautiful. This is a favorite: "in the valley of coyotes / he felt so brave / he felt so free"Jameshttp://coyotemercury.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-78500950175958996872011-03-11T10:54:44.311+05:302011-03-11T10:54:44.311+05:30That was lovely, as always!That was lovely, as always!Madeleine Begun Kanehttp://www.madkane.com/humor_blog/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-81054217059351636272011-03-11T06:09:59.499+05:302011-03-11T06:09:59.499+05:30Beautifully written. You took me there...Beautifully written. You took me there...Renhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16707254869085913114noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-60637389376419483412011-03-11T03:32:11.425+05:302011-03-11T03:32:11.425+05:30www.patcegan.wordpress.comwww.patcegan.wordpress.compatceganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05215631272813490203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-61158236125944807882011-03-11T03:31:02.393+05:302011-03-11T03:31:02.393+05:30It facinates me how differently we use the prompts...It facinates me how differently we use the prompts. This is stong and yet touching. Thank you! hugs, patpatceganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05215631272813490203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-62393112937610585512011-03-10T21:32:50.315+05:302011-03-10T21:32:50.315+05:30This touches..thanks..This touches..thanks..Ramesh Soodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05589155663544312563noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-41172993469849728872011-03-10T21:01:12.627+05:302011-03-10T21:01:12.627+05:30I love this piece, especially the last line! Well...I love this piece, especially the last line! Well done.<br />~Brendabrenda whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-29622149075642391282011-03-10T17:39:02.779+05:302011-03-10T17:39:02.779+05:30You've connected so strongly to the original l...You've connected so strongly to the original lyrics, and yet this is distinctly a different work. I love word portraits, and this one is a good story too.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-19465826085587303702011-03-10T10:06:41.048+05:302011-03-10T10:06:41.048+05:30It still sounds like Quixote himself, but much mor...It still sounds like Quixote himself, but much more broken down... Quixote as he really would have been. :) Love that "new world deep inside the moors".Joseph Harkerhttp://namingconstellations.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-73701621723151367032011-03-10T07:23:17.092+05:302011-03-10T07:23:17.092+05:30This is truly a great poem with a wondrous sense o...This is truly a great poem with a wondrous sense of freedom about it.<br /><br />I did however have a feeling that "seized" should have read "ceased" in the fourth line. Sorry if I have misunderstood that section.Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-2731655142992003852011-03-10T05:24:57.525+05:302011-03-10T05:24:57.525+05:30This flowed beautifully...wonderful imagery. VbThis flowed beautifully...wonderful imagery. VbAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-45198383362279777992011-03-10T02:11:06.797+05:302011-03-10T02:11:06.797+05:30loved the images and the rhythm!loved the images and the rhythm!piahttp://courtingdestiny.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-9331351149510001252011-03-10T00:57:05.696+05:302011-03-10T00:57:05.696+05:30Full of atmosphere, and great imagery - so very w...Full of atmosphere, and great imagery - so very well done.Altonianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02841390371168941022noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-2325338364721769222011-03-10T00:20:20.356+05:302011-03-10T00:20:20.356+05:30Very beautiful imagery and the amn trudging on lov...Very beautiful imagery and the amn trudging on loved that.Sheilagh Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13741333943021570641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-83495255777923547552011-03-09T23:01:41.526+05:302011-03-09T23:01:41.526+05:30What a journey..I enjoyed your descriptions in thi...What a journey..I enjoyed your descriptions in this piece..a little different from some of your poems perhaps? Very enjoyable..JaeJae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-7248996737698358772011-03-09T22:57:18.055+05:302011-03-09T22:57:18.055+05:30Gautami, I like how you placed some
rhyming in thi...Gautami, I like how you placed some<br />rhyming in this and that ending is<br />powerful.<br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-36420663467884909052011-03-09T22:26:34.367+05:302011-03-09T22:26:34.367+05:30"He trudged on with his battered self" ..."He trudged on with his battered self" Love that.<br />This is like one of those folk tales of the questing youngest son whose innocence is the only thing he has.barbarahttp://catsdetour.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-47791895162010181282011-03-09T21:51:32.311+05:302011-03-09T21:51:32.311+05:30Nice imagery from around the world in your well ex...Nice imagery from around the world in your well expressed poem! And you brought out the meaning of the three words beautifully! Loved this one!Nankahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05428694673909046094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-12696883918311917222011-03-09T21:49:38.130+05:302011-03-09T21:49:38.130+05:30Aahh!! Too good as always!! :)Aahh!! Too good as always!! :)Lalita Singhhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09688302536340138757noreply@blogger.com