tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post7203630626103776391..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: one fourth of a poemgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger28125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-70996554183530374942008-12-22T22:45:00.000+05:302008-12-22T22:45:00.000+05:30Wow, what power in these few words. Very well exp...Wow, what power in these few words. Very well expressed.Lotus Readshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02081192215823615529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-13227733203752228402008-12-21T09:43:00.000+05:302008-12-21T09:43:00.000+05:30very graphicvery graphicAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-29963022863911638382008-12-16T23:08:00.000+05:302008-12-16T23:08:00.000+05:30the words reveal the actual pain itself..-Aiz.the words reveal the actual pain itself..<BR/>-Aiz.Princesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10151681639111356988noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-48160834730648738482008-12-15T08:35:00.000+05:302008-12-15T08:35:00.000+05:30I was reading your header here; how poetry comes t...I was reading your header here; how poetry comes to you. Art does the same to me. Sometimes when i am on a roll I will go to sleep and get flashes of images and I have no idea where they come from, that I have never seen them before, but is like watching a changing slide show. Amazing process this.AscenderRisesAbovehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04635424605245677136noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-63470265967277943932008-12-14T23:04:00.000+05:302008-12-14T23:04:00.000+05:30Oh my, what an explosion! And coming from such few...Oh my, what an explosion! And coming from such few words, at that! Well done!M as in Minthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02737629866326152834noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-1365651198683838752008-12-14T15:52:00.000+05:302008-12-14T15:52:00.000+05:30This certainly packs a punch.This certainly packs a punch.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-90363559033127860952008-12-13T15:13:00.000+05:302008-12-13T15:13:00.000+05:30nicely done...nicely done...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-85626769001872164142008-12-13T09:07:00.000+05:302008-12-13T09:07:00.000+05:30So much said (and well) in those few words, Gautam...So much said (and well) in those few words, Gautami.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-41940238045220947582008-12-13T05:11:00.000+05:302008-12-13T05:11:00.000+05:30simply a powerful statement written in a beautiful...simply a powerful statement written in a beautiful timeless 1/4 poem...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-15374039083535801132008-12-12T20:24:00.000+05:302008-12-12T20:24:00.000+05:30Does it need to be completed? I think the shattere...Does it need to be completed? I think the shattered element of the poem works so well with implied verses that will never be.Julia Phillips Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15392455413201190775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-48148173831786010102008-12-12T13:25:00.000+05:302008-12-12T13:25:00.000+05:30Thinking of this again Gautami, when your mind bec...Thinking of this again Gautami, when your mind becomes your enemy and its vague movements fail to register itself…it becomes the most tragic. <BR/><BR/>My reading, Gautami…solely mine.<BR/><BR/>Wishes, <BR/>devikaDevika Jyothihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02349153846127145464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-85013776089398999192008-12-12T11:25:00.000+05:302008-12-12T11:25:00.000+05:30Many things in life are not anticipated at all. We...Many things in life are not anticipated at all. We react upon manifested scenes. Nasty reality compressed well into few lines.cyclopsevenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11440123931878867581noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-71208917430226043762008-12-12T06:26:00.000+05:302008-12-12T06:26:00.000+05:30This is like watching a television account of a te...This is like watching a television account of a terrorist attack! Very moving!Linda Jacobshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14459940700516084069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-36580741306284442792008-12-12T05:11:00.000+05:302008-12-12T05:11:00.000+05:30It say alot in very few words!It say alot in very few words!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-18146419795579723422008-12-12T00:52:00.000+05:302008-12-12T00:52:00.000+05:30how vivid. and its a reality. how r u Gautami?how vivid. and its a reality. <BR/><BR/>how r u Gautami?gPhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07439371766182405053noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-50614663938362356272008-12-11T23:04:00.000+05:302008-12-11T23:04:00.000+05:30this is well written just like it is. I agree wit...this is well written just like it is. I agree with thomg, powerful.Daily Panichttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06179183072566661932noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-70926154663471245262008-12-11T17:08:00.000+05:302008-12-11T17:08:00.000+05:30That word "splintered" immediately makes me think ...That word "splintered" immediately makes me think of tiny pieces of precious glass scattered! Lovely poem!Gemma Wisemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-42358557650683240852008-12-11T15:14:00.000+05:302008-12-11T15:14:00.000+05:30loved the name of the post as much as the poem :)loved the name of the post as much as the poem :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-28244697021853561302008-12-11T09:32:00.000+05:302008-12-11T09:32:00.000+05:30the compact nature of the poem makes it more power...the compact nature of the poem makes it more powerful, nicely donesagehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17499891950639742366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-78030868837697081412008-12-11T08:33:00.000+05:302008-12-11T08:33:00.000+05:30Good one, Gautami wishes, devikaGood one, Gautami <BR/><BR/>wishes, <BR/>devikaDevika Jyothihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02349153846127145464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-65440491500366661242008-12-11T01:15:00.000+05:302008-12-11T01:15:00.000+05:30Vivid truth - you exposed this topic in fine fashi...Vivid truth - you exposed this topic in fine fashion...Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-29994391413412903042008-12-10T22:25:00.000+05:302008-12-10T22:25:00.000+05:30Pregnant with meaning.Pregnant with meaning.venuss66https://www.blogger.com/profile/17804023747114879683noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-10006368105930302992008-12-10T22:21:00.000+05:302008-12-10T22:21:00.000+05:30You have captured with such quiet tension that ter...You have captured with such quiet tension that terrible split/second when everything changes forever...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-69913859942472044572008-12-10T22:05:00.000+05:302008-12-10T22:05:00.000+05:30hey,,, sometimes when the splintered bodies start ...hey,,, sometimes when the splintered bodies start to fly.... there isn't a whole lot more that can be said.......paisleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-82706575257812575692008-12-10T21:22:00.000+05:302008-12-10T21:22:00.000+05:30Very true, indeed.Very true, indeed.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.com