tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post7285722648896491817..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: gravity rolls around defying physicsgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-42107672286456343162013-05-24T22:53:47.167+05:302013-05-24T22:53:47.167+05:30I like your style!I like your style!Belva Rae Stapleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16018806071465719524noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-70188116993007852082013-05-24T03:41:52.072+05:302013-05-24T03:41:52.072+05:30Very nice.
ZQVery nice.<br />ZQZQhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08521836993023109556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-53712480160896831162013-05-23T23:52:36.876+05:302013-05-23T23:52:36.876+05:30Your writing voice has become sooo
good I really d...Your writing voice has become sooo<br />good I really did enjoy reading here. Really good!seasideauthorhttp://seasideauthorhaiku.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-84118934099963614232013-05-23T21:03:21.461+05:302013-05-23T21:03:21.461+05:30A clever interpretation of the prompt. We are pla...A clever interpretation of the prompt. We are plagued with dandelions just now, but we leave them for the bees.<br /><br />Your word verification is virtually unreadable - this is my fifth attempt. If you were on Wordpress, Askimet catches all the spam, no need for word verification!vivinfrancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07388722600118753457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-24338954444636499712013-05-23T14:11:06.989+05:302013-05-23T14:11:06.989+05:30..oh, please... please do... loved your take.. smi.....oh, please... please do... loved your take.. smiles...kelvin s.m.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02591849636814413110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-79267679493867711272013-05-23T03:47:06.003+05:302013-05-23T03:47:06.003+05:30Always enjoy your posts Gautami. I relate to the t...Always enjoy your posts Gautami. I relate to the thoughts rolling around in my head like clouds. Hard to catch up to them sometimes.Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-88057554098714464912013-05-22T07:43:10.411+05:302013-05-22T07:43:10.411+05:30Strong, bleak... why do I waste my breath over it...Strong, bleak... why do I waste my breath over it all? love this write.<br /><br /> <a href="http://undercaws.com/2013/05/20/beyond-safe-harbor/" rel="nofollow">Beyond Safe Harbor</a><br />brenda whttp://undercaws.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-13639552169541239532013-05-22T06:29:21.987+05:302013-05-22T06:29:21.987+05:30Gautami, this is dark and well written. I see many...Gautami, this is dark and well written. I see many others have written in bleakness as well.<br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-75939577921006282812013-05-22T05:30:21.963+05:302013-05-22T05:30:21.963+05:30Beautiful! This is using the wordle? I had glanced...Beautiful! This is using the wordle? I had glanced at it. I'm enthralled with your writing.Maggie Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044824920398442496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-35622700961654186592013-05-22T01:08:20.302+05:302013-05-22T01:08:20.302+05:30Really enjoyed this reflective poem.Really enjoyed this reflective poem.Lisa Williamshttp://law-poetry.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-16230795249121955562013-05-21T17:21:26.009+05:302013-05-21T17:21:26.009+05:30but the lined cloud's
moves make it up for
a...but the lined cloud's <br />moves make it up for <br />a wonderful visual<br /><br />The last line is profound. The lazy cloud movement can be captivating and can hold out on its own! Nicely Gautami!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-56701041028796413652013-05-21T15:25:06.137+05:302013-05-21T15:25:06.137+05:30Thus has the feel of an edgy quantum reality tunne...Thus has the feel of an edgy quantum reality tunnel to me, Gautami, i like ! Silent Otto https://www.blogger.com/profile/00475494332523156366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-68724152422352942042013-05-21T07:56:53.588+05:302013-05-21T07:56:53.588+05:30I enjoyed the reflection and awareness in this poe...I enjoyed the reflection and awareness in this poem. Stunning!The Write Girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01333258283404241827noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-36057327733174486452013-05-21T06:05:31.730+05:302013-05-21T06:05:31.730+05:30Your poem made me ponder the mind.
How are thought...Your poem made me ponder the mind.<br />How are thoughts can define or release us.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-26077588633479126092013-05-21T04:59:45.793+05:302013-05-21T04:59:45.793+05:30Great last line.
=)Great last line.<br /><br />=)Susan Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16049586085703324088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-48922572827847146362013-05-21T01:23:21.930+05:302013-05-21T01:23:21.930+05:30Always thought provoking and a bit profound, like ...Always thought provoking and a bit profound, like Old Egg, you've got me thinking of gravity in different lights and moments. Your words are married well to the image. Fantastic write,<br /><br />Elizabeth<br />http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2013/05/19/mizfit-on-remembering/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-48059420170172745312013-05-20T23:13:36.694+05:302013-05-20T23:13:36.694+05:30Such a clever and enigmatic title which carries th...Such a clever and enigmatic title which carries through the poem like an other worldliness..gentle and yet powerful impact..Jae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-49830714577831934262013-05-20T21:32:04.458+05:302013-05-20T21:32:04.458+05:30I like the dandelion's approach.I like the dandelion's approach.Cherylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15937202381298099458noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-33336784041080550062013-05-20T19:08:02.701+05:302013-05-20T19:08:02.701+05:30indeed nice visualsindeed nice visualsVandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-18343083974625074592013-05-20T18:48:57.632+05:302013-05-20T18:48:57.632+05:30Thoughts of despair made beautiful. Thoughts of despair made beautiful. Wanda Psychohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09398274683194725769noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-62912068193869095522013-05-20T14:55:30.167+05:302013-05-20T14:55:30.167+05:30This is divine! This is divine! Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-33715376572851497872013-05-20T11:45:54.102+05:302013-05-20T11:45:54.102+05:30"... lined cloud's moves make it up for a..."... lined cloud's moves make it up for a wonderful visual" ~ tells me not to miss the smallest rainbow which crowns the clouds, to catch it before it fades away!!Nankahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05428694673909046094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-5437785843405661832013-05-20T11:39:52.153+05:302013-05-20T11:39:52.153+05:30So lovely to have found your weblog again after a ...So lovely to have found your weblog again after a couple of years when it slipped off my radar. I see you are still writing great poetry :-)sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03818420999930644450noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-76199451787315040342013-05-20T09:14:30.221+05:302013-05-20T09:14:30.221+05:30Mankind makes such hard work of making his surroun...Mankind makes such hard work of making his surroundings beautiful whilst nature seems to do it so effortlessly. We will know the secret one day when we have learned our lesson. This piece was so thought provoking that I let my mind play on the word "gravity"!Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.com