tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post7307188016525165166..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: crossbowgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-33591464950356074262012-10-20T06:36:32.793+05:302012-10-20T06:36:32.793+05:30The history of a thousand nights
in one poem.The history of a thousand nights<br />in one poem.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05219289622305095956noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-12174099838446440662012-10-19T07:45:11.517+05:302012-10-19T07:45:11.517+05:30gautami, your poem is epic. india
and her fragranc...gautami, your poem is epic. india<br />and her fragrance her deeply rooted<br />elegance and strength and willingness to celebrate and adore<br />the human-ness of us our love.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-9734242581029816572012-10-13T07:45:47.939+05:302012-10-13T07:45:47.939+05:30interesting first line ~
"under the crust of ...interesting first line ~<br />"under the crust of the earth"<br />echoed in the last line ~<br />"deep within me"<br /><br />i like the mystery and this is full of wonderful phrases! great write!<br /><br />♥my heart's love songshttp://myheartslovesongs.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-65426447239531545082012-10-13T00:14:59.420+05:302012-10-13T00:14:59.420+05:30This one is very powerfully written ... loved read...This one is very powerfully written ... loved reading it !!!Amrit Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08333443172096537424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-67337708278448715362012-10-11T18:20:26.023+05:302012-10-11T18:20:26.023+05:30Gautami,
Read 2 poems now. Previous one enthuses ...Gautami,<br /><br />Read 2 poems now. Previous one enthuses encouragement and this one shows helplessness of one who is unable to understand what is going on in life.<br /><br />Take careJackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15896075408610203350noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-5777973528181173832012-10-11T07:11:25.994+05:302012-10-11T07:11:25.994+05:30This is wonderful! It has a mysterious erotic fee...This is wonderful! It has a mysterious erotic feel to it, and as such has a great deal of power.<br /><br />Thanks for the visit!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-35191770108726887682012-10-11T03:54:33.056+05:302012-10-11T03:54:33.056+05:30There is an eerie, sad feeling of loss in this...e...There is an eerie, sad feeling of loss in this...emotive!Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-16785613030096153112012-10-11T02:54:31.582+05:302012-10-11T02:54:31.582+05:30Unrequited love is painful and heart-breaking. You...Unrequited love is painful and heart-breaking. You've described it very well.Mariannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17734900426632493796noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-77600645302204910232012-10-11T01:46:42.493+05:302012-10-11T01:46:42.493+05:30I like the line "my fever for you is unbearab...I like the line "my fever for you is unbearable" and the way in which you give clues to this fevered process in the poem. The hunter and the hunted are one and the same. Well done.Carol Steel https://www.blogger.com/profile/01331628292567383426noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-87727950702141809122012-10-10T23:41:14.504+05:302012-10-10T23:41:14.504+05:30This is an incredible love poem. Masterful.This is an incredible love poem. Masterful.Cherylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15937202381298099458noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-73083136956247669502012-10-10T23:36:05.154+05:302012-10-10T23:36:05.154+05:30Excellent imagery in this, felt almost a panic.Excellent imagery in this, felt almost a panic.Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-6584320167635645852012-10-10T23:07:45.653+05:302012-10-10T23:07:45.653+05:30I love "invisible wind blows you away.' ...I love "invisible wind blows you away.' Some nice phrasings in this poem.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-63403011834123363342012-10-10T22:44:08.539+05:302012-10-10T22:44:08.539+05:30So often we are unknowingly the targets...not alwa...So often we are unknowingly the targets...not always for 'Cupids' arrows. <br /><br />I like the brevity and depth of this. <br />Thank you for your visit. <br /><br />I use the Wordles as puzzle pieces and most always make them fit or bend them to my will...*giggle* It really is my muse at work. :)Juleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00571987715911379165noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-72851871494996963612012-10-10T07:17:33.071+05:302012-10-10T07:17:33.071+05:30interesting...scaring the scarecrows away, when th...interesting...scaring the scarecrows away, when their job is to scare the crows...the explosions within you as well...interesting...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-31970481408695587622012-10-10T05:48:26.589+05:302012-10-10T05:48:26.589+05:30I love the internal voice in this poem and how ext...I love the internal voice in this poem and how external and internal explosions are occuring simultaneously. I wonder what happens next! The Write Girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01333258283404241827noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-3035084242106119232012-10-10T05:07:07.956+05:302012-10-10T05:07:07.956+05:30Oh I love this. The crossbow and you the target o...Oh I love this. The crossbow and you the target of love. How creative. Wonderful response to the prompt. What a tender love poem. Different. I like. Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-38149972340587410392012-10-08T06:12:54.809+05:302012-10-08T06:12:54.809+05:30Love the mystery in this, Gautami. Excellent.
Pam...Love the mystery in this, Gautami. Excellent.<br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-84063051098309079932012-10-08T05:13:25.211+05:302012-10-08T05:13:25.211+05:30Visceral. The kind of love planted somewhere deep ...Visceral. The kind of love planted somewhere deep within that can't be moved. Bravo.Shaunahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15279846999053851468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-88373724295058942672012-10-08T02:33:46.317+05:302012-10-08T02:33:46.317+05:30I came looking for your scarecrow for One Single I...I came looking for your scarecrow for One Single Impression, and found instead your powerful wordle poem. Did you mistake the link?vivinfrancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07388722600118753457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-62352405643246476932012-10-08T00:53:33.516+05:302012-10-08T00:53:33.516+05:30The earth moves beneath the feet and there is a re...The earth moves beneath the feet and there is a response within the heart of the observer. Everyone should see and know, but no one else is aware. Wonderful write,<br /><br />Elizabeth<br />http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2012/10/07/one-day-road-trip/Elizabethhttp://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2012/10/07/one-day-road-trip/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-64383393962366184292012-10-07T22:33:19.621+05:302012-10-07T22:33:19.621+05:30Two explosions: one under the earth, one in the sp...Two explosions: one under the earth, one in the speaker. Both point to something devastating going on. Powerful.<br /><br /><a href="http://magicalmysticalteacher.wordpress.com/2012/10/07/whirling-with-wendell-berry/" rel="nofollow"><b>Whirling with Wendell Berry</b></a>Magical Mystical Teacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01853272111925075994noreply@blogger.com