tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post7464166273690720049..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: hugging the stones, I meditate ferventlygautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger32125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-49451576993827190432010-07-18T10:28:05.921+05:302010-07-18T10:28:05.921+05:30beautiful and interesting poem well done:D Thank f...beautiful and interesting poem well done:D Thank for sharing^^Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-50726219628126930702010-07-16T03:17:35.713+05:302010-07-16T03:17:35.713+05:30now I have made railway tracks
feel free to travel...<i>now I have made railway tracks<br />feel free to travel on those</i><br /><br />That was just perfect.Bonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10096591352278195759noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-69458386610939190592010-07-16T00:17:18.488+05:302010-07-16T00:17:18.488+05:30so well said,
what beautiful images.
my entry is...so well said,<br />what beautiful images.<br /><br /><br />my entry is up.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-55500573688496757762010-07-15T17:54:58.553+05:302010-07-15T17:54:58.553+05:30Beautiful!Beautiful!shailhttp://shailsnest.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-88132739894928644602010-07-15T17:25:31.358+05:302010-07-15T17:25:31.358+05:30Wonderful poem, Tami. It so nicely tells the stor...Wonderful poem, Tami. It so nicely tells the story of life and love and of the cycles of both. <br /><br />When I got to the railway tracks I was reminded of a little family of seven I saw last night playing down with the rails of the London Metro. They were rats, Mama, Papa, and five kids.<br /><br />And thank you for the nice prompt, Overt.Jimhttp://jimmiehov6.blogspot.com/search/label/One%20Single%20Impressionnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-79165354142189062632010-07-14T11:24:29.870+05:302010-07-14T11:24:29.870+05:30This was beautiful - I think this is the one I lik...This was beautiful - I think this is the one I like best from amongst all your poems. :)<br />Thanks for sharing.Felicityhttp://www.mandatoryhappiness.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-25266719435683030862010-07-14T07:35:01.941+05:302010-07-14T07:35:01.941+05:30nicely done Gautami...thanks for thisnicely done Gautami...thanks for thisWayne Pitchkohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-2291302917262618542010-07-14T03:35:50.988+05:302010-07-14T03:35:50.988+05:30This was such a visual poem for me, could see the ...This was such a visual poem for me, could see the broken axis, the stones, and love that slips through your fingers. Lovely work.Nara Malonehttp://naramalone.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-90581920238285148582010-07-13T21:02:42.126+05:302010-07-13T21:02:42.126+05:30Your final line is so prayer like.... mmmm... I wa...Your final line is so prayer like.... mmmm... I want to drink it all in...<br /><br /><a href="http://juliejordanscott.typepad.com/jjspoetry/2010/07/oh-my-percy-poem-prompted-by-one-single-impression.html" rel="nofollow"> My "Overt" poem in this week's OSI - </a>Julie Jordan Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06558015761690505791noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-29114068298651191822010-07-13T16:56:52.590+05:302010-07-13T16:56:52.590+05:30Lovely writing . Have a beautiful style. Very nice...Lovely writing . Have a beautiful style. Very nice poemTuppencehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16655946887696755187noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-29506351121904326592010-07-13T15:22:28.424+05:302010-07-13T15:22:28.424+05:30beautifully put Gautami, how I hate waking up from...beautifully put Gautami, how I hate waking up from my beautiful dreams, sighLorrainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14667955555940467301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-60325918524617658722010-07-13T07:30:44.534+05:302010-07-13T07:30:44.534+05:30wow...and i am amazed when i say that...:-)
beaut...wow...and i am amazed when i say that...:-)<br /><br />beautiful metaphor I say so...<br /><br />thanks for your comment in my post and sure I will link one of my latest short story at Monday Poetry Train Revisited!<br /><br />have a nice day Gautami!Amityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18222122594130598313noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-76381743239127976572010-07-13T06:30:55.147+05:302010-07-13T06:30:55.147+05:30Excellent! Excellent!Excellent! Excellent!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-44997164679025035862010-07-13T06:15:17.925+05:302010-07-13T06:15:17.925+05:30passionate overt...!passionate overt...!Sandra.ifhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07861930312460679629noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-47032249618003203602010-07-13T03:48:18.255+05:302010-07-13T03:48:18.255+05:30yeah what they all sed... those last two lines jus...yeah what they all sed... those last two lines just knock us over with understanding... this is a keeper!!one more believerhttp://pieceofpie.wordpress.com/2010/07/12/small-swim/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-8269778781865040482010-07-12T22:54:03.125+05:302010-07-12T22:54:03.125+05:30Exquisite...love will never stay if it is held tig...Exquisite...love will never stay if it is held tightly...free it.<br /><br />railway tracks...Monday Poetry Train...? :)brenda whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-24728062629807705702010-07-12T09:48:37.711+05:302010-07-12T09:48:37.711+05:30This is great Gautami, I especially like the last ...This is great Gautami, I especially like the last verse. Well done!<br /><br />www.mypoeticpath.wordpress.comGeraldine https://www.blogger.com/profile/07410019941984295767noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-65303540699218334672010-07-12T02:52:15.831+05:302010-07-12T02:52:15.831+05:30A heartfelt melody of love so close, yet lost. An...A heartfelt melody of love so close, yet lost. And how to pave a path back to that love? You poem seems so real. I hope your love has returned.Loch Robhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10912194134878544461noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-47998834552905569922010-07-11T23:51:00.023+05:302010-07-11T23:51:00.023+05:30Good travelling-poetry.
Best wishes
RalfGood travelling-poetry.<br /><br />Best wishes<br />RalfRalf Brökerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08602494065251750620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-85645567105929652802010-07-11T22:36:17.996+05:302010-07-11T22:36:17.996+05:30Gautami,
Feelings on someone you treasure going a...Gautami,<br /><br />Feelings on someone you treasure going away expressed so well in the opening words itself. <br /><br />Take careJackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15896075408610203350noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-55524725035076587562010-07-11T19:58:00.090+05:302010-07-11T19:58:00.090+05:30Very well said, Guatami..
now I have made railwa...Very well said, Guatami.. <br /><br />now I have made railway tracks<br />feel free to travel on those<br /><br />Needs total awareness about self to be able to bestow such freedom..<br />I always learn from your wisdom..Ramesh Soodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05589155663544312563noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-90161974640047762622010-07-11T18:12:54.954+05:302010-07-11T18:12:54.954+05:30Letting go and being there--not easy! Beautiful. T...Letting go and being there--not easy! Beautiful. Thanks.SandyCarlsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752798823532580733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-50873109509282743952010-07-11T18:06:18.686+05:302010-07-11T18:06:18.686+05:30Just beautiful, starting with the title and to the...Just beautiful, starting with the title and to the perfect dream ending.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-33091579226819643312010-07-11T15:54:54.729+05:302010-07-11T15:54:54.729+05:30Excellent, as always.Excellent, as always.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-3577201947038636272010-07-11T13:19:50.622+05:302010-07-11T13:19:50.622+05:30They've all said what I was going to say. Tha...They've all said what I was going to say. Thankyou for this poem.vivienne blakehttp://vivinfrance.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.com