tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post8114142112963093458..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: the sky melts away from the earthgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-80952283798891490942009-07-16T19:33:31.703+05:302009-07-16T19:33:31.703+05:30Tami, this is so beautiful and as always well done...Tami, this is so beautiful and as always well done. It is good to read your work again.<br /><br /><br />love, MelanieCassiopeia Riseshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02625091389788114012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-79735654792518056432009-07-16T08:06:36.614+05:302009-07-16T08:06:36.614+05:30Sweet. Sensual.Sweet. Sensual.Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-65961714684917846552009-07-16T02:30:41.613+05:302009-07-16T02:30:41.613+05:30and try to come out of the haze
you are watching ...and try to come out of the haze <br />you are watching me fumble<br /><br />Loved those lines. Very lovely poem.Vhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14226599576623415692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-66365482738362654542009-07-16T00:38:17.666+05:302009-07-16T00:38:17.666+05:30So many vivid and splendid lines in this. I loved...So many vivid and splendid lines in this. I loved the vulnerability in the last line.Bonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10096591352278195759noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-54854496018731647892009-07-14T23:18:15.823+05:302009-07-14T23:18:15.823+05:30a real joy to read. my favorite,
"in that ...a real joy to read. my favorite, <br /><br />"in that trice, the sky melts <br />away from the shaky earth, <br />the moonlight pins us down"Jessiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11173809658342411265noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-41992020422906134372009-07-14T21:08:10.789+05:302009-07-14T21:08:10.789+05:30Lovely lines in this poem, very sexy:
the winds ...Lovely lines in this poem, very sexy: <br /><br /><i>the winds help us close the door</i>,<br /><br />the marvelous fourth stanza, and the nimble but foggy and dreamy/dreaming last line.murat11https://www.blogger.com/profile/00663364407992075130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-8935652068240627372009-07-14T20:04:01.423+05:302009-07-14T20:04:01.423+05:30dreams make things possible. wonderful.dreams make things possible. wonderful.cyclopsevenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11440123931878867581noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-50829411056384957902009-07-14T10:14:13.502+05:302009-07-14T10:14:13.502+05:30Wow!!!This is romantic.Wow!!!This is romantic.Jeeveshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02059095696768768954noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-26804883363675346562009-07-14T08:26:37.594+05:302009-07-14T08:26:37.594+05:30I too love that line "the moonlight pins us d...I too love that line "the moonlight pins us down" - lovely mood in this piece.Dee Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05077141911351737390noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-28803186929955327502009-07-14T06:20:39.709+05:302009-07-14T06:20:39.709+05:30a dreamy quality..a dreamy quality..Irenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12918979903066830662noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-53133378323551059542009-07-14T05:53:56.656+05:302009-07-14T05:53:56.656+05:30This is so immediate! Beautiful example of showin...This is so immediate! Beautiful example of showing instead of telling! Wow, I was right there!Linda Jacobshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14459940700516084069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-38288373828775495812009-07-14T03:20:49.502+05:302009-07-14T03:20:49.502+05:30All of the above..........All of the above..........Whitesnakehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07681488364720396274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-65330502855153656022009-07-13T23:57:03.788+05:302009-07-13T23:57:03.788+05:30That is a fantastic "break" from work. F...That is a fantastic "break" from work. Fantasy or reality... Who cares?Sylviahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09488349215933429299noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-83000983594814325162009-07-13T22:57:26.803+05:302009-07-13T22:57:26.803+05:30very nice, I like this. Thank you for the comment ...very nice, I like this. Thank you for the comment on my Wordpress blog, obviously I have two but Wordpress has served me better. I am unsure of this Poetrytrain. You and one other person are the only ppl who have left me comments or even looked at my blog since I have "jumped" on that train the last two weeks. I seem to do a better job of promoting myself. lol. Still I truly appreciate you taking a look and I will bookmark you and keep a follow on your poetry.<br /><br /><br />Peace.<br /><br /><br /><br />sCharlz Chttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05242348722612584567noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-88237657349947152172009-07-13T21:57:14.623+05:302009-07-13T21:57:14.623+05:30Very sensual
I like "the moonlight pins us d...Very sensual<br /><br />I like "the moonlight pins us down"Nara Malonehttp://narasnook.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-33987445565105517652009-07-13T20:57:20.798+05:302009-07-13T20:57:20.798+05:30These are wonderful:
'the winds help us close...These are wonderful:<br /><br />'the winds help us close the door<br />dreamy fantasies come alive'<br /><br />and<br /><br />'when I find my moorings <br />and try to come out of the haze <br />you are watching me fumble'Julia Phillips Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15392455413201190775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-9217511244307725132009-07-13T16:48:28.884+05:302009-07-13T16:48:28.884+05:30The intimacy is palpable!
Fabulous!The intimacy is palpable! <br />Fabulous!indicaspecieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04082836899942612554noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-27142159141415859032009-07-13T13:15:16.813+05:302009-07-13T13:15:16.813+05:30An intimate moment there.An intimate moment there.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-66661706399681875062009-07-13T10:33:32.345+05:302009-07-13T10:33:32.345+05:30Tender moments like this make it all worthwhile.Tender moments like this make it all worthwhile.Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-21391632162917276722009-07-13T08:01:52.158+05:302009-07-13T08:01:52.158+05:30very nice, makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside...very nice, makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. I like the sensual, the unspoken story...you do it wellGeorge S Battyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15407137341843413701noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-18377510435585575332009-07-13T06:28:21.831+05:302009-07-13T06:28:21.831+05:30Hello Gautami~ this is so personal, intimate and b...Hello Gautami~ this is so personal, intimate and beautiful. I feel every emotion with your words. I think this is another of my favorites. Have a great night.poefusionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15157059633840032305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-72286090797931845712009-07-13T02:54:52.428+05:302009-07-13T02:54:52.428+05:30Beautiful!Beautiful!venuss66https://www.blogger.com/profile/17804023747114879683noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-50988695772860032962009-07-13T02:36:38.403+05:302009-07-13T02:36:38.403+05:30this is lovely in its everyday intimacy and depth....this is lovely in its everyday intimacy and depth.sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03818420999930644450noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-78274012827380140002009-07-13T02:26:34.214+05:302009-07-13T02:26:34.214+05:30Very ... well ... physical. It affects directly. P...Very ... well ... physical. It affects directly. Prose or poem? Who wants to decide. Good anyway.<br /><br />Best wishes<br />RalfRalf Brökerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08602494065251750620noreply@blogger.com