tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post8613946574951663824..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: blank page soakedgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger35125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-74024436782762476212008-11-13T15:14:00.000+05:302008-11-13T15:14:00.000+05:30'those words which splithim apart; now hiddencan m...'those words which split<BR/>him apart; now hidden<BR/>can mend him somehow'<BR/><BR/>ah the rending power of words!<BR/>ah the mending power of words!<BR/><BR/>this is haunting.<BR/><BR/>thanx for visitingJoy Reneehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04976987581528470589noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-43071391516060071192008-11-12T08:20:00.000+05:302008-11-12T08:20:00.000+05:30This was filled with emotion...beautifully sad.This was filled with emotion...beautifully sad.Sherri B.https://www.blogger.com/profile/00834386300886224116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-10861887064156596432008-11-11T23:08:00.000+05:302008-11-11T23:08:00.000+05:30Now looking at it...i begin to feel...there's noth...Now looking at it...<BR/><BR/>i begin to feel...<BR/>there's nothing "paradoxical" about anything..It is the way you look at it, no Gautami? <BR/><BR/>hope you agree and do not remove this, as you did with mine earlier...two three times...<BR/><BR/>there are people who just read comments too, they say ;-)<BR/><BR/>wishes!<BR/>devikaDevika Jyothihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02349153846127145464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-6948046351670674502008-11-11T22:25:00.000+05:302008-11-11T22:25:00.000+05:30OK -- I have no computer skills. For days I've bee...OK -- I have no computer skills. For days I've been calling up my shortcut for you and always come to the same post from September 10. "Busy," I think. Sometimes I can't post regularly -- but I know there have been comments. Well, maybe writer's block.<BR/><BR/>I apologize for not visiting the REAL blog -- apparently, I bookmarked a specific post from WOW. Duh.<BR/><BR/>This is a lovely poem and it's good to see your work again.Jeaniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17482528482559445943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-60365765303837501302008-11-11T18:15:00.000+05:302008-11-11T18:15:00.000+05:30Very deep and powerful. Thank you for sharing.Than...Very deep and powerful. Thank you for sharing.<BR/>Thank you for your visit too. Take care.venuss66https://www.blogger.com/profile/17804023747114879683noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-73183132334113520932008-11-11T07:10:00.000+05:302008-11-11T07:10:00.000+05:30Lovely blog.So much to read.Would visit it again.K...Lovely blog.So much to read.Would visit it again.Keep writing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-33237238366239468712008-11-11T05:43:00.000+05:302008-11-11T05:43:00.000+05:30Yes, words can split us apart but the magic is tha...Yes, words can split us apart but the magic is that they can put us back together, too! Wonderfuly written!Linda Jacobshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14459940700516084069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-69563236433446062562008-11-11T03:39:00.000+05:302008-11-11T03:39:00.000+05:30This is loaded! A story of hope triumphing over he...This is loaded! A story of hope triumphing over helplessness, like a window on a stolen moment in time, a nightmare revisited, perhaps!<BR/><BR/>Excellent work!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-58570115988572977312008-11-10T23:31:00.000+05:302008-11-10T23:31:00.000+05:30"..the bleeding ink that stains and blurs with tea..."..the bleeding ink that stains and blurs with tears"_<BR/>"paradoxically in a different way"_<BR/>..many thanks for sharing this..Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-65778404129880989352008-11-10T23:15:00.000+05:302008-11-10T23:15:00.000+05:30Sadly vivid. Paradoxical, indeed!!Sadly vivid. Paradoxical, indeed!!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-51696308936498060352008-11-10T19:57:00.000+05:302008-11-10T19:57:00.000+05:30It is nice :)It is nice :)Princesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10151681639111356988noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-57195368478628555912008-11-10T17:40:00.000+05:302008-11-10T17:40:00.000+05:30Sad but lovely. Well done!Sad but lovely. Well done!indicaspecieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04082836899942612554noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-6407136052236578932008-11-10T08:38:00.000+05:302008-11-10T08:38:00.000+05:30This just pulled at my heart. Sad and profound.This just pulled at my heart. Sad and profound.Terihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16029722057577018059noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-19845259100540777802008-11-10T07:20:00.000+05:302008-11-10T07:20:00.000+05:30Marvellous, Gautami - as always. I like how the na...Marvellous, Gautami - as always. I like how the narrator felt freed and relieved when no one could actually read what he'd written. Sometimes art is a dialogue only between the writer and himself or herself.Julia Phillips Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15392455413201190775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-27457825520250265662008-11-10T06:03:00.000+05:302008-11-10T06:03:00.000+05:30Very nice, Gautami. I think I've been there!Very nice, Gautami. I think I've been there!sagehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17499891950639742366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-81328754832915135472008-11-10T05:03:00.000+05:302008-11-10T05:03:00.000+05:30I like it, there's so much in just something down,...I like it, there's so much in just something down, even if it can't be read once it is writtenAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-69774588073181880832008-11-10T03:41:00.000+05:302008-11-10T03:41:00.000+05:30To me this captures the opposite of a difficulty w...To me this captures the opposite of a difficulty writing what one feels, but rather the fact that we may easily write what cannot share or even should not share.sgreerpitthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07764262558160301061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-23969910708906903972008-11-10T03:21:00.000+05:302008-11-10T03:21:00.000+05:30Very, very poignant. I can feel the image you desc...Very, very poignant. I can feel the image you described.Quiet Pathshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00758542150832581706noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-18468645106298315222008-11-10T02:59:00.000+05:302008-11-10T02:59:00.000+05:30Here is a true feeling of hopelessness expressed. ...Here is a true feeling of hopelessness expressed. The tear soaked paper is so much more lasting than is the fickle 'delete' key.<BR/>..Jimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-22751927024244254162008-11-09T23:22:00.000+05:302008-11-09T23:22:00.000+05:30powerful and emotional... love itpowerful and emotional... love itpolonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12631341810150848122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-27901223135896419852008-11-09T20:30:00.000+05:302008-11-09T20:30:00.000+05:30Liked it, but felt the whole point lies here:"para...Liked it, but felt the whole point lies here:<BR/><BR/>"paradoxically in a different way"<BR/><BR/>wishes!<BR/>devikaDevika Jyothihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02349153846127145464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-80169450375814679112008-11-09T19:30:00.000+05:302008-11-09T19:30:00.000+05:30sometimes just the act of writing things out witho...sometimes just the act of writing things out without sharing the words brings such healing & your poem says that to me.qualcosa di bellohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15107076097533430296noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-50254250991204269452008-11-09T15:53:00.000+05:302008-11-09T15:53:00.000+05:30I like the idea of skillful ink that somehow undoe...I like the idea of skillful ink that somehow undoes its own work! What an interesting idea. Makes me think the ink has a life of its own somehow.<BR/><BR/>Beautiful done. I feel this one through and through.SandyCarlsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752798823532580733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-66011332913831641202008-11-09T15:38:00.000+05:302008-11-09T15:38:00.000+05:30An excellent paradoxical response.An excellent paradoxical response.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-58845569011545779152008-11-09T14:52:00.000+05:302008-11-09T14:52:00.000+05:30O the bleeding ink that stains and blurs with tear...O the bleeding ink that stains and blurs with tears.Mandyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09390965174767597956noreply@blogger.com