tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post8660206724456384891..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: dead stillgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger37125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-6557372426691997122011-11-14T07:24:37.791+05:302011-11-14T07:24:37.791+05:30the birds are where the food is...the birds are where the food is...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-90064055137607049302011-11-11T10:45:36.450+05:302011-11-11T10:45:36.450+05:30Neatly written. Well portrayed Gautami.Neatly written. Well portrayed Gautami.Shail Raghuvanshihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05484123238045040778noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-26528029318955017342011-11-11T02:48:52.609+05:302011-11-11T02:48:52.609+05:30a gathering of sorts indeed...a gathering of sorts indeed...ms piehttp://pieceofpie.wordpress.com/2011/11/10/sunday-scribblings-untold/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-18438233994254354492011-11-10T18:15:33.691+05:302011-11-10T18:15:33.691+05:30I've never noticed the absence of birds before...I've never noticed the absence of birds before. Then again, I've not noticed their presence either. But there always seems to be a breeze when I'm at the cemetery. Feels like the dead are speaking.Bonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10096591352278195759noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-11834699316279716802011-11-10T12:59:03.858+05:302011-11-10T12:59:03.858+05:30You create such an atmosphere!! Great imagery, wit...You create such an atmosphere!! Great imagery, with an excellent ending.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-55419691563318709832011-11-10T06:05:54.149+05:302011-11-10T06:05:54.149+05:30Thought provoking and a captivating write. :-)Thought provoking and a captivating write. :-)Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-18355706646922494602011-11-09T06:58:55.526+05:302011-11-09T06:58:55.526+05:30Now I want to go and photograph the birds mat a ce...Now I want to go and photograph the birds mat a cemetery. This poem certainly has a mellow tone...Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-82793597148648721462011-11-09T02:38:31.947+05:302011-11-09T02:38:31.947+05:30Clever write.
Anna :o]Clever write.<br /><br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-48283969990625719572011-11-08T08:02:25.102+05:302011-11-08T08:02:25.102+05:30Calmed by the dead. It is an eerie thought but als...Calmed by the dead. It is an eerie thought but also very possible. Nice poem!The Write Girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01333258283404241827noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-80396179439418068412011-11-08T07:44:06.724+05:302011-11-08T07:44:06.724+05:30What a "scary" one, but also it gives me...What a "scary" one, but also it gives me the chills. Why don't birds sing on a cementery?<br />They should sing for sure at that place to comfort them who have lost their beloved ones.Chèvrefeuillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00848986700725789154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-8464730619713630202011-11-08T07:22:12.899+05:302011-11-08T07:22:12.899+05:30I like the last two lines and the sense of opposit...I like the last two lines and the sense of opposites, yet an analogy in each line. <br /><br />Paraphrasing:<br /> <br />'splendour of a cemetry...<br />calmed by the dead still'<br /><br />Really clever and creative.Adura Ojohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10787703060107491771noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-85455397169670956992011-11-08T03:59:24.175+05:302011-11-08T03:59:24.175+05:30Nicely done. I love the second line in the first s...Nicely done. I love the second line in the first stanza.Unspokenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16065870952905767595noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-11243606635896135002011-11-08T01:59:34.356+05:302011-11-08T01:59:34.356+05:30nice...i like all the questions as they bring to l...nice...i like all the questions as they bring to life what is happening in the pic...i too find solace among the dead...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-91042116216897299632011-11-08T01:45:34.815+05:302011-11-08T01:45:34.815+05:30A real sense of mystery..I pause, and look behind ...A real sense of mystery..I pause, and look behind me...very nice!Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11985979258848310351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-35142314541058504522011-11-07T23:18:25.102+05:302011-11-07T23:18:25.102+05:30Wonderful!
ZQWonderful!<br />ZQZQhttp://rkgaron.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-39328048892888590032011-11-07T22:28:40.492+05:302011-11-07T22:28:40.492+05:30haunting,
well done.haunting,<br />well done.Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05532576755186051550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-42927904933753515232011-11-07T22:13:55.808+05:302011-11-07T22:13:55.808+05:30Perhaps, if you return in Spring there will be bir...Perhaps, if you return in Spring there will be birdsong. In the Autumn there might be just the odd tweet, otherwise the birds conserve their vigour for the Winter - and, of course many are on their way south.<br />Even so, the sentiments in your poem are worthy.<br />regards<br />HarryHarry Nicholsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16801422418560281658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-34605209179753170642011-11-07T21:43:29.629+05:302011-11-07T21:43:29.629+05:30Wonderful and Gothic.Wonderful and Gothic.CHummelKornellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10862056292807754590noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-24116018433178773812011-11-07T21:35:56.870+05:302011-11-07T21:35:56.870+05:30Perhaps the birds don't find the same solace i...Perhaps the birds don't find the same solace in our cemeteries because they are ours and not theirs.Bubbahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927345716112968689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-8019265205138723912011-11-07T18:47:35.748+05:302011-11-07T18:47:35.748+05:30Love how you link it up with questions! I ended up...Love how you link it up with questions! I ended up doing something similar with thoughts.izzyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06379007428464069723noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-22247531063922956252011-11-07T14:43:58.364+05:302011-11-07T14:43:58.364+05:30broodingbroodingIsabel Doylehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17974989548030799086noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-26793603600070739082011-11-07T14:27:24.209+05:302011-11-07T14:27:24.209+05:30Good questions Gautami!! You made it a bit eerie t...Good questions Gautami!! You made it a bit eerie too, gave me goose bumps!!Nankahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05428694673909046094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-8677079755156129612011-11-07T11:09:48.296+05:302011-11-07T11:09:48.296+05:30You have created an eerie feel with this...deliriu...You have created an eerie feel with this...delirium leaves...impending storm... dead still...nice workSusie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-52043014749739429652011-11-07T10:45:23.615+05:302011-11-07T10:45:23.615+05:30When I was a horrible little boy I used to collect...When I was a horrible little boy I used to collect wild birds eggs in a cemetery. I think they are quiet out of respect, unlike me.Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-36559063822308549512011-11-07T04:54:43.971+05:302011-11-07T04:54:43.971+05:30A rather eerie feel, overall. Enjoyed your well-ch...A rather eerie feel, overall. Enjoyed your well-chosen thoughts and words.Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.com