tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post889289375864067409..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: playing for pleasing the moongautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger42125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-20894879914467642082009-01-03T06:34:00.000+05:302009-01-03T06:34:00.000+05:30This one made me smile...~OThis one made me smile...<BR/><BR/>~OTravelerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00212825203076248889noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-82957312346003080142008-12-31T22:28:00.000+05:302008-12-31T22:28:00.000+05:30This is wondefully written! The dirt of the univer...This is wondefully written! The dirt of the universe squeaky clean. Wow! I really like that.<BR/><BR/>P.S. Thanks for linking me to the poetry train site.John E. Tranhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14594659729954601082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-10949799904681596952008-12-31T22:10:00.000+05:302008-12-31T22:10:00.000+05:30What a fabulous way to look at it. Very playful. Q...What a fabulous way to look at it. Very playful. Quite enjoyable.Patois42https://www.blogger.com/profile/07764936858778730692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-13287229256987395012008-12-31T18:35:00.000+05:302008-12-31T18:35:00.000+05:30good as usual!Have a Happy New Year!good as usual!<BR/><BR/>Have a Happy New Year!dsnake1https://www.blogger.com/profile/08724264906690080704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-53793097542574820492008-12-31T18:16:00.000+05:302008-12-31T18:16:00.000+05:30Hmm I like it!Hmm I like it!Whitesnakehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07681488364720396274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-39835367352655923302008-12-31T16:56:00.000+05:302008-12-31T16:56:00.000+05:30wonderful usage of personification:"peep out", "du...wonderful usage of personification:<BR/>"peep out", "dusting themselves from the dirt of the universe"(also love that phrase) and the moon's "wooing going full swing"<BR/><BR/>Flirtatious heavenly "bodies"! Your imagination flies high.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-56723137366292773372008-12-31T16:07:00.000+05:302008-12-31T16:07:00.000+05:30what an imagination !!! impressive :)Something for...what an imagination !!! impressive :)<BR/><BR/>Something for you here :<BR/><BR/>http://creatingnewblog.blogspot.com/2008/12/awarded.htmlAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-27273863692359345482008-12-31T11:48:00.000+05:302008-12-31T11:48:00.000+05:30Sue says "cosmic whimsy" and I love that descripti...Sue says "cosmic whimsy" and I love that description. I too like the impish sun and in particular the sound of the last line: wooing going full swing!Danika Dinsmorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06472222686878922186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-64013430353262947912008-12-31T10:18:00.000+05:302008-12-31T10:18:00.000+05:30I rather like the idea of the "impish sun" - What...I rather like the idea of the "impish sun" - What a flirt! :P<BR/><BR/>Thankyou for coming over to my pages. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-69825022601900747872008-12-31T08:53:00.000+05:302008-12-31T08:53:00.000+05:30This was fun to read aloud, especially with the in...This was fun to read aloud, especially with the internal rhymes hiding in there...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-1496274185576067502008-12-31T06:49:00.000+05:302008-12-31T06:49:00.000+05:30wanted you to knmow my blog moved due to some unfo...wanted you to knmow my blog moved due to some unfortunate circumstances, but I have not stopped writing. For an invite I will need an email address. If you are not comfortable with this that's cool, but it's the only way to keep it private between people I trust online and keep out stalkers and such. Appreciate your support over the years and keep blogging. <BR/>clockworkchris@gmail.comClockworkchrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09889793842709699969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-47562554375734709082008-12-31T05:11:00.000+05:302008-12-31T05:11:00.000+05:30Hi Gautami, I like 'squeaky clean, they proudly pr...Hi Gautami, I like 'squeaky clean, they proudly preen' and 'his wooing going full swing' <BR/><BR/>I'v just jumped on board but I haven't got a ticket yet!Andy Sewinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10023449074796269533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-45040700984203647402008-12-31T02:40:00.000+05:302008-12-31T02:40:00.000+05:30I love the playfulness of this poem. I will see th...I love the playfulness of this poem. I will see the universe in a different way now. (thanks for stopping by and for the invite to Poetry Train).Melodyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05181775494535352497noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-83916551757555640572008-12-31T01:38:00.000+05:302008-12-31T01:38:00.000+05:30..many thanks for "the cosmic whimsy"of .....many thanks for "the cosmic whimsy"<BR/>of the words & a very happy new year! ..Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-6599121798845600812008-12-30T21:48:00.000+05:302008-12-30T21:48:00.000+05:30This is very beautiful... I love that poetry is yo...This is very beautiful... I love that poetry is your passion.. it shows in your work.<BR/><BR/>Thanks for stopping by Brushstrokes.<BR/><BR/>WandaWandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06941735389982354519noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-90066133909807023312008-12-30T12:05:00.000+05:302008-12-30T12:05:00.000+05:30you are so good at things like this! :)you are so good at things like this! :)J. Andrew Lockharthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12567156257114496618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-63425362934786284632008-12-30T09:05:00.000+05:302008-12-30T09:05:00.000+05:30Hi Gautami, this is a very playful poem. Even dur...Hi Gautami, this is a very playful poem. Even during tragedy involving the main characters the sun can still woo and play. I also like the way the stars are doing their preening.<BR/>..Jimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-71306334426319476332008-12-30T07:19:00.000+05:302008-12-30T07:19:00.000+05:30I like that it's like you are saying that the star...I like that it's like you are saying that the stars are caressing the moon...Jillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12871047592501542942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-46854334949210089052008-12-30T05:49:00.000+05:302008-12-30T05:49:00.000+05:30I do so love your way with words. Lovely piece. (I...I do so love your way with words. Lovely piece. <BR/><BR/>(I'm so sorry I haven't visited your blog lately - I've been feeling sort of insular.)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-54356818537017680232008-12-30T04:35:00.000+05:302008-12-30T04:35:00.000+05:30I like the ending and how the moon and the sun are...I like the ending and how the moon and the sun are like loversAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-63032253399859406762008-12-30T02:16:00.000+05:302008-12-30T02:16:00.000+05:30Love the personification you've given the heavens....Love the personification you've given the heavens. So clever and fun!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-26719125459142963712008-12-29T19:33:00.000+05:302008-12-29T19:33:00.000+05:30I like the bits of fun you added to this with the ...I like the bits of fun you added to this with the internal rhyme! A good example of form matching content! You are so good at this!Linda Jacobshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14459940700516084069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-36745359268044014012008-12-29T12:18:00.000+05:302008-12-29T12:18:00.000+05:30I agree with Deborah Godin! Not the austere coolne...I agree with Deborah Godin! Not the austere coolness of space in this poem.Julia Phillips Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15392455413201190775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-89871347225809785332008-12-29T10:47:00.000+05:302008-12-29T10:47:00.000+05:30Absolutely love it! ;)(and I think I will check o...Absolutely love it! ;)<BR/><BR/>(and I think I will check out the Poetry Train!)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-2852234199239979462008-12-29T10:29:00.000+05:302008-12-29T10:29:00.000+05:30I love the play ...the moon, stars and the sun ......I love the play ...the moon, stars and the sun ...so invitingiamnasrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16030794699915000249noreply@blogger.com