tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post8920261586351474852..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: sombre sobriquetsgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger34125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-46861867636362164582010-10-31T17:22:55.417+05:302010-10-31T17:22:55.417+05:30I just love the idea of clouds hoarding up thought...I just love the idea of clouds hoarding up thoughts! As usual brilliant.Jeeveshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02059095696768768954noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-37222602309462010992010-10-23T04:37:02.970+05:302010-10-23T04:37:02.970+05:30"the paper tears,
I watch the words fly away&..."the paper tears,<br />I watch the words fly away" - I can picture these words in flight!OMJhttp://theoldmasonjar.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-20158971858762925062010-10-21T21:37:19.191+05:302010-10-21T21:37:19.191+05:30http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/10/20/thurs...http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/10/20/thursday-poets-rally-week-31-october-21-27/<br />I invite you to attend Thursday Poets Rally week 31 hosted by Jingle!<br />sign in, link in a poem, visit and comment for 18 poets, <br />let me know when you are ready.<br />Thanks a lot.Jinglenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-70881624804083255202010-10-20T19:40:03.528+05:302010-10-20T19:40:03.528+05:30plenty of fun with words. Interesting.plenty of fun with words. Interesting.cyclopsevenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11440123931878867581noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-51474696495671639322010-10-20T08:48:21.357+05:302010-10-20T08:48:21.357+05:30Slick, slack, sleek... I'm your poetry SLAVE, ...Slick, slack, sleek... I'm your poetry SLAVE, because your words are a salve...<br /><br />OK, now saliva is starting, LOL.<br /><br />Really love the way you have with words, G. Peace, AmyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-44300589233639187962010-10-20T08:31:10.146+05:302010-10-20T08:31:10.146+05:30Lovely and creative. I like the images you conjure...Lovely and creative. I like the images you conjure here. I enjoyed your take!The Write Girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01333258283404241827noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-39660417888436928052010-10-20T06:05:34.800+05:302010-10-20T06:05:34.800+05:30Choicest words at play! Good going Gautami.Choicest words at play! Good going Gautami.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-39202499157926466662010-10-19T22:54:24.487+05:302010-10-19T22:54:24.487+05:30Nice! I love alliteration and the imagery in your...Nice! I love alliteration and the imagery in your poem~Pattihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04993186190720192589noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-4088558560347099642010-10-19T21:57:34.392+05:302010-10-19T21:57:34.392+05:30thanks for the chuckle, your play with words trick...thanks for the chuckle, your play with words tricked my mind and i had to laugh. Fun piece.Tammie Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11279605745446513635noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-50394249153575140022010-10-19T14:06:22.224+05:302010-10-19T14:06:22.224+05:30Good play with words...loved reading it... :)Good play with words...loved reading it... :)eyeographyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05508519847517495863noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-11663432390948626482010-10-19T13:13:29.610+05:302010-10-19T13:13:29.610+05:30A slick and sleek compositionA slick and sleek compositionAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-167598255718519462010-10-19T06:08:14.682+05:302010-10-19T06:08:14.682+05:30Gautami I love the imagery in this.
PamelaGautami I love the imagery in this.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-1472949985844862612010-10-19T05:59:35.952+05:302010-10-19T05:59:35.952+05:30Succinct and so well expressed...loved the read. T...Succinct and so well expressed...loved the read. Thanks so much xxChronicles in Redhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03871010749205119404noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-37110288900723292262010-10-19T04:13:12.234+05:302010-10-19T04:13:12.234+05:30ah yes, you 've captured the
joy of writing.ah yes, you 've captured the<br />joy of writing.Cynthiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10256391836026637655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-58780978077706538292010-10-19T02:30:11.771+05:302010-10-19T02:30:11.771+05:30This reads aloud so well. Nicely done.
VictoriaThis reads aloud so well. Nicely done.<br />VictoriaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-18406731680498424072010-10-19T00:25:45.606+05:302010-10-19T00:25:45.606+05:30Title says it all. Wonderfully poetic phrase there...Title says it all. Wonderfully poetic phrase there. Enjoyed this a lot actually. Good job.<br /><br />Regards<br /><br />Luke @ WordSalad<br /><br /><br />http://lukepraterswordsalad.wordpress.com/2010/10/14/abscond/<br />http://lukepraterswordsalad.wordpress.com/2010/08/19/communication/<br />http://lukepraterswordsalad.wordpress.com/2010/06/26/257/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-1923101847138433832010-10-19T00:22:50.807+05:302010-10-19T00:22:50.807+05:30enjoyable read......enjoyable read......Whitesnakehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07681488364720396274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-6660164784265295622010-10-18T23:37:57.531+05:302010-10-18T23:37:57.531+05:30apt poem!apt poem!Jinglehttp://www.jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-35591639288531369092010-10-18T20:51:04.770+05:302010-10-18T20:51:04.770+05:30My favorite lines:
'smooth it over my thighs
...My favorite lines:<br /><br />'smooth it over my thighs<br />my palms leave sweaty marks<br />smudging the words'<br /><br />Really enjoyed where you took the prompt.Julia Phillips Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15392455413201190775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-82324190832984735302010-10-18T20:10:03.169+05:302010-10-18T20:10:03.169+05:30A lovely poem about writing, I could both see and ...A lovely poem about writing, I could both see and feel the moment and really like "I watch the words fly away they will gather from the clouds<br />hoard it all for me"<br />Beautiful :)Bernadinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12021888144880072183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-90137059519399170052010-10-18T19:27:10.094+05:302010-10-18T19:27:10.094+05:30interesting..interesting..Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-39322568600031328272010-10-18T19:23:22.499+05:302010-10-18T19:23:22.499+05:30A fun poem with the alliteration, but it seems ver...A fun poem with the alliteration, but it seems very serious at the same time. Good job!morgannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04295309367485408358noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-10925146337103524622010-10-18T06:42:04.682+05:302010-10-18T06:42:04.682+05:30Love the alliteration! Very nicely done.Love the alliteration! Very nicely done.Teresahttp://razzamadazzle.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-41060462388894823002010-10-18T06:28:54.333+05:302010-10-18T06:28:54.333+05:30A remarkable, powerful interaction with text. What...A remarkable, powerful interaction with text. What words can do. Powerful stuff, friend.SandyCarlsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752798823532580733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-25663401649198374112010-10-18T06:22:53.772+05:302010-10-18T06:22:53.772+05:30A clever post! Awesome work! =)
-WeaselA clever post! Awesome work! =)<br /><br />-WeaselWeaselhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12467584502095433332noreply@blogger.com