tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post8972409574299376212..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: hanging my headgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger31125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-39929733032916500522011-10-25T22:36:28.644+05:302011-10-25T22:36:28.644+05:30Hello.
Masterfully done...even with the dark under...Hello.<br />Masterfully done...even with the dark undercurrent!<br /><br />Thanks for sharing Gautami.<br /><br /><a href="http://mypoetcharm.blogspot.com/2011/10/undress-me-with-your-sultry-eyes.html" rel="nofollow">Undress Me With Your Sultry Eyes</a>The Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00667034322952126127noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-78946425578363389692011-10-24T14:24:40.780+05:302011-10-24T14:24:40.780+05:30Dark, really cool flow. Well pennned.Dark, really cool flow. Well pennned.Adura Ojohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10787703060107491771noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-33752699452007068782011-10-20T00:26:30.254+05:302011-10-20T00:26:30.254+05:30There is a lot in this one which I find disturbing...There is a lot in this one which I find disturbing and yet fascinating. Haunting indeed.Peggyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10811244438243200435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-67690828481233967492011-10-19T20:23:22.069+05:302011-10-19T20:23:22.069+05:30Intriguing. What a swirl of emotions you've pa...Intriguing. What a swirl of emotions you've packed into this!Kellyhttp://www.starsandwillows.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-44886268599145185232011-10-19T20:05:47.779+05:302011-10-19T20:05:47.779+05:30Such honesty in this one - we do long to forgive, ...Such honesty in this one - we do long to forgive, yet some part of us still wants revenge. Which part wins both reveals and shapes who we are.<br /><br />Well written.Traci Bhttp://poemflow.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-25181875591924916182011-10-19T11:28:09.511+05:302011-10-19T11:28:09.511+05:30Macabre at it's best... :)
Cheers,
Arnab Maju...Macabre at it's best... :)<br /><br />Cheers,<br /><a href="http://scribblefest.com/author/arnab-majumdar/" rel="nofollow">Arnab Majumdar on SribbleFest.com</a>Arnab Majumdarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15746493850475907233noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-67670133246188225542011-10-19T03:10:48.717+05:302011-10-19T03:10:48.717+05:30Wonderfully evocative Gautami. You have so many vo...Wonderfully evocative Gautami. You have so many voices and each one is weilded with depth and integrity.<br /><br />ElizabethElizabethhttp://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-14246652019859246562011-10-19T01:00:47.083+05:302011-10-19T01:00:47.083+05:30Powerful and beautiful .... I am delighted the Uni...Powerful and beautiful .... I am delighted the Universe brought you to me and I to you :)Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)https://www.blogger.com/profile/15506538737806033824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-60614559659129427702011-10-19T00:32:51.039+05:302011-10-19T00:32:51.039+05:30Powerful, haunting writing, Gautami!Powerful, haunting writing, Gautami!Mariannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17734900426632493796noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-12743847014519477632011-10-18T23:21:58.307+05:302011-10-18T23:21:58.307+05:30Love the vivid images...Love the vivid images...Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-79853870648768770442011-10-18T13:47:49.852+05:302011-10-18T13:47:49.852+05:30Dead meat inspires dark thoughts...Dead meat inspires dark thoughts...Intellibloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04262938291462934103noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-16595509830099541042011-10-18T09:00:18.835+05:302011-10-18T09:00:18.835+05:30I hang shoulder to shoulder with my siblings
these...I hang shoulder to shoulder with my siblings<br />these girls wear hoops<br />I forgive them for dancing around us<br /><br />CLEVER write! I really like it.Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-37924399466330525162011-10-18T08:45:27.225+05:302011-10-18T08:45:27.225+05:30'do they deserve any better' - An intrigui...'do they deserve any better' - An intriguing piece!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-33478997646891051182011-10-18T08:40:50.404+05:302011-10-18T08:40:50.404+05:30I like this a lot..from working on this prompt it ...I like this a lot..from working on this prompt it has made me consider becoming a vegetarian...this a fine tale of revengeSusie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-88200582630796983012011-10-18T08:39:25.730+05:302011-10-18T08:39:25.730+05:30Some part of your poem sounds as if you may admire...Some part of your poem sounds as if you may admire the hoop wearing,<br />life affirming sisters and another part sounds a tad envious.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-26904065733807096002011-10-18T06:47:23.815+05:302011-10-18T06:47:23.815+05:30amazing.
lovely usage of wordle words.amazing.<br />lovely usage of wordle words.Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05532576755186051550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-14587981280192744932011-10-18T06:47:12.439+05:302011-10-18T06:47:12.439+05:30amazing.
lovely usage of wordle words.amazing.<br />lovely usage of wordle words.Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05532576755186051550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-28411698918521055232011-10-18T00:24:30.101+05:302011-10-18T00:24:30.101+05:30Strong and dark, like good coffee.Strong and dark, like good coffee.Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-77972654627009778342011-10-17T20:37:14.311+05:302011-10-17T20:37:14.311+05:30Gautami, dark and haunting poem. Excellent use of ...Gautami, dark and haunting poem. Excellent use of the words.<br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-20392050462408229362011-10-17T18:43:07.352+05:302011-10-17T18:43:07.352+05:30Strong and deep. Conclusion very powerful...whew!...Strong and deep. Conclusion very powerful...whew!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-85754205680260188432011-10-17T15:12:58.387+05:302011-10-17T15:12:58.387+05:30I, also, like the tension in this.I, also, like the tension in this.Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13494219959077922220noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-53079309976074009202011-10-17T14:16:52.593+05:302011-10-17T14:16:52.593+05:30Such vicious, pent up emotions are on the brink of...Such vicious, pent up emotions are on the brink of bursting! A tension of poetic drama!Gemma Wisemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-28757807386321793922011-10-17T13:57:46.358+05:302011-10-17T13:57:46.358+05:30Overwhelming feelings, a mix of hate, vengeance an...Overwhelming feelings, a mix of hate, vengeance and forgiveness!!Nankahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05428694673909046094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-21432532987804435542011-10-17T11:01:51.299+05:302011-10-17T11:01:51.299+05:30Great poem Gautami, and as a fellow Tree-Hugger,
T...Great poem Gautami, and as a fellow Tree-Hugger,<br />Thanks for commenting on my Sunday Tree last week. I’ve posted a new ‘Tree’ and would like to invite you to write something in response to it – or to one of the earlier tress. The post can be found here:<br />http://writteninexile.blogspot.com/2011/10/sunday-trees-experimental-tree.html<br />Best wishes, IsabelIsabel Doylehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17974989548030799086noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-62962041615460580882011-10-17T08:52:35.541+05:302011-10-17T08:52:35.541+05:30Powerful juxtaposition of images with forgiving th...Powerful juxtaposition of images with forgiving them for dancing, yet calling the bolt down upon them! Which will it be? I think I know!<br /><br /><a href="http://magicalmysticalteacher.wordpress.com/2011/10/16/itchy-feet/" rel="nofollow">My Whirl</a>Magical Mystical Teacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01853272111925075994noreply@blogger.com