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Sunday, March 28, 2010

transient

it is two o'clock-
time when someone else’s love
becomes transiently yours
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18 comments:

  1. John (@bookdreamer)9:43 pm, March 28, 2010

    Hi, I think we exchanged posts from my book review site about 2 years and when I start the random short story site. Small world!

    Agree, the dark hours before the dawn are when you have to face your own companyHere be mine.

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  2. Erin @ Together for Good11:13 pm, March 28, 2010

    Stopping by from Carry On Tuesday-- I love this. I am a sucker for a good haiku. :) I want to know the story here.

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  3. Janet11:22 pm, March 28, 2010

    Nice one! I like the links:-)

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  4. Stan Ski3:02 pm, March 29, 2010

    Not tonight - I'll be watching the football match (6 hours time difference)... Come on City...!

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  5. Lorraine3:29 pm, March 29, 2010

    I can only think soap operas...;)

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  6. Unknown5:17 pm, March 29, 2010

    and it was 2'o clock when I lost 1hr to the summer timezone..

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  7. Andy Sewina8:25 pm, March 29, 2010

    Hi Gautami,
    I planned to meet you in my dreams
    You dreamed you'd meet me too
    No accident of fate or chance
    We planned our dreams
    We chose romance
    Every night at two...

    <3 perhaps?

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  8. Julia Phillips Smith8:49 pm, March 29, 2010

    Is it because you can hear them from the next room?

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  9. sage10:02 pm, March 29, 2010

    What's special about 2 o'clock? AM or PM? nice haiku

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  10. Short Poems10:55 pm, March 29, 2010

    Nice one :)

    Marinela

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  11. George S Batty2:34 am, March 30, 2010

    old Grizz is in awe...so much said,,so few words...nice post

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  12. Ralf Bröker6:58 am, March 30, 2010

    To me it is the term of "someone else's love". This put's the lyrical I into the role of a love-eater. Tough haiku.

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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  13. mia8:46 am, March 30, 2010

    seductively mysterious.

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  14. Unknown8:56 am, March 30, 2010

    specifically unspecific, leaving you wondering, and everyone else *smiling*

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  15. Anonymous10:00 pm, March 31, 2010

    oh yes, 2a knows all of our secrets! Well done

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  16. rdl6:47 am, April 01, 2010

    Very nice!

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  17. one more believer2:04 am, April 02, 2010

    oh man my mind wonders.... possibly a cup of soothing peppermint tea....

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  18. Carry On Tuesday6:47 am, April 04, 2010

    Hi - Carry On Tuesday has a new address. Hope to see you there. Keith

    http://carryontuesdayprompt.blogspot.com/

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