words
stir souls,
awakening heart,
striking mind as flaming darts,
assuring us dreaming never dies.
pen
progresses,
lustrously so,
with expressions
free spirited on paper,
music
playing
rhythmatically
lyrics on the back
jumping within my thoughts
world
born anew,
vision of poets'
sparkle in hands,
imaginings ascending to sky.
Poetry-
salute it as
the sun in the night,
fetching with it only light;
illuminating the lane it walks.
..........................................................................................................................Consider this as a poetry thurday prompt.
23 comments:
Gautami...this is very wonderful!
I especially love...
Poerty-salute it as the sun in the night; illuminating the lane it walks. Beautiful!
You write some beautiful stuff!
Margie
In turn, I trippingly wander this lane, pausing only to fetchingly salute this poeme and Poetess.
Coyly,
Percy
I love how you set this one up! When I was reading it, the rhythm was strong, since my head moved back and forth. Nice!
consider this experiment a success :)
poetry is indeed a sun in the night
(and this is a fine example of it)
"dreaming never dies", yes!
love this piece.
Agree with the others "poetry is a sun in the night"! Very good Gautami!!
I love how you shaped the poem with words and phrasing.
Margie: I wrote how I really about poetry.
percival: Pause, gaze, stay.
andrew: That comment is god send!
floots: I appreciate that you consider it a success.
dnake1: thanks so much. It does not!
pat: Thanks. I love to read you too.
norma: welcome here. Thanks!
oooooh! makes me all tingley! love it.
I love the way you have used the page to lay out your beautiful thoughts. BB
Wonderful poem. The lines, the spacing, the rhythm - it's very beautiful.
Be well!
-Donavan
i love how this weaves through the page, through the mind.
well done!
amazing! had a very good architecture to it!
Gautami--I can see you growing in confidence and power in the short time I've known your work--
love the shapes in this poem, and the thoughts are so strong and clear...
leonie: Ah well! Welcome! Thanks!
sideon: Thanks and welcome. Just one of those things!
polona: Thanks. Next I think I should be reading out loud!
Ghosty: Architecture! Well I never thought like that!
firebird: Thanks. I cringe when I see my earlier works.
I like the construction of this poem! JP
A lovely tribute you've created here!
I loved this poem. I am taking my time to get around Poetry Thursday's entries this week but thanks for visiting me. My favorite stanza was the last one.
Thanks deborah, cate and clockworkchris. I appreciate your visits and comments.
I love this. Words cascade, falling, hitting the page, my favorite way of writing.
I love the phrases and the visual effect you use. I sometimes use a cascading effect in my poetry, too.
Like this phrase "Vison of poets' sparkle in hands, imaginings asccending to the sky."
(I didn't participate in Poetry Thurs. this past week, but I have for other times. Plese check out my archives, by clicking on the Poetry Thursday category on the right sidebar of my blog.)
Thanks anon.
gel: I know you have been visiting me. Sorry I got to you late. I will chk out your archives.
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