Showing posts with label fertile ground poetry. Show all posts
Showing posts with label fertile ground poetry. Show all posts

Thursday, November 08, 2007

at the end of a journey--totally optional prompts



Totally Optional Prompts wants us to write evocative poetry.

I chose a random word from read. write. poem as asked by Jillypoet on her NaBloPoMo page and wrote this 11 line poem. Hope this works for both!


at the end of a journey


you endure an ice-coated carapace,
much like a goldfish swathed by aspic.
heartbeat picking once more to full moon.


rousing too soon onto a gallery of glass,
cavorting dewdrop lets off cold tentacles.
thorns of a plant prickle as you pass.

your voyage outlines obliterated passages

like water wandering in crumbled drains.


skin crumbles into itself, crawling over
veneer of ostensible spirited strength-

giving in, you gaze into vast nothingness.