Sunday Scribblings prompt was dream journey. Infact on Sunday I was on a real journey. Read the the previous post. I wrote this a short while back as this has been playing in my mind. Again a terza rima. It is tuesday but I still post it as sunday scribblings...:D
...................................................................................................Journey within the mind
this is something I do not recognize,
although I am taken over by
intense feeling, none to very wise.
rebounding back to me. In trepidation
I accept, look unseeingly with a sigh.
leaving me with feelings inexpressible-
my tears streaming with exclusion
journey within my mind continues
taking me to places which feel stable.
peace pervading; my mind awaits you.
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26 comments:
amazing...the desires of the heart remain inside, forever.
all its hues-
peace pervading; my mind awaits you...
So glad you did your scrbble - just beautiful Guatami
Thanks for sharing,
Frances
neat lil' poem :)
that was cool.
It will always amaze me, your ability with words and expressing feelings
Hi,
I'm glad something told me to visit your site even though I was here yesterday, to see if you posted for Sun. Scribs.
Wondefully expressing dreams,longings, and hopes of the heart.
lovely
Mind play is a amazing thing, ghost.....
frances: thanks. Isn't it what we all desire?
Inconsequential: That is a terza rima. For now I am hooked to those...
Whitesnake: Words are what I got...
gel: thanks. I visited you and like what you wrote. I will link you too.
kai: thanks girl.
Thanks for your visit. Wow, your poem certainly shows how wondrous a mind can be!
Well done! Loved the inner journey with its many subtle turns and twists.
Thanks for stopping by. I like your poem, it really echoes how I feel at times.
Rose
xo
chiefbiscuit,don and dewyknickers: thanks. Mind does take us on a journey.
love the dream! beautiful
taking me to places which feel stable.
I love that line. I would love to go to a place like that right about now.
A dream Journey
In my opinion
Would not cater to
Teenyboppers
or their minions (you try rhyming with "opinion")
It would feature
rockin' tunes
and screaming solos
for fans in t-shirts
instead of polos
;-)
WOW this is wonderful!
XO
Kristen
Gautami
you have such a wonderful knack for expressing yourself!
This is excellent...lovely!
we can dream (whether they come true or not) and thats the most beautiful thing abt life.
Keshi.
What a lovely poem. I just read about your journey in the previous post, too - which sounded like a peaceful journey as well.
I love the ending!
journeys to ajmer and the mind
you are a well-travelled lady :)
cheers
Thanks writer woman, magiceye, kristen, , margie, keshi, tinker, andrew nd floots! I appreciate your opinions.
pug: You did well. Actually I am not much into rhymed verses unless I write structured poetry.
loved your mind journey.
Thanks for commenting on my blog. I have always enjoyed reading yours as well, although I am terrible at posting comments! Journeys of the heart and mind can be very powerful things...
Wonderful!
I continued the story I began a few weeks ago. You can read it here: "Why Did I Say 'Yes'?"
I really like this poem - the longing and hopefulness - wonderful!
Thanks folks!
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