on a gloomy and windy day
I need an apprentice
(for what you may ask)
someone has to
paint stars in to the gloom,
fill it with glitters;
rewind the wind
to let it flow above
so as to reach the sky
and make it peerless
"I will towel the ground,
let that stranger watch me,
little knowing he is my apprentice"
28 comments:
Yes, someone has to paint stars in gloom.
Beautiful.. painting stars in gloom..yes flowers will dance, seeing them shining in colours..
Love the idea of rewinding the wind and letting the painting show after the curtain of gloom opens... beautiful imagery!
skillful word painting..
I do watch and am no apprentice!
Brillant
lovely words
Lovely poem and wonderful lines
"paint stars in to the gloom,
fill it with glitters
to rewind the wind
to let it flow above
to reach the sky"
Nice imagery created here!!
We always need to fight against that gloom.
What a beautiful poem! Wish I could be a master in that category!
I like the thought of painting stars in gloom. I must remember that next time I feel the gloom setting in. Make it glitter with stars. Beautiful.
Thanks for the visit and the encouragement.
Your words struck me...so much meaning behind these words. Lovely!
Cleaver words!
Wonderfully clever! No victim to strangers.
I love this wonderfully creative poem.
rewind the wind, I love these lines
the most.
you are peerless,
Di
What amazing thoughts you do paint with your words. Impressed. Please have a good start of the new week.
daily athens
I really enjoyed your images in this poem.
Everyone needs a shining star or two in a dark sky...
An excellent idea, Gautami!
that was intense!
one among many really likes your writing. one big roar from Old Grizz
awesome insights.
I need an apprentice, too. What a grand read.
My shortest Carry on Tuesday ever.
I loved this- and what a wonderful idea as well!
Been seeing your name around for some time now..glad I came visiting :)
"rewind the wind" I love it. Well done!
bold reversal!
beautiful images
"to rewind the wind" is an amazing line.
awards/treats 4 u
please join our poetry potluck this Monday, have fun!
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