for peering into her silhouette
if he could only see the color
of her sensuous eyes
her exterior is so pleasing
her wholeness is a rich lyric
wild beauty is no alliteration
yet it resounds within him
every pore of his on fire
the artist in him
calls out to lilting the tresses silently
her silhouette is pouring into darkness
eyes so sensuous, color still a puzzle
light reflects her exterior
into a lyric of richness
"mind saunters, heart shimmers, body smoulders
yet the artist in him can only falter for a little while"
22 comments:
I love the smouldering passion inherent in this!
Beautiful poem! I loved: "her wholeness is a rich lyric." I used saunter in my title, too!
A poem rich in sensuality and sensitivity. I love the sauntering of the mind.
Thanks for taking part in Poetry Pantry. Mine: http://inthecornerofmyeye.blogspot.com/2012/09/cold.html
All very sensual. I sometimes wonder how artists do feel when they paint a nude subject. They must be 'moved'
Lovely poem.
This is very sweet! liked your use of words.
Loved those last two lines -- summed up the "tension" between subject and artist.
Ahh... love this... especially:
wild beauty is no alliteration
yet it resounds within him
every pore of his on fire
Some women have everything going for them, don't they?
Your poem has such a coating of lustrous varnish
As an artist and writer who works from inner vision rather than live model, I've often wondered about the energy and connection that must occur between artist and subject. You've hit on a very likely scenario, and done so interestingly, lyrically.
Oh yes, that's really sensual! You never disappoint!
wild beauty is no alliteration
yet it resounds within him
every pore of his on fire
This is very beautiful... I really like your style and your word choices. You make me fall in love with English all over again!
Love the picture painted here of her wild beauty". You took me there, inside his mind.
Beautifully accomplished, sensuous and lyrical. Especially like those last two lines,
Elizabeth
http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2012/09/16/attempted-alliteration/
You captured such a realistic glimpse into the relationship that may exist between artist an subject. So well done.
Lush and beautifully written!
Sensual and beautiful.
I love poems about passion and romance. I also like the repeat of a phrase, it gives it greater emphasis. A beautiful write!
I like the mirrored image effect here, where the lines early and repeated, yet in a varied order later, offering a new aspect. Great write. Thanks
This piece is rich with sensual imagery and passion! I love it!
"her wholeness is a rich lyric"
beautiful! and i love the ending!
♥
nice - what a great flow
amazing imagery.
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