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my blue dress clings to my body
I want wings to fly away
but the dust holds me to blessed coolness
you unbalanced my moorings
that instant was lost in a moment
I was taken for a ride
but no more gasps
the wind may yet slap against me
snare of my cascading hair will beckon
I will again look out for unlimited eternity
"who deserves what, can anyone predict?"
28 comments:
I know you deserve a round of applause for this...
the wind may yet slap against me - Excellent poem and this sums it up. Well done
well done...wonderful words for this image
whoops- did not see your instructions- here's my url:
http://katheworsley.blogspot.com/2013/03/magpie-158-early-morning.html
I especially love the looking out for an "unlimited eternity".
To have your moorings unbalanced; we've all been there...
I'm enamored with that last question.
Those moments are hard to repeat...let alone an eternity of such bliss.
Bittersweet and beautiful...
agree with Stan and am pulling out a chair to stand on a give you a round of high applause. :) I will keep that blue dress clinging image for a long time... Hmm just occurred to me that today we both wrote of blue dresses in very different contexts - ah sweet synchronicity. Enjoyed this write very much :)
(please if you can bear to do so .. get rid of the capture code - they are such a pain!)...
Decisions must be made. Thanks for sharing, Gautami.
Nicely whirled Gautami. Do you write on sand sometimes? I love to.
I like how this one ended with the view for unlimited eternity...yes, no matter what, we have that. Your write seems to echo mine...another soul who was unbalanced by circumstances.
http://bodhirose.wordpress.com/2013/03/03/tonight/
No human can predict
good or bad that is yet to come
sometimes his dreams and illusions
paint truth but still what is truth?
Who knows it?
well done Gautami....thanks for sharing
Nicely done, oh yes, and she so deserves, oh yes she does!
i really like the tone of this piece - well crafted
beautiful image ..
wish the lady gets a lovely pair of wings soon .:)
Perfectly wonderful spiritual ending..just lovely!
the last line is brilliant and then as well not just who can predict but who decides....
You have a natural talent that impresses me. I am always moved by your words.
Wow. I'm nearly speechless. I truly think this is one of your best, Gautami!
your words flow in this piece..
you unbalanced my moorings
:) truly..
I am here after many days..you remain among my favourite poets..amazing compositions..thanks Gautami..for the magic..
RS
this is beautiful ...
I like the fatefulness in this, Gautami
I liked the line with unbalanced moorings.
=)
unlimited eternity....yes...this is beautiful Gautami!!
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