such a tease in that mirror
with hypnotizing eyesjust that the flesh has a mind of its own
it only listens to lust
such a torture for both our brains
but I am not going to chicken out
my mind trains itself discipline
it is not uniform thought
i am no machine
"let me rub lotion on me
a mundane task in the river of emotions"
21 comments:
Thank the God(s) for "a mundane task in the river of emotins."
I like thinking about the self discipline of the mind...and so true about lack of uniformity. We wouldn't want it any other way.
Love how rubbing lotion (taking action) removes the power of the rumbling thoughts. Well done!
Great to read you again!
oh yes..self discipline required...lovely write..x
Yes our minds and the freedom of of our thoughts are the most important things to hold onto
Nice write. Thank goodness for that lotion, and the self discipline it takes to apply it.
the last two lines are classic...great lines...
interesting description and the last lines are nice..
That lotion must be powerful stuff. It resulted in a fine post...
Powerful lines: "the flesh has a mind of its own. It only listens to lust."
What a great shot. So few of us are one person or even understand our other selves.
Nice how you used those words to make a sensual poem, Gautami.
Pamela
Beautifully penned...an excellent wordle...
http://whenthepenbleeds.blogspot.ca/?zx=d36f092f50b54848
Beautifully penned...an excellent wordle...
http://whenthepenbleeds.blogspot.ca/?zx=d36f092f50b54848
Well done, and I love the closing couplet.
=)
intense !
I really like that remarkable last line...
Beautifully written and I too love the picture!!
So much truth in your words here Gautami. Beautiful writing!
i am no machine-nice words
Perfectly, delicious!
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