in the highwaysubtle is a misnomer
fresh palate hints of sex
toasty thrill of lingering soul
yields but a mix of emotions
speeding tends to the palpitating heart
I burn in the darkness
in the deep stark night
something flickers
everything so silent
except you sitting by the candles
sound of your breathing drives me insane
I close my eyes
my mind travels again on that highway
yet nothing can take away the subtle whiff
of lingering sex. not while you sit so still..
17 comments:
loving the last two lines.... especially nice write..x
Moments that matter and experiences that change us. Very interesting words.
To travel in that togetherness seems interesting enough..
Loving where you went with this and its sexual charge.
I like the lines "I burn in the darkness/in the deep stark night".
I loved how this reads. Sex is such an overwhelming driving force of our emotions colouring every thought.
silent burn,
powerful remains,
glad to see your talent shine.
Sounds like you had a good time!
Silent and moving both, your words are profound!
This is an excellent response to the picture. Every detail resounds.
Wonderfully erotic. Kind of makes me wish I had someone to feel this way about.
I burn in the darkness
in the deep stark night
something flickers
everything so silent...wonderful
Nice composition.
Nicely done. Sensual in a tasteful way. You wrote about desire very well.
I love where you went with this. Powerful write.
Hot and delicious...
Full of heavy emotions. Touchy as well as passionate.
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