Sunday, November 13, 2005

Longings


Filled with thoughts of you
Closed eyes dreaming you
Do you ever think of me?
Do you want to wait for me?
Does it matter I am afar?
So are the sun, moon and stars
Hurts so very deep I know
But I cannot seem to let go.
All that I want right now
To be with you, tell me how
Wishing for us to be together
Intense feelings lasting forever


Wrote this for a writing exercise but have not not posted it. Should I? It does not fare as a great love song though!

4 comments:

Just A Human said...

Gautami,

I guess a mind game is going on within - your poems echos your thoughts.

gautami tripathy said...

Writing is catharsis!

Manoj said...

Heard the same thing about writing our own 'obituary' as well :-)

M.

gautami tripathy said...

Oh,it seems I am getting repetitive!! Must think of smething new! Like, I am just plain crazy.......:)