“Yes.” Five years, two months, 7 days and 10 hours.
“How have you been?”
“Ok.”
“See you around.”
“Ok.” Her heart was breaking apart.
“Momma?” A little boy came running.
“ Is he mine?”
“Yes.”
“Will you marry me?”
“I will.”
They were in each other’s arms, kissing as never before.
15 comments:
Yeah.. stuff of fairy tales.
WO... love story good ending !!
Amazing! Keep writing, Gautami.
Thanks Nayan,Darling and Flickering flame.
Wanted to write a love story in shortest of words!
Did I succeed?
You sure did... but eh.. don't u think this story is a depicting 'him' a bit unromantic, while 'she' has all the best thoughts? ;)
If you read between the lines, you will find he too feels the same way!
Hmmm.. a little bit though :)
Men do not express their feelings! They take a lot of time to open up to emotions.
Amazing!
Sigh! Wish most of the people had your wisdom.
I would say this is one of the best 55 word stories ive read on the blogosphere recently...
Thanks Nayan...:)
Thanks Ghost.....A love story is not what most guys like!
u make it ;***
:)))))))
i love happy endings!
Me too! But life is not always as we want it to be....
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