Poetry for me is a way of living, it comes out of nowhere and I have to write it down. How I write, what I write, I decide. I am not asking you to be judgemental. I am gifted with the ability to see beyond the obvious.
Wednesday, October 26, 2005
Autumn nights............elemental feelings
cool autumn nights desiring of heating up another body
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bathed in cool heat breathless, hair a mess autumn feels like sex
4 comments:
loved it!!! :)
This is a good poem. I never equated autumn with sex--what a metaphor! Glad to meet you and will return!
why autumn nights?
why not dusk or dawn?
and why a body?
why not mind?
i enter your eyes... glide through your imagination and feel the breeze of your thoughts.
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BTW - excellent work of words
My version:
juicy body soft as cushion
every bite sweet as heaven
ah the fruits of nature
i am biting into sex
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Thanks Gulnaaz.
I like it, Manoj.
Thanks eotr, you are welcome to return. And get your friends to. Great party we can have here!
deb, its ok. Thanks. there is nothing to forgive. smiles, please.
Ah Just a human, what can I say.....you are good too...:)
Gautami
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