Poetry for me is a way of living, it comes out of nowhere and I have to write it down. How I write, what I write, I decide. I am not asking you to be judgemental. I am gifted with the ability to see beyond the obvious.
Monday, December 11, 2006
Subterfuge
waltzing impeccably on the limits of time and providence i slice my image into thin wedges.
sashaying flawlessly on putrid flesh of rationale and pledge i sculpt myself as individual yet again.
self is not always easy to find i keep re-reading this and thinking about it (mind you - anything with the word "sashaying" in it has to be good) :) cheers
floots:self is never easy to find. Just when we think we did, it takes a volte face. I used sashaying becos I felt it conveys what I want to. I need the positivity.
plona: yes, we do! I always do...
margie: thanks.
pat: It is supposed to reinforce, not weaken it. I don't know if I succeeded.
9 comments:
self is not always easy to find
i keep re-reading this and thinking about it
(mind you - anything with the word "sashaying" in it has to be good) :)
cheers
don't we do that all the time...
enjoyed.
Great poem!
I really enjoyed it!
Margie
I agree with floots "sashaying" just grabs my attention right away!! I think more deep than thin though...
yeah we all do that dun we!
Keshi.
wonderful -- well said
floots:self is never easy to find. Just when we think we did, it takes a volte face. I used sashaying becos I felt it conveys what I want to. I need the positivity.
plona: yes, we do! I always do...
margie: thanks.
pat: It is supposed to reinforce, not weaken it. I don't know if I succeeded.
keshi: hug you sweetie.
andrew: Thanks.
yeah,"sashaying " always grab my attention. :)
slicing images is more like photoshop, where we can use it to cover a flaw or enhance certain properties. good analogy here. :)
Thanks dsnake1.
Sometimes we have to slice through layered images.
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