Photo Credits: Rick Mobbs
space
aura surrounding me
unseen but built like a wall
intangibility of it pervades you too
you can break bricks
however
how does one demolish something
which is invisible
you can't define the boundaries
yet one can let the other break it
allowing to enter it with own free will
"can any one predict where
chance might lead this encounter?"
18 comments:
I love that painting and your words have me pondering...
I'm reading science into this and I'd love to know the answer to that question. HUG
This poem seems to lead my thoughts to physical and nonphysical things. "How does one demolish something
which is invisible"? Maybe with just a whisper?
those that dare, win.
there are no such things as walls to protect you. Someone somewhere will wall through them and you wont even know it.....
chnace might lead this encounter?
It already has.
invisible boundaries are easily breached with but a slip of the tongue --- i enjoyed this piece - it can go so many different ways --- it's a chance encounter!!!
Very well written (as always). What a powerful way to end it, too.
Glad I stopped by!
~Saoirse
love does break down barriers. Love this poem so much. thanks for visiting me and leading me to it.
:)
I like this - barriers at once both impenetrable and fragile.
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beautifully said...
i can identify with that
"You can break bricks..." Love it.
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sometimes that which we can't see can be destroyed more easily than tangible things. interesting and thought-provoking!
free will...mmm sometimes it is difficult to handle when facing some special encounters! I love your writing!
I really love this. You're an awesome writer, Gautami!
Wow, profound thoughts there!
I think this will be one of those invisible-wall-breaking-encounters ;)
invisible tools can break invisible walls...
love this
space and the invasion or protection of it... yes what a concept. well done!
walls and barriers..allowing to enter... free will... thought provoking stuff g...
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